A poem I wrote for a certain girl I know. At any rate, I'm curious as to what people think of it.


Those Eyes

It was a day of sun and warmth,
And yet this spirit felt cold
An emptiness still abounded within,
This soul of mine seemed torn and old.
Then I met a girl I had yet to know
And I saw cheer within those eyes.

As time wore on, my soul grew warmed,
Her smile and cheer infected me,
I found myself wanting to be with her more
For she was quite good company.
I came to want her presence
And wished to see those eyes.

Her touch had kindled my passion’s flame
And these fires burn for her only.
I held my feelings snared inside,
Always in embrace with her, I wished to be.
My mind was consumed by her sweet form
Wishing to be greeted with those eyes of hers.

For her with eyes like the summer, all beauty and truth,
This love has become so effeminate and sweet,
These feelings for her, she now does indeed know
And I come to hope soon, that by a kiss we might greet.
I am held by this love, so pure and true,
And a smile I hope to bring to those eyes.

Oh, my sweet darling, I was the brooding night and you were dawn;
Saving me, for I was forlorn,
And in your light, your embrace, I am reborn.
Kiss me once and I shall surely melt and die,
Kiss me twice and I will never leave your side.
Those eyes, I see them, they pull me in,
I know in them I’ll be lost and never found again.
I cannot stop gazing into those eyes.