Profile Application and Acceptance

[Cute Things In Jars]

Redneck Messiah

your starting rank would be Adpet, though while training people, they recieve the bonuses as if you were master rank  

[Quaylan]

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Full Name: Yip Man
Nicknames: Ip Man
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Birth date: October 1st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Earth Kingdom
Rank: Trainee
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Personality: Yip is a peacful being he doesn't try to fight unless it's completely unevitable, however this doesn't mean he is a pansy. He also very calm and some might say laid back as well.
Take on battle: Attack and Defend
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100lbs.
Build: Very agile, athletic, and lean
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Complexion: Tan
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Relationships: Mom and father
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Food: Roast Duck
Drink: Tea
Color: Green
Animal: Bears
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Food: Sweets
Drink: Sea water
Color: orange
Animal: none
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Finish later.

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Elemental Affinity: None.
Specialized Bending: None
Weapon Class:
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Secondary Weapon Class:
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Name: Sun Lu
Species: Raven Eagle
Abilities: Mainly a companion, but he can be used to fetch things.

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Wing Chun

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

• NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
• SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
• EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES  

[Somnis]

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Full Name: Kaiten Hatsuko Onodera
Nicknames: [Kai // Kaiten]
Notable Title: None
Unofficial Titles: [Revolution № 9 // Kakumei // The Revolutionist]
Gender: [Female // ♀]
Age: [Nineteen // 19 // XIX]
Birth date: [Feb. 24 // II-XIV // 2-24]
Orientation: [Heterosexual // ♀♂]
Nation: Fire Nation
Rank: Trainee
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Personality: Kaiten is alert and careful at all times, and constantly monitors the body language of people around her. She often is the first person to jump into battle. She has learned to trust no one and constantly be on edge, because there truly is no way to tell who is friend from who is going to seal a demon monster inside of your body. Some call her manipulative, and the word "b***h" has been thrown around a bit when describing her. She isn't afraid to do something unusual to get what she wants or what she needs, whether it's using her looks or breaking fingers. Kaiten has a tendency to cause conflict. Picking fights, taunting, and arrogance are habits of hers. Her aloof demeanor has granted her few friends in her lifetime, keeping her cocky and mysterious. She has a deeply sarcastic nature, and has no tolerance for mistakes. Kaiten has a tendency to jump into situations and get herself involved, and is known to be manipulative, twisting the words of others and getting them to do her dirty work.
Physical Description: As a whole, Kaiten is a seductress. Whether it's her curvy frame, her enticing crimson eyes, or the velvet purr that is her voice, everything about her draws people in. Her whole persona is based off of the aura of lazy beauty that she exudes. Her long hair is waist length and the golden color of the morning sun rising over the dunes. Her skin is a pale, creamy ivory color; a dragon tattoo covers her entire back. Her eyes, however, are different. Almost feral-looking, Kaiten's eyes are the crimson of dying roses. Of spilled blood.
Behavior In Battle: Kaiten has a history of jumping the gun, so to speak. She tends the be the first to jump into battle, attacking with quick, cold precision, often even before the opposition has the chance to counter.
Theme song: I'm Made Of Wax, Larry, What Are You Made Of?, by A Day To Remember
All I Want, by A Day To Remember
You Should Have Killed Me When You Had The Chance, by A Day To Remember
If It Means A Lot To You, by A Day To Remember ft. Sierra Kusterbeck
Have Faith In Me, by A Day To Remember
A Toast To The Future Kids, by Emarosa
Height: [160 centimeters // 63 inches]
Weight: [48.1 kilograms // 103 lbs.]
Build: Slender // Curvy // Athletic
Hair Color: Champagne blonde //
Eye Color: Crimson //
Complexion: Fair // Flawless //
Outfits: Kaiten dresses practically, always ready for combat. She is usually found in a shirt, a skirt, and simple pants. Her shirt is simple, white cotton edged in black, cropped to above show her midriff in order to both allow movement and keep her cool. Her crimson skirt was handmade by her mother before she left home, and is really two panels of soft, flowy fabric that have been sewn to a belt that ties at the waist, adorned by a Fire Nation emblem to decorate the tie. Her white pants stretch several inches below her knees, clinging to her legs like a needy spouse, and feature black hemming. She is often barefoot, and always seen wearing a robe outside of combat. This robe is slightly oversized, and made of fine white silk, featuring the kanji for "revolution" (革命; kakumei embroidered in black thread within a circle on the back. The robe is edged and lined in crimson silk, and once had a belt of the same material, which has long since been discarded. Despite her sometimes tomboyish nature, her makeup is always carefully applied, and she is always seen wearing jewelry, though this is for sentimental reasons. She wears a brace on her left elbow to prevent hyperextension and protect her from injury. A black leather glove is always on her right hand, stopping at her wrist, and she wears a forearm protector on the same arm.
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Relationships: None
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Food: Anything vegetarian
Drink: Water // Wine // Cactus Juice
Color: Blood red //
Animal: Shirshu
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Food: Meat // Any dairy
Drink: Milk
Color: Brown //
Animal: Any kind of bug
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There was no real tragedy in her past. There was only choices. Kaiten was raised by parents that were luxuriously wealthy, the oldest of seven children born to a Fire Nation nobleman. But there was always something different about her, something that separated her from her family that was often in the midst of the Fire Nation social circle. She was never interested in origami or social events or clothes, or normal things. She didn't want to be dressed like a china doll and paraded around like a prized animal. She wanted to fight. She wanted to expand her horizons, rather than living a sheltered, shallow life the way her parents did. She started by making a name for herself during her years in school by displaying a prodigious grasp of firebending. When she was fifteen, she left her home to travel the world and expand her horizons. She has not returned since.

