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 Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:51 pm
S’est Levé…
De ma Main au vôtre
A touché le Visage…
De mon Dieu…
Un acte de la Bonté…
N’est jamais Perdu…
S’est Levé…
Un beauté Wonderous…
Il est Simple…
Mais ainsi Complexe…
Il des prévoyez Nous…
Il procède nous…
Nous sommes Perdus à Lui…
Mon s’est Levé…
Il partage mon Amour…
Je Vous le donnent…
Un Marque de l’Amitié…
Un Marque de l’Amour…
Il est Amour…
Nous ne poisons pas Comprendre…
Notre s’est Levé…
Pour nous, un Fleur Simple…
Un Fleur Simple…
Il Nous déplace…
Un Symbole de l’Amour…
Un Symbole de Beauté…
Nous sommes s’est Levé.
French. Yep.
The Translation is below.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:54 pm
A Rose…
From my Hand, to Yours…
Has touched the Face…
Of my God…
An act of Kindness…
Is never Lost…
The Rose…
A wondrous Beauty…
It is Simple…
But so Complex…
It foresees Us…
It proceeds Us…
We are Lost to It…
My Rose…
It shares my Love…
I give it to You…
A Token of Friendship…
A Token of Love…
It is Love…
We cannot Comprehend…
Our Rose…
For us, a Simple Flower…
A Simple Flower…
It moves Us…
A Symbol of Love…
A Symbol of Beauty…
We are the Rose.
Anglais. Oui.
La traduction est au-dessus.
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OptimisticallyPessimistic
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 9:01 pm
That was lovely. Very moving.... crying I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 5:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 7:28 pm
Very nice! biggrin
I don't want to sound like a mood ruiner if I say there are some errors in the French text, but very nice anyways! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:23 pm
I loved it! For more than one reason.
1) It really was beautiful.
2) I actually understood it! (I take French in school.)
3) I've written poems in French before, and it truly is just the right language to use sometimes. cool
Le poème était beau. Vous êtes très créatif. smile
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P.S. I'm no expert, but I think there might be some mistakes... I still understood it though. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:36 am
Merci, Je adore` la poésie
Nice poem, I understood some of the french since I too take it....
Isn't the s'est supposed to be c'est? Thats the main mistake I noticed
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:52 pm
It's beautiful and put together well. Good work.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:07 pm
Ah, well, see I used a dictionary to translate it, and so I couldn't get the grammar right some of the time. Ah well. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:14 pm
All mistakes aside, I loved it. ^^
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