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Love at First Sight

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 10:35 pm


I titled this poem Love at First Sight when I first wrote it. I was laying in bed at UCLA whil my dorm mate was asleep and I couldn't stop thinking about my girlfriend. I hadn't seen her in a month and I had to get her out of my mind, because I was failing my classes. So, now I introduce to you, Love at First Sight.

Love at First Sight

Love at first sight can’t only just be a dream
Because a dream is something made up
A dream is something “fiction”
But the question is; can you believe?

Love at first sight can’t just be a dream
Because if it is, then so is life
Love is a fact that no one can see
But to feel, is something all the more special

To one such as me, I cower in a corner
Deprived of none but such a feeling
And now that she’s here
Oh, boy, how sincere can I be!

I love her, will love her, and have always loved her
I will continue to love her for the rest of my life
I know much about her but I want to learn more
And yet still, I yearn for thee

Oh more, please don’t stop the caress
Please do not deny me
Lust added to greed, filled by the need
To have you as my soul mate, don’t you see?

But do not answer this question for I already know
The answer is as simple as the small honey bee
Please tell me but one thing
Can you love me?

Say yes, oh god, yes
Yes to the heavens and the world
Embrace me in your arms and give forth your warmth
Please, body to body, please say you’ll have me

Love me forever, although it may be a while
I can hold up my end of the bargain
And now that you’ll have me so will I please
For I now feel that need

But alas you gaze down upon my being
But such a sweet enchanting vibration
The aura of your being so seducing
Jade, sweet creamy Jade


I am not worthy of such beautiful eyes
Eyes that pierce my minds eye
I see with my oceans and feel with my heart
Nothing that was seen before can be my art

And with those faithful eyes
Whom I would die for then rather just die
Enchant my body with all of its sins
And make me dance, and sin, sin again

I’ll sin once, maybe twice
I’ll sin again, and then sin three more times
I’ll sin for you when you’re feeling down
And I’ll sin for you no matter what the town

All because I love you, the girl of my dreams
Such a beauty should not be kept but presented
Oh, how I long for your sweet kiss
Such a kiss should be only his

In addition to my continuous story
I must say more, for more is upon me
Because all if right, even the War
All is good, best, o’har

So sway your hips and perk your lips
Tell me what you need
For all I need and all you can see
Is just this boy and his love, like an apple tree

When bloomed I am great, upon these harsh seas
When life isn’t fair you “fertilize” me
You cherish me and care for me and all you need is love
So why not take a chance with me and see if I get the job

Love is everything to me and you mean more than life
So please, pumpkin, honey, don’t leave me
Never ever die
And when the time comes to leave
Our love will never die
PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:28 pm


It was so incredibly conflictive in the beginning, that was the part I loved the most. The second part was just as good, or insanely close.
Loooove.
<3

.Never.Forever.


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 8:42 pm


Why thank you so very much. I see you have something else posted so I'm going over to check it out now.
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