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 Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 3:24 pm
Feel free to point an laugh.
I'm not your adverage
tell-me-what-to-think
kinda girl. No,
I march to the pulse of
a different meter(maid)
and even she's confused.
Sorry, darling
I'm not looking for a
build-me-up relation-
(ship).
They're all ply-
wood, and for just once
I'd love to see a brass
doorknob
floating out to sea.
(Captianed by a disgruntal
metermaid of course.)
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 6:55 pm
That's pretty cool, I like how you have a couple of words in parenthases too.
Here are my favorite parts
I march to the pulse of
a different meter(maid)
and even she's confused.
I'd love to see a brass
doorknob
floating out to sea.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:42 am
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