I wrote this poem some time ago, for an English homework. My teacher said that it was really good, but I thought I should let you people read it and give me comments about what you think. So here it is:
My garden can fit in your pocket,
My garden can be framed in your locket.
My garden can make you feel calm,
My garden can be your bath balm.
My garden can make you feel bright,
My garden can take away your plight.
My garden can light your spirits,
My garden is eternal in these lyrics
My garden can be framed in your locket.
My garden can make you feel calm,
My garden can be your bath balm.
My garden can make you feel bright,
My garden can take away your plight.
My garden can light your spirits,
My garden is eternal in these lyrics