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Elemental Affinity: Fire
Specialized Bending: Lightning Bending [Aspiration]

Weapon Class: Melee
Weapon Name: None
Weapon Description: A handheld fan of standard size and style, the paper has been replaced by metal, the edges sharpened to be like a razor.
Weapon Location: Strapped to her right thigh

Secondary Weapon Class: Melee
Weapon Name: None
Weapon Description: Standard, in terms of length and style, the fibers of her whip have been interwoven with razor wire.
Weapon Location: Tied to her belt

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[Pending Approval & Rank Up]
Name: Kyo
Species: Shirshu
Abilities:
-Neurotoxin saliva
-Augmented sense of smell
-Sightless

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The Art of Dancing Flames: Firebending Techniques
•None yet

• Personal Style U/C
• Style Specialties
• Effectiveness  

[DGwar]

Somnis

I just want to say I love the effort put into this profile.
However, the only problem I have right now are the titles, which aren't exactly notable at the moment, however I don't want to say change them. Maybe make a line right under that for unofficial titles just to assist in my OCD moments.
Lastly, your whip makes me want to deny it. It seems a little over the top for a firebending trainee. I'll ask Snuff and get back to you but for now just cross it out and maybe get it at higher ranks?

Do that stuff and I can approve it right now.

Again, sorry for accidentally murdering your profile.

 

[Somnis]

DGwar

Somnis

I just want to say I love the effort put into this profile.
However, the only problem I have right now are the titles, which aren't exactly notable at the moment, however I don't want to say change them. Maybe make a line right under that for unofficial titles just to assist in my OCD moments.
Lastly, your whip makes me want to deny it. It seems a little over the top for a firebending trainee. I'll ask Snuff and get back to you but for now just cross it out and maybe get it at higher ranks?

Do that stuff and I can approve it right now.

Again, sorry for accidentally murdering your profile.

Thank you ^^ This is a character that was recycled from a guild that died.
All of the edits are done ^^

And don't worry about it. It's the exact reason I have backups of everything ^^  

[DGwar]

Somnis

Approved. Have fun RPing.

 

[Quaylan]

DGwar

Somnis

Approved. Have fun RPing.

What about my profile I changed the rank to trainee?  

[DGwar]

Quaylan

Your profile is still missing information.
There's some coding errors.
That's pretty much why I didn't even say anything about yours yet.
You don't even have a background.
Fix that stuff and I'll look at it.

 

[Quaylan]

DGwar

Quaylan

Your profile is still missing information.
There's some coding errors.
That's pretty much why I didn't even say anything about yours yet.
You don't even have a background.
Fix that stuff and I'll look at it.

That's idiotic I shouldn't need a background story in order to start rping also their isn't a code error. In addition, you should've quoted my profile saying you looked over instead making wait all this time not knowing why you didn't say anything.  

[call_me_ishmail1]

Quaylan

DGwar

Quaylan

Your profile is still missing information.
There's some coding errors.
That's pretty much why I didn't even say anything about yours yet.
You don't even have a background.
Fix that stuff and I'll look at it.

That's idiotic I shouldn't need a background story in order to start rping also their isn't a code error. In addition, you should've quoted my profile saying you looked over instead making wait all this time not knowing why you didn't say anything.

There is a coding error. There is an open size tag.  

[DGwar]

Quaylan

You had no background why would I even look at it?
Make a background or don't RP.
And you have coding errors in an open size tag.

And then stow the attitude...
After that's all been done I'll look at your profile.

 

[Quaylan]

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Full Name: Yip Man
Nicknames: Ip Man
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Birth date: October 1st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Earth Kingdom
Rank: Trainee
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Personality: Yip is a peacful being he doesn't try to fight unless it's completely unevitable, however this doesn't mean he is a pansy. He also very calm and some might say laid back as well.
Take on battle: Attack and Defend
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100lbs.
Build: Very agile, athletic, and lean
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Complexion: Fair
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Relationships: Mom and father
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Food: Roast Duck
Drink: Tea
Color: Green
Animal: Bears
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Food: Sweets
Drink: Sea water
Color: orange
Animal: none
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Yip Man wasn't born with bending ability, so he depends on his Wing Chun skills in order to protect him self including the people he loves. He left his family in republic city in order to better his self and learn the aspects of each bending to increase his knowledge of bending and Wing Chun.

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Elemental Affinity: None.
Specialized Bending: None
Weapon Class:
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Name: Sun Lu
Species: Raven Eagle
Abilities: Mainly a companion, but he can be used to fetch things.

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Name:
Description:

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Wing Chun

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

• NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
• SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
• EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES  

[DGwar]

Redneck Messiah

Looks good, approved.
Go RP.

 

[DGwar]

Quaylan

You weren't approved.
So posting your profile before approval is basically a giant no-no.
You have absolutely no character depth. You're ripping off a movie character. And quite frankly, your laziness in creation is making me want to permanently deny the character.

I'd like to ask you to actually bring some originality to the character or don't bother.
But hey, if you want to rip off a movie character go head.

I'll say approved just because I don't want to deal with it, and if you want to make a character with no depth or originality that's your problem.