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Alone (Part 2)

Radio Chaos

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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:07 pm

Physical Pain hurts on the outside.......

As the story moves on
Since you've been gone
I've been sad all along
Listening to my favorite song

I hope you don't mind
If you would be kind
Saying sorry, my question line
Saying yes, my answer to find

I say sorry a lot
but it seems forgot
I love you a lot
But my chances are shot

I know that towards the end, it starts to lose it's thought. But, I still like it!

........but emotional pain hurts everywhere

Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:21 pm

I liked the ending the whole thing had a flow that made me want to know more of what was behind your thoughts as you wrote it.! I just got the feeling that there was so much more to the story. That we don't know about! I really liked it.