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Quick Emo Poem

HarlequinGoddess

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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:49 pm

Not my style, but I thought it was fitting for my mood that day. I found it via a friend on myspace.com.

"When you're left with only a bullet, I'll bring the trigger & a promise to pull it.
I'll be the end of everyone who's ever entered your life & taken pieces out of it.
I'll give you enough time to regain your composure..
To reconstruct a heart that's torn apart from over-exposure.
I know forever isn't long enough to forget
The faces & places that played out your tragedy."

Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 6:28 pm

While good do not us &'s in your poem. It draws away from it.

Hirashio

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Frankendoll.

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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:40 am

Yeah, try not to use '&' in your writing.

And by titling it 'emo' you've opened a Pandora's Box, I swear. xd

Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:37 pm

I love the poem. It shows a deep kind of friendship and sympathy. I, personally, like the use of '&' in your poem because when I write poems at home, I tend to use that symbol. The word 'and' seems more final, I guess, than the symbol '&'. If you were submitting it to a contest, I would use the word 'and' simply because it is more proper than '&' is. I can't stand it when I'm at school writing things down and someone criticizes me for using '&' instead of 'and'.