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Z_Temple

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:09 am


umm...im more into photo right know(the pencils hate me i pick one up and my mind goes blank @_@;; ) so what do you think of my photo i messed around with on the computer. the originall one was just the baby in black and white with a blank background.
this is the bigger(way bigger) version of it to show a little more detail i guess
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=8fy2lcl&s=1

this is a smaller version of the bigger one
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im goin to scan a bunch of pics in later im just in my room lookin around on my walls(becase there LITERED with old drawings XD )
PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:05 am


Kangaroo S.T.U.
[Shimizu-chan]
Bribble
Really cute.

And yeah, the guy is supposed to be leaning.

Sorry I haven't been able to post. I'm on a visit to another country, so I won't be able to post for a long time.
Oh, he is leaning? :O

I feel that it looks like he's going to fall on her...try to make his body more natural, and less still. :3
what do you think are some good ways to make it look less still?
Um...
-thinks-
Well, I think the his arms, neck, and upperbody seems all to straight...maybe if the arm was bent a little...
It looks like he's putting most of his weight on his right leg...
>x<
Gah, I don't know how to explain it...!
Sorries...:[

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:14 am


Little Miss Paranoid
umm...im more into photo right know(the pencils hate me i pick one up and my mind goes blank @_@;; ) so what do you think of my photo i messed around with on the computer. the originall one was just the baby in black and white with a blank background.
this is the bigger(way bigger) version of it to show a little more detail i guess
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=8fy2lcl&s=1

this is a smaller version of the bigger one
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
im goin to scan a bunch of pics in later im just in my room lookin around on my walls(becase there LITERED with old drawings XD )
intersting!

I like photoshop too 3nodding

hmmm I'm not sure what to think o__o it's kinda surreal
Like

Negaverse baby! or something dark and space-ish
lol I guess the stars make me think that way. XD

:3 If you weren't going for anything in particular and just playing with the filters and effects that's what I get from the image. Was there anything in particular you were going for?
PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:20 am


Kaenai
You should go to the HP website and download the driver for it again. Most likely there's an updated version. It shouldn't matter, but sometimes you might have to reinstall it. I actually have an HP psc 1210, and i've had to reinstall mine just last Friday. o:


okay... i've got this drawing that i just did, and i wonder what you guys think? i know the neck is all wonky in the back there, and a couple of other things went wrong that i can't identify (because i'm not looking at it right now) offhand...

what do you think? >.>;;

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The background is mighty spiffy! It might be just a smidgen too dark. The highest area of contrast is between all three of them were the darkest part of the background is surrounded by the characters. 3nodding High contrast often pulls the eye towards it. Maybe toning down the background just a little bit and uping the contrast on the figures themselves will make them pop into the foreground more 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 11:13 am


http://peach-muffinz.deviantart.com/art/WIP-for-Commision-72261436

Just a WIP I'm working on...Her face is quite distorted, yesh rly...

I want feedbacks on anatomy, proportions, etc. :3

edit: Ok, I realized that her thighs are too short...>x<
PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:03 pm


Kangaroo S.T.U.
Little Miss Paranoid
umm...im more into photo right know(the pencils hate me i pick one up and my mind goes blank @_@;; ) so what do you think of my photo i messed around with on the computer. the originall one was just the baby in black and white with a blank background.
this is the bigger(way bigger) version of it to show a little more detail i guess
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=8fy2lcl&s=1

this is a smaller version of the bigger one
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
im goin to scan a bunch of pics in later im just in my room lookin around on my walls(becase there LITERED with old drawings XD )
intersting!

I like photoshop too 3nodding

hmmm I'm not sure what to think o__o it's kinda surreal
Like

Negaverse baby! or something dark and space-ish
lol I guess the stars make me think that way. XD

:3 If you weren't going for anything in particular and just playing with the filters and effects that's what I get from the image. Was there anything in particular you were going for?
umm kind of...when i was little i would see things like spots, shadows, and stars and my color vision was messed up so i guess i was just going for kind of a last look at life thingy XD i dont know if that makes any sence XD
but i was kind of oging to inocent with the stars but giving it a twist with the glowing shades(thats why some lines are white). sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:19 am


[Shimizu-chan]
http://peach-muffinz.deviantart.com/art/WIP-for-Commision-72261436

Just a WIP I'm working on...Her face is quite distorted, yesh rly...

I want feedbacks on anatomy, proportions, etc. :3

edit: Ok, I realized that her thighs are too short...>x<


3nodding it's looking good so far!

I like how you've got the shoulders and the