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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:28 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:10 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:32 pm
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LunaticBelle I'm not that good, so please cut me some slack sweatdrop . However honesty is appreciated. My heart is lost within this fog Can you help me to find it? The cold hard rain is relentless My heart of ice may shatter Numbing me to your warmth I feel so small my voice is lost If you stumble upon my heart While you wander through the storm Please Don't break it
Don't worry about it, your poem is excellent. As long as you can feel some sort of emotion in a poem that's what counts. Anything can really be a poem.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:53 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:55 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 1:23 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 11:22 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 8:43 pm
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