OptimisticallyPessimistic
I did like it. How a person holds themself back. But still, I think you were doing that in this poem! To me it just seems unfinished. Although that could mean that it just needs one tiny detail, something you overlooked while writing? Anything. Otherwise it is quite real. Bravo!
I was actually making it up as I went. I had some thought into it and it was always that I could do more to it, but I like it the way it is. The undoneness part of it, to me, gives it something that I can't explain.
Thanks for the compliment!!!
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