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Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 4:37 am
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vesta_vesves_star Wow first post >.> <.< I know it's slightly creepy weird but bare with me It all seemed to linger in An endless darkness with awful din Running screaming it did not go Even after we all said no By Apollo's rays they did divine A shot of darkness a taste of time
I really like it.. but I like darker poetry. I think it's much more interesting. You've got good imagry and good rhyme!
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 8:42 am
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vesta_vesves_star Wow first post >.> <.< I know it's slightly creepy weird but bare with me It all seemed to linger in An endless darkness with awful din Running screaming it did not go Even after we all said no By Apollo's rays they did divine A shot of darkness a taste of time
WOW. I loooooove it!! I think I'll save it, but I'll put your screenname as the author smile
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 8:47 am
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Small and Harmless
Small and harmless, one would say. With their dust, and flowers, and feathery wings! Don’t be fooled by what you see. . . Fairies are mischievous things! Obscured by mushrooms, flowers, and leaves, these creatures live in hollow, oak trees! They host outrageous parties; dancing under the moon, stars, the inky sky. Then they sleep all day, letting the sun go by. Fairies are like bothersome pests, that is, if you run into their nests! They’ll pull and tangle up your hair, and attack you so you have no air! Never trusts a fairy’s word. All they want is your milk and bread, then they’ll fly away like a haste little bird! They’ll ravage homes, and eat your goods. You’ll have to case them back to the woods! And all the way, they’ll giggle and banter. They always have fun committing such slander! A warning to you if you bake pies: Watch your goods, or otherwise, all you’ll hear are the flutter of wings; soon enough they’ll be gone in a zing! And you’ll end up like a puppet on string.
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:21 pm
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Lost
Last year everything was stable, This year my world is spinning around. I don’t know when it’s going to stop, It’s like I’ve got no control.
I feel like my life is out of control, There is nothing I can do anymore I’ve walked so far from my path I’ll never get back to it
I can’t believe I’ve lost the way forever, I’ll never get back, I can never find it I’m lost, never to find my way back, How hard I try it‘ll still be the same.
Maybe one day I’ll find my way again, Because everything changes, No matter what everything changes, Time will change anything.
That’s why I’ve changed, I will change, Until the end of time, things will change, The world will crumble and fall, All because of change And one day, before then I will find my way.
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:46 am
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i wonder if i can find any of mine.......
Killer: you canot kill which you did not make you ask for life he gives you death he walks with you in life's dead pathe road ends here he calls to you
JOIN Join the rich, join the proud, join the living, and join the ranks of the dead, make us enemy, make us friends join the ranks of the dead.
live, die join the people of the sky, wish for life, wish for death..
a war of light, a war of sadness, the panic, the fright, the war of life.
living life, living long, hoping for forgiveness hoping not to fall.
join the ranks join the proud till your proud army crumbles and falls.
sadly i made this one to make someone i knew angry.
ImMoRtAl
Are we immortal, are we not? Are we living, are we dead? God gives immortality, is it realy fair? God gives immortality, is it any good? God gives immortality, what if Satin did?
NeW
new life, new world new guns, new wars new damn goverment new world order new problems All over again.
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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:11 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 6:02 pm
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Opaque_Dreams generated a random number between
1 and 1989 ...
329!
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:20 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 9:22 pm
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Lost_Wanderer0916 I'm New At The Whole Guild Forum Thing Especially On Gaia redface but i am a writer... so uh... here goes... The Witches WayAlone and forgotten I hug my book of spells There's nothing more to tell Just a lonely Wiccan sitting in the dark I have no more smart remarks Everyone ridicules me and judges me for what i'm not But there's no deference in everything we're taught What I do is not much deferent form you There are no converts I wish to persue If you cut me I will bleed red blood I don't think i'm such a stude The only deference between us is how we perceive the devine But thats's not a good excuse on why we can't hang out some time I worship the elements and praise the Lord And Lady But we've descussed that already I have nothing else to say Now I hope you will judge another way ..... be harsh.... this was one of the first poems i made and i never got any feed back on it. so yeah.......
Hmmm.. not bad at all. I normally don't say things about poems because I can't write them... but the timing, is it? Pattern? Beat? (beats me.. that thing with the meter or whatever) seems to mix a little from line to line and stanza to stanza, so if you were looking for that, I'd say it's a little off.
Your third stanza, second like.. Not really sure what you were going for on the last word. I'd never heard it, and tried to look it up, but that didn't help. and the "ude" and "ood" sounds are kind of off for the rhyme.
Everything else looks good to me.
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:42 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:39 pm
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