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 Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 10:56 pm
How many hurt
From these toils I see
How many cry
From those bleeding
You seem to just walk
Away with your pride
And leave me here
To breathe no more and die
Who the heck are you
To say who I am
I want out of here
From your sick little game
These bleeding walls will hold
What you cannot
To hold me again
And tell me those lies
Those lies they just
Make me laugh more
Cause no one believes
The fool that let me go
They all see you now
They see who you are
They see that you are
Feared by yourself
Who will fear
When fear is fearing
When those things in your head
Seem to actually exist
I lay back and watch
Watch you sit in your head
Watch you cry from the pain
Take it like I did, fool
This is nothing compared
To what I went through
Went through with you
It's nothing
That demon laughing is
Only showing you dead
Showing you that
This entire thing came from my head
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 3:45 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:33 am
Typical one-dimensional emo poem.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:39 am
Ezra Pound Typical one-dimensional emo poem. And emo I am. There is no denying it.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:53 am
EmpathicPrince Ezra Pound Typical one-dimensional emo poem. And emo I am. There is no denying it. You could at least fix the one-dimensionality.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:48 pm
Ezra Pound EmpathicPrince Ezra Pound Typical one-dimensional emo poem. And emo I am. There is no denying it. You could at least fix the one-dimensionality. One dimensionality?
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:21 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:11 pm
I'm not a big fan of emo poems. ...but I write emo poems... I can't help it, though.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:45 pm
Yeah, I write emo poems all the time. *is emo* My mind just thinks like that. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 8:12 am
Personally, I liked it. I thought it was deep and had meaning, and I am very suprised that it just popped into your mind. All my poems that are like that kinda are blah.... LOL
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