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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:05 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:09 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:36 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:16 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:37 pm
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MistuhFieryCat Masamune no Hi It was supposed to be funny. A joke. But, nobody thought of it as a joke. Do you mean the first description? Here's what I thought of the first sentence. Want of talk good?I see three possible errors here. Three is an unusually high number of mistakes in a description about a literate guild, so I wondered if this could have been intentional. It could've have been done so for comic effect, some sort of an "oxymoron." Since it was advertising a literate guild, it was pretty funny to see a description with errors. Anyway, here are the mistakes I saw: arrow Of course, the "of." arrow Shouldn't it be "well" instead of "good?" arrow Isn't it more proper to start the question with "Do you..." I'm not sure about these, but that's what I assume to be the mistakes. I think you've over used a word. razz
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[~~Bakky~~] MistuhFieryCat Masamune no Hi It was supposed to be funny. A joke. But, nobody thought of it as a joke. Do you mean the first description? Here's what I thought of the first sentence. Want of talk good?I see three possible errors here. Three is an unusually high number of mistakes in a description about a literate guild, so I wondered if this could have been intentional. It could've have been done so for comic effect, some sort of an "oxymoron." Since it was advertising a literate guild, it was pretty funny to see a description with errors. Anyway, here are the mistakes I saw: arrow Of course, the "of." arrow Shouldn't it be "well" instead of "good?" arrow Isn't it more proper to start the question with "Do you..." I'm not sure about these, but that's what I assume to be the mistakes. I think you've over used a word. razz Sorry. sweatdrop
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