[CRIT] Please critique my character!

[Miidnight Melody]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Rakshasa - Demon
Looking For: Anything and everything! Especially the natural ability the Rakshasa has a lot of abilities so I wasn't sure . . .
Quest Link: Link!  

[Bronze Coffee]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Lester Chesterfield - Demon
Looking For: Crit and Stamp
Quest Link: Here  

[Sweet Orphy]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Alice Garnett - Ghost
Looking For: Anything really
Quest Link: Link  

[The Voice of Time]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Wanderer - Ghost
Looking For: Everything please, I need help with making him as bipolar, disconnected, yet able to hold a conversation with someone (if the situation calls for it) as possible. I know it's quite an interesting mix but, if his personality is tweaked enough I know it can be possible! Also anything else that you deem necessary for tweaking is alright as well vuv The only thing I ask is that you please quote me or I might miss the reply. PMs work as well <3
Quest Link: Hiroshi vuv  

[emgeal2]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster - Skinwalker
Looking For: This is my second character I've designed for TiH (the first one is still a quest and I think I might scrap him. Is there anything that stands out as fun, or not fun to RP with about this character? Do you get an idea of who she is?
Quest Link: Link .

I hope it's okay to post an enrollment character here. I just want to set myself up with a good character to start because I'm still not 100% on the world (I've read about 80% of the material. Everytime I think I've read everything I find a new set of cannon information.)  

[Aazhie]

Crit and Stamping Please!
Character's Race: Subspecies - Demon
Looking For: Crit on everything BUT Fear/Natural Abilities are weakest!
Quest Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=24221039  

[Andraia]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Giant Black Chicken - Monster
Looking For: General Crits. I feel pretty solid about this character (she's been kicking around for about three years, so I've had a lot of time to mull her over) but I want to make sure she's still up to code. Being that most of her details were hammered out and made canon compliant back in 2011, I wanted to make sure that I didn't miss any details that will need to be updated.
Quest Link: Pipelle  

[DraconicFeline]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster - Tree
Looking For: Crit, Updated her before the event because she really needed it
Quest Link: Here  

[Viva Viola]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster
Looking For: Crit on everything really.
Quest Link: linku  

[molly8972]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Demon- Raum
Looking For: Crit on everything- need to see if concept is still good
Quest Link: here  

[Sunflower-Seeds]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster Subspecie - Exams Monster

Looking For: Crit on everything! I'm not sure how I'd work out this idea to fruition, but any help that you can offer would be amazing! First time quest here, so please let me know if I'm doing anythign wrong!

Quest Link: Here!  

[Andranis]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Leucistic Grecian Sphinx - Monster
Looking For: Everything except race
Quest Link: Link to your quest.  

[robot kitten]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Undead- Pricolici (undead werewolf)
Looking For: everything. Tis my first quest and not sure what to have and what to expand on or cut back on....
Quest Link: Kenta the Pricolici  

[jackiee153]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Jackalope-Monster
Looking For:  Just overall crits. I've gotten lots of comments of his species and unique background, but is there something that I need to fix?
Quest Link:  Bartholomew Blackhorn