i want to battle

[L0rde]

whoever replies make the rules and go first  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

il battle u but not rite now  

[L0rde]

A2DaMFK

il battle u but not rite now

coo. set tha rules then go  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

i meant tomrow  

[L0rde]

A2DaMFK

i meant tomrow

aight well wenever u ready im right here  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

I got him scramblin i kno he feel the pressure to cheat
But ill handle him cant use a ruler to measure my heat
I can rap slow or fast ***** wateva suits ya
But best beleave ima drop the beat down on ya like a produsa (producer)
Plz beleave im far past nuetral
Ill kill ya in the present past and future
Lunch room a** ***** let ya mama pack the paper bags
Ill leave ya all slow and retarded like when ur computer ******** rertard get a tutor f**
U wanna fight ***** i say lets
U a p***y ***** sendin internet threats
I'ma Man eatin ***** jus like t-rex
Go and pop like zanex
Raps not ur callin ***** go and have hand sex  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

5 bars or less
Those the only rules  

[Eclipse The Righteous]

A2DaMFK

5 bars or less
Those the only rules

u posted 7 bars...  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

Ok then 10 bars my fault i didnt count i assumed besides i waz in a rush...He aint respond yet so its all good
Thnx 4 tellin me tho  

[L0rde]

A2DaMFK

I got him scramblin i kno he feel the pressure to cheat
But ill handle him cant use a ruler to measure my heat
I can rap slow or fast ***** wateva suits ya
But best beleave ima drop the beat down on ya like a produsa (producer)
Plz beleave im far past nuetral
Ill kill ya in the present past and future
Lunch room a** ***** let ya mama pack the paper bags
Ill leave ya all slow and retarded like when ur computer ******** rertard get a tutor f**
U wanna fight ***** i say lets
U a p***y ***** sendin internet threats
I'ma Man eatin ***** jus like t-rex
Go and pop like zanex
Raps not ur callin ***** go and have hand sex

sry i was late kid, but yo flows is constipated*/
im fast gunnin like bb's, u caint see me u dialated**/
but thanks for tha hatin cause i luv it/
i spit hot shyt off the top like an oven/
open up and git shoved in. im burnin this *****/
bring em out. leave no reasonable doubt like i learned it frum jigga/
a real *****. i'll let the ruger dump and make the muller jump off ya wrist/
***** u aint shyt. im a pitt, u just a flee on my d**k/
and when them shots holler like rottweilers it'll really make em tic***/
wit out the toc. told father time gimme a second/
robbed him for his clock like "yea tht'll teach em a lesson"/
time waits for no man unless u in my proffesion/
BrownPaperBagBoy reppin the west like a legend****/
ready wit weapons. leave a whole in his heart like depression/

*constipated= he caint flow
**BB is a former member of the group dialated people
***tics are insects tht are found on dogs and other animals
****a legend is used on a map and usually has the for cardinal directions on it like west  

[IceyPimp15]

sry i was late kid, but yo flows is constipated*/
im fast gunnin like bb's, u caint see me u dialated**/
(lol 6/10)
but thanks for tha hatin cause i luv it/
i spit hot shyt off the top like an oven/
(3/10 This is a cliche'd rap line...oven lines are lame nowadays)
open up and git shoved in. im burnin this *****/
bring em out. leave no reasonable doubt like i learned it frum jigga/
(7/10 Not a bad line)
a real *****. i'll let the ruger dump and make the muller jump off ya wrist/
***** u aint shyt. im a pitt, u just a flee on my d**k/
(Fleas on my d**k? 4.5/10 Overused. Made common since used by Lil Wayne on the It's Me Bitches (remix))
and when them shots holler like rottweilers it'll really make em tic***/
wit out the toc. told father time gimme a second/
(That holla/rottweiler s**t is familiar...think Cassidy used it occasionally 6/10)
robbed him for his clock like "yea tht'll teach em a lesson"/
time waits for no man unless u in my proffesion/
(WHAT PROFESSION U IN? ***** THIS IS s**t. 4/10)
BrownPaperBagBoy reppin the west like a legend****/
ready wit weapons. leave a whole in his heart like depression/
(4/10 That legend line was stupid...a legend tells what symbols used on a map mean...compasses tell directions)

Overall your verse was....uhhhh...what are the words I'm looking for...mediocre. U seem to b a new gangsta rapper who is talented in similies...Ur average was around a 4.9...lmao. The sad part is that even with that 4.9, u mutilated ur competition. Note he's a noob who's beginning to get this rap thing so losses r 2 b expected. He will get better. Azhjfgjhgf keep practicing you'll get better over time.  

[CripNiccaFoLyfe]

@icy lmao im mad u fucced up the ***** name like that  

[L0rde]

so who won?  

[CripNiccaFoLyfe]

you did  

[Eclipse The Righteous]

personally not tryna start something but i think both were garbage. again no offense to those that would get mad over a disappointment