The dawn of life

[Typyro]

Remember to use quotes for words and nothing for actions, write your roleplaying like you're writing a short story for school.


Example: Dark walked into the town and killed everybody in sight. He licked his blade, the blood tasted better because itwas not his own. There were some people still alive that he couldn't see before. They had witnessed the entire slaughtering, he turned to face them, "Oh, hi." He said as he continued to lick the bloody blade.

Okay, try to roleplay with sense, when you say he killed everybody in sight, and then have him say "Hi" it just doesn't work. Who was he saying "hi" to? Try to give as much possible information about what is happening. Also, make sure you explain everything, and use quotes for speaking and nothing for actions.  

[DeDarkKnight]

Typyro

Remember to use quotes for words and nothing for actions, write your roleplaying like you're writing a short story for school.


Example: Dark walked into the town and killed everybody in sight. He licked his blade, the blood tasted better because itwas not his own. There were some people still alive that he couldn't see before. They had witnessed the entire slaughtering, he turned to face them, "Oh, hi." He said as he continued to lick the bloody blade.

Okay, try to roleplay with sense, when you say he killed everybody in sight, and then have him say "Hi" it just doesn't work. Who was he saying "hi" to? Try to give as much possible information about what is happening. Also, make sure you explain everything, and use quotes for speaking and nothing for actions.

well abt the people still alive part i don't quite like because i was hoping for my character to get into fight  

[Typyro]

Okay then so you were saying "OH hi" to the wall? oh how silly of me i didn't notice that.... No i'm messin' but if you kill everybody.... YOu can't say "hi."  

[DeDarkKnight]

Typyro

Okay then so you were saying "OH hi" to the wall? oh how silly of me i didn't notice that.... No i'm messin' but if you kill everybody.... YOu can't say "hi."

erm like some warriors  

[Typyro]

Try to make your roleplaying make sense.  

[Scarletnoob]

Plz do or I will delete all your posts and ban your from my subfourm.  

[Typyro]

I am trying to train him.  

[Scarletnoob]

and Im trying to enforce my rules but its you guy's lucky day this guild is under new managment and I am no longer this fourms mod you shall get one shortly I belive and while this happens Im going to get a refund of my money If I do not then I shall take actions agiasnt this guild and keep on trying till I win.  

[Typyro]

Scarletnoob

and Im trying to enforce my rules but its you guy's lucky day this guild is under new managment and I am no longer this fourms mod you shall get one shortly I belive and while this happens Im going to get a refund of my money If I do not then I shall take actions agiasnt this guild and keep on trying till I win.

A refund from what?  

[Scarletnoob]

Reality was being tossed around and now Im back as your mod so yea continue  

[DeDarkKnight]

Scarletnoob

Reality was being tossed around and now Im back as your mod so yea continue

why is it always toss around?  

[sasuke of magenkyou]

Character: Ryan
Gaian name: sasuke of magenkyou
rp name: Ryan
race: death keeper
nickname: Ry
Magic: soul collect, soul contain, soul deliver
Weapon: scythe
Wisdom: dark and spirit
Appearance: A human version of the grim reaper
Bio: born from hell as a soul collecter
Death List:the first devil
Vengance list:anyone about to die
Age:100000
Personality: warrior type personality
Special:soul collector general  

[Shadow Naru]

Character: Shadow
Gaian name: shadow_naruto2
rp name: Shadow
race: dragon
nickname:
Magic: unknown
Weapon: duel swords(in pic)
Wisdom: aura
Appearance:

Bio: his past is unknown, but he wears a cloak.
Death List: unknown
Vengance list: don't have one
Age: 18
Personality: level head, kind, caring, mysterious  

[Shadow Naru]

Shadow was wondering around a forest. this place doesn't look familiar, where am I? he thought as he walked.