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 Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 8:59 am
Perfect life, just enough;
Perfect love, not so much.
Perfect games, exactly right;
Perfect wins, not one all night.
Perfect love of perfect lust;
Perfectly blind, perfect trust.
Perfect perfections of perfect mistakes;
Perfect corrections from perfect fakes.
Perfectly dead perfect lies from
Perfectly still perfect eyes.
Perfectly watching our perfect mistakes;
Perfect silence from perfect fakes.
Perfectly fake perfect tears,
Perfectly falling from perfect years.
Perfectly killing their perfect lives,
Perfectly falling in perfect demise.
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 9:33 am
Where on earth do people get the idea that monotony is good?
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 9:56 am
Hmmm... an interesting if not disturbing piece of work... quite deep...
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:16 pm
I so loved it. And monotony ISN'T ALWAYS BAD!!!!!!*glares* Do not put a damper on a poet's soul.
It was perfect in everyway, if you'll excuse the pun. mrgreen WAY TO GO!!!!!!!!!!
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