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 Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:16 am
I’m making this up as I go along,
So forgive my insanity if this goes quite wrong.
But I’m bored to tears with whatever I’ve done,
So I thought, for a laugh, I’d have some fun.
I have no idea what I’ll write about,
Who knows what utter nonsense I’ll try to spout.
I suppose I’ll just write about stuff that’ll rhyme,
After all, a poem without rhyme is simply a crime.
Some may argue that I’m wrong with that claim,
Some poems don’t rhyme and have still achieved fame.
Well, I just find it an easier task,
When the poem has rhymes coming thick and fast.
To be honest, I’m more of a storyteller,
I never really saw myself as a poet feller.
But today I decided it was about time,
I sat myself down and started a rhyme.
I think I need to find a new word for rhyme,
I’ve already used it in this poem five times.
Perhaps a change in subject is required,
But when it comes to topics, I’m not that inspired.
Maybe it’s best if I just put down my pen,
But as I’m on a computer, it would be a keyboard then.
How does one put down one of those?
(I’m getting fed up: I think I’ll stick with prose)
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:24 am
Well, the poem says it all: I was bored one day, and so I decided to write a poem. However, I was too tired to think of a subject, so I simply made it up as I went along. I think it turned out rather well.
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:15 am
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:25 am
biggrin Thanks!! sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:35 am
You seem to be a talented writer. That was a cute piece. Made me smile as I was reading along.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:31 am
I don't usually like poetry that much: I prefer writing stories, but this is my favourite out of all the poems I've written, simply because it is the perfect way of explaining myself. This poem is me: someone unsure of what they're doing, but tries to have fun along the way.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 1:08 pm
Isaac Asimov was more of a storyteller, too. He said in an editorial in his Science Fiction magazine some interesting things about poetry. Right here.I love light verse.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 11:43 am
I'm happy this is getting some decent feedback. blaugh
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 3:26 pm
I'm going to show this to my Engish teacher, she'd love it!
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:38 am
Wow... I can't believe I've got people wanting to show their TEACHERS!! I'm not sure if that's good or bad, but it kind of makes me feel... SPECIAL. smile
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:47 pm
Thats pretty awesome. It would be an okay rap, too!
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:11 am
Sorry, but I can't stand rap. But I appreciate the thought. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:14 am
Wow...that's how I feel when I'm trying to write...^.^
Good job.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:05 am
It's not actually planned either, this poem. It is, genuinely, my thoughts. I simply tweaked some of the words afterwards to make it rhyme. This is me. This is the problem I face when trying to think about new ideas. Pure Wolfie Kid. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 8:16 pm
Wow, I must say that the poem you wrote is very good and it made me smile. It is true though, it is how most poets feel when trying to write a poem. This is an insipre to me for I am a poet.
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