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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:20 am
This is a poem I wrote not long ago. Please comment if you read it.
Thin Masque
Cloaked in darkness
Dressed in starfields
my eyes green as the new leaves
piercing through the shaded reality
No tears, only pride now
I've learned to keep emotions at bay
Cause on the inside I'm shattered
A damage done a long time ago
I seem distant
my mother wonder what is wrong
when her oldest child
remain cold without a feeling visible
I'm the one who have to be strong
the trusted cliff
the unbreakable heart
But the truth is an other one
I am torn on the inside
My sould cowering
My heart shattered many times
The cold is only a facade
A thin masque
it will break
if there is one drop to much
When the calmnss crack
a beast is set free
turning on you
fighting desperately
In my calmness and serenity
I stand strong
A cliff of support
but on the inside there is a sould in despair
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 7:02 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:32 pm
It has nice flow to it. I have to say. but the only thing i would suggest is to buy a thesorus (i'm sorry i really can't spell) or go to rhymezone.com it is a really great site for definitions, synonyms, rhymes and everything. its really good though.
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