Durrtyboi vs Young G City VOTE!

[Durrtyboi]

16bars no feeding no biting no recycling once you accept decide who goes first  

[Young G-City]

i need some more exposure. G-City'll get atchu *****. I accept  

[Durrtyboi]

Young G-City

i need some more exposure. G-City'll get atchu *****. I accept

ill go first


aye welcome to the haunted house of the punches of your demise/
get ready to be beaten and cry like you have 1000 eyes/
your wack s**t where im from dont fly like mice/
runnin round scramblin you arer s**t like the game of dice/(CRAPS)
white specs on deck this flow is shampoo smooth and rids you of lyrical lice/
flashin flashback get back dont know how to act on hush like ice/
crush you and dust you like a vacuum whats the price/
i used to ghostwrite i got rhymes for nights and nights friday night lights/
all eyes on me you never seen this before cuz its too hot for tv/
so fallback you wish you could be me be easy cuz when i rhyme im beaming/
aimin straight at ya head im doubleteaming cuz this is jus eazy peezy one two threezy/
im the ***** on fire so call me creasy i aint greasy but im slick/
cuttin niggas with precision and fast like a shick/
flick your bic i make my flame come on/
and i spit hot fire til the break of dawn in a millenium never forewarned/
the reality has dawned upon you you cant win/
so go gather up someone elses rhymes to bite and recycle out of the garbage bin/
thats all you are garbage and thats all youve ever been/
gluttony eatin every niggga on dis site is a sin/
im not greedy im jus hot and i love to win/
like a british film ***** your fin/
i aint even gonna waste my time on ya a** and type slow and correctly im quick and deadly/
lethal weapon watch the method of my killer medley/
wake ya a** up like reverly im never gonna be wack/
just like a trick deck you aint got jack/
so step up or fallback get up like ciara now watch my evolution/
my flow is the solution to end all of the lyrical pollution/
rebuke you the truth is what i am you aint know/
you gonna remember the name or get off my jock and stop knockin the flow/
***** i go dumb jus like that so you cant tell me when to go/
mac 11 bust the e-40 anyday so i go pro snitch/
i jus bought a win and threw some ds on dat b***h/  

[Young G-City]

i swear that has to be the whackest s**t ive ever read. this ***** just said "eazy peezy one two threezy" in a freestyle. hahahaha.  

[Young G-City]

feel this.........

Thought I was up against Jay Leno when I saw this niggas chin/(look at his sig)
I just got through servin Maleficent and Tonight's Show ima dish it again/
***** I've seen better lines at the barbershop on my block/
Your ghetto report card "threw some d's" now off 40 and rich boy's cocks/
Please believe im from the place where them crooks roam/
This ***** is a wanna-be thug and soft like the chairs in Brookstone/
When God created me he showed off, just look at the skills i deploy/
Im the cleanest ***** on the block while this lame remains Durrtyboi/
You obviuosly suck, think first before callin out anyone random/
if i ever see you irl my .38's will tag-team ya face in tandem/
the mediocre phrases you call rhymes emberass hip hop/
i predict you flop next week wit no hits like criss cross/
the reason being you have no style and flop together two words/
im careful like noah when he sent out 2 birds/
I scream "******** durrtyboi!!" and dont give a ******** who heard/
Beatin me is impossible like the Raiders' current record ranking third/
***** pump ya brakes for you get laid out like im ironing creased khakis/
My s**t's the bomb like them radical iraqis/
I'll beef wit any ***** say my name ******** im gunnin'/
A lyrical genius like Matt Damon in Good Will Hunting/
Wolverine on steroids couldn't match my ferocity/
The flow's similar to Louisiana containin hot cities/
Im a hustla respect my grind i get off weight like kelly price/
you the opposite of Borat cuz your verse aint "verry nice''/
Half of these rappin gaians are fake which makes you a statistic/
Nefarious Disciples is my clicc whos hotter than me and Ballistic?/(cripniccafolyfe)
Young is omnipresent, everywhere your never gettin away from me/
Truth is you wouldnt be breathin if your mom didnt get c** sprayed from me/
cant believe you think your hot ***** you aint paris hilton/
when i start wailin on ya legs ill have your whole figure tiltin/
im quick wit my fists G-City dont need guns/
but also savage wit a weapon call me Atilla the Hun/
quit frontin on the internet you never ghostwrite, bullshit/
im bein more truthful sayin i ghost-ride your b***h/  

[Graphitty-King]

Durrtiboi:


aye welcome to the haunted house of the punches of your demise/
get ready to be beaten and cry like you have 1000 eyes/
(Um....I guess that made sense?)
your wack s**t where im from dont fly like mice/
runnin round scramblin you arer s**t like the game of dice/
(I guess that made sense too?)
white specs on deck this flow is shampoo smooth and rids you of lyrical lice/
(Made sense.)
flashin flashback get back dont know how to act on hush like ice/
crush you and dust you like a vacuum whats the price/
(eh)
i used to ghostwrite i got rhymes for nights and nights friday night lights/
all eyes on me you never seen this before cuz its too hot for tv/
(Not to mention, corny. But also filler, and nonsense ryhming)
so fallback you wish you could be me be easy cuz when i rhyme im beaming/
aimin straight at ya head im doubleteaming cuz this is jus eazy peezy one two threezy/
(LMAO, ***** are U serious?)
im the ***** on fire so call me creasy i aint greasy but im slick/
cuttin niggas with precision and fast like a shick/
(Filler)
flick your bic i make my flame come on/
and i spit hot fire til the break of dawn in a millenium never forewarned/
(Nice delivery, average line)
the reality has dawned upon you you cant win/
so go gather up someone elses rhymes to bite and recycle out of the garbage bin/
(Crappy build up, average line)
thats all you are garbage and thats all youve ever been/
gluttony eatin every niggga on dis site is a sin/
(Decent relations to other verse, crappy end line though)
im not greedy im jus hot and i love to win/
like a british film ***** your fin/
(LOL, filler)
i aint even gonna waste my time on ya a** and type slow and correctly im quick and deadly/
lethal weapon watch the method of my killer medley/
(Nice delivery)
wake ya a** up like reverly im never gonna be wack/
just like a trick deck you aint got jack/
(I got that one, nice)
so step up or fallback get up like ciara now watch my evolution/
my flow is the solution to end all of the lyrical pollution/
(Um, nice line. U need an aftermath or a build up for it in other lines for it to be affective-hence the pollution part)
rebuke you the truth is what i am you aint know/
you gonna remember the name or get off my jock and stop knockin the flow/
(Filler)
***** i go dumb jus like that so you cant tell me when to go/
mac 11 bust the e-40 anyday so i go pro snitch/
i jus bought a win and threw some ds on dat b***h/
(Delivery nice, average-ish line)



YGC:


Thought I was up against Jay Leno when I saw this niggas chin/(look at his sig)
I just got through servin Maleficent and Tonight's Show ima dish it again/
(LOL, nice)
***** I've seen better lines at the barbershop on my block/
Your ghetto report card "threw some d's" now off 40 and rich boy's cocks/
(Damn, ouch, LOL)
Please believe im from the place where them crooks roam/
This ***** is a wanna-be thug and soft like the chairs in Brookstone/
(LOL,filler)
When God created me he showed off, just look at the skills i deploy/
Im the cleanest ***** on the block while this lame remains Durrtyboi/
(Average delivery, coulda done better with the line)
You obviuosly suck, think first before callin out anyone random/
if i ever see you irl my .38's will tag-team ya face in tandem/
(Average)
the mediocre phrases you call rhymes emberass hip hop/
i predict you flop next week wit no hits like criss cross/
(Filler)
the reason being you have no style and flop together two words/
im careful like noah when he sent out 2 birds/
(Filler, needed better build-up or delivery)
I scream "******** durrtyboi!!" and dont give a ******** who heard/
Beatin me is impossible like the Raiders' current record ranking third/
(Average, don't refer to football for a line, LOL They can always change)
***** pump ya brakes for you get laid out like im ironing creased khakis/
My s**t's the bomb like them radical iraqis/
(LOL,filler)
I'll beef wit any ***** say my name ******** im gunnin'/
A lyrical genius like Matt Damon in Good Will Hunting/
(Didn't see that movie, filler, LOL)
Wolverine on steroids couldn't match my ferocity/
The flow's similar to Louisiana containin hot cities/
(Filler to the fillest)
Im a hustla respect my grind i get off weight like kelly price/
you the opposite of Borat cuz your verse aint "verry nice''/
(LOL, average also. But that was funni)
Half of these rappin gaians are fake which makes you a statistic/
Nefarious Disciples is my clicc whos hotter than me and Ballistic?/(cripniccafolyfe)
(Filler)
Young is omnipresent, everywhere your never gettin away from me/
Truth is you wouldnt be breathin if your mom didnt get c** sprayed from me/
(Damn, hit him hard. Average though)
cant believe you think your hot ***** you aint paris hilton/
when i start wailin on ya legs ill have your whole figure tiltin/
(Average)
im quick wit my fists G-City dont need guns/
but also savage wit a weapon call me Atilla the Hun/
(That made sense)
quit frontin on the internet you never ghostwrite, bullshit/
im bein more truthful sayin i ghost-ride your b***h/
(Damn, LOL Nice)


Final Judgement:

Yeah, this battle was average at best. Neither very impressive. Durrtiboi attempted some multis or like multiple ryhming. Failed, LOL He made a lot of nonsense ryhming, a lot didn't fit. Other lines made sense but were very average. I found a couple like-able lines but not enough to make up for some of the corny s**t I found. YGC had a lot of filler, he focusted on word play, but it wasn't that impressive. It was there though. Ur delivery needed a lot of work, the material was decent but the way U said it was kinda average. On a level of insults, they hit a little hard, itz just that they were said in such an amatuer way. But due to the corny a** lines I found in DB's, vote goes to YGC.  

[Young G-City]

the crimson chin, like on fairly oddparents  

[Graphitty-King]

Young G-City

the crimson chin, like on fairly oddparents

LOL, what about him?  

[Young G-City]

Graphitty-King

Young G-City

the crimson chin, like on fairly oddparents

LOL, what about him?

nothin its just big. whee  

[Durrtyboi]

Graphitty-King

Durrtiboi:


aye welcome to the haunted house of the punches of your demise/
get ready to be beaten and cry like you have 1000 eyes/
(Um....I guess that made sense?)
your wack s**t where im from dont fly like mice/
runnin round scramblin you arer s**t like the game of dice/
(I guess that made sense too?)
white specs on deck this flow is shampoo smooth and rids you of lyrical lice/
(Made sense.)
flashin flashback get back dont know how to act on hush like ice/
crush you and dust you like a vacuum whats the price/
(eh)
i used to ghostwrite i got rhymes for nights and nights friday night lights/
all eyes on me you never seen this before cuz its too hot for tv/
(Not to mention, corny. But also filler, and nonsense ryhming)
so fallback you wish you could be me be easy cuz when i rhyme im beaming/
aimin straight at ya head im doubleteaming cuz this is jus eazy peezy one two threezy/
(LMAO, ***** are U serious?)
im the ***** on fire so call me creasy i aint greasy but im slick/
cuttin niggas with precision and fast like a shick/
(Filler)
flick your bic i make my flame come on/
and i spit hot fire til the break of dawn in a millenium never forewarned/
(Nice delivery, average line)
the reality has dawned upon you you cant win/
so go gather up someone elses rhymes to bite and recycle out of the garbage bin/
(Crappy build up, average line)
thats all you are garbage and thats all youve ever been/
gluttony eatin every niggga on dis site is a sin/
(Decent relations to other verse, crappy end line though)
im not greedy im jus hot and i love to win/
like a british film ***** your fin/
(LOL, filler)
i aint even gonna waste my time on ya a** and type slow and correctly im quick and deadly/
lethal weapon watch the method of my killer medley/
(Nice delivery)
wake ya a** up like reverly im never gonna be wack/
just like a trick deck you aint got jack/
(I got that one, nice)
so step up or fallback get up like ciara now watch my evolution/
my flow is the solution to end all of the lyrical pollution/
(Um, nice line. U need an aftermath or a build up for it in other lines for it to be affective-hence the pollution part)
rebuke you the truth is what i am you aint know/
you gonna remember the name or get off my jock and stop knockin the flow/
(Filler)
***** i go dumb jus like that so you cant tell me when to go/
mac 11 bust the e-40 anyday so i go pro snitch/
i jus bought a win and threw some ds on dat b***h/
(Delivery nice, average-ish line)



YGC:


Thought I was up against Jay Leno when I saw this niggas chin/(look at his sig)
I just got through servin Maleficent and Tonight's Show ima dish it again/
(LOL, nice)
***** I've seen better lines at the barbershop on my block/
Your ghetto report card "threw some d's" now off 40 and rich boy's cocks/
(Damn, ouch, LOL)
Please believe im from the place where them crooks roam/
This ***** is a wanna-be thug and soft like the chairs in Brookstone/
(LOL,filler)
When God created me he showed off, just look at the skills i deploy/
Im the cleanest ***** on the block while this lame remains Durrtyboi/
(Average delivery, coulda done better with the line)
You obviuosly suck, think first before callin out anyone random/
if i ever see you irl my .38's will tag-team ya face in tandem/
(Average)
the mediocre phrases you call rhymes emberass hip hop/
i predict you flop next week wit no hits like criss cross/
(Filler)
the reason being you have no style and flop together two words/
im careful like noah when he sent out 2 birds/
(Filler, needed better build-up or delivery)
I scream "******** durrtyboi!!" and dont give a ******** who heard/
Beatin me is impossible like the Raiders' current record ranking third/
(Average, don't refer to football for a line, LOL They can always change)
***** pump ya brakes for you get laid out like im ironing creased khakis/
My s**t's the bomb like them radical iraqis/
(LOL,filler)
I'll beef wit any ***** say my name ******** im gunnin'/
A lyrical genius like Matt Damon in Good Will Hunting/
(Didn't see that movie, filler, LOL)
Wolverine on steroids couldn't match my ferocity/
The flow's similar to Louisiana containin hot cities/
(Filler to the fillest)
Im a hustla respect my grind i get off weight like kelly price/
you the opposite of Borat cuz your verse aint "verry nice''/
(LOL, average also. But that was funni)
Half of these rappin gaians are fake which makes you a statistic/
Nefarious Disciples is my clicc whos hotter than me and Ballistic?/(cripniccafolyfe)
(Filler)
Young is omnipresent, everywhere your never gettin away from me/
Truth is you wouldnt be breathin if your mom didnt get c** sprayed from me/
(Damn, hit him hard. Average though)
cant believe you think your hot ***** you aint paris hilton/
when i start wailin on ya legs ill have your whole figure tiltin/
(Average)
im quick wit my fists G-City dont need guns/
but also savage wit a weapon call me Atilla the Hun/
(That made sense)
quit frontin on the internet you never ghostwrite, bullshit/
im bein more truthful sayin i ghost-ride your b***h/

(Damn, LOL Nice)


Final Judgement:

Yeah, this battle was average at best. Neither very impressive. Durrtiboi attempted some multis or like multiple ryhming. Failed, LOL He made a lot of nonsense ryhming, a lot didn't fit. Other lines made sense but were very average. I found a couple like-able lines but not enough to make up for some of the corny s**t I found. YGC had a lot of filler, he focusted on word play, but it wasn't that impressive. It was there though. Ur delivery needed a lot of work, the material was decent but the way U said it was kinda average. On a level of insults, they hit a little hard, itz just that they were said in such an amatuer way. But due to the corny a** lines I found in DB's, vote goes to YGC. rofl i feel ya on my verse this was a bullshit verse i had lyin around so i decided to put it to the test but i got a kick outta those comments tho yea i thought about it way too much i didn't let it flow like i shouldve done  

[Young G-City]

wait a minute, his chin prolly aint that big . the pic was taken from under him and he got his lips pressed up. but if it wasnt.....DAYUMN!!!!  

[Durrtyboi]

Young G-City

wait a minute, his chin prolly aint that big . the pic was taken from under him and he got his lips pressed up. but if it wasnt.....DAYUMN!!!!

no my chin is not very big im not sure if these will help

http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/index.php?mode=view&p=5721679  

[Graphitty-King]

ok, that can be forgiven, LOL  

[Durrtyboi]

Graphitty-King

ok, that can be forgiven, LOL

anyway...  

[Young G-City]

Durrtyboi

Young G-City

wait a minute, his chin prolly aint that big . the pic was taken from under him and he got his lips pressed up. but if it wasnt.....DAYUMN!!!!

no my chin is not very big im not sure if these will help

ok]http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/index.php?mode=view&p=5721679

ok i see, its not big. but for the purpose of my opening line it worked, jea!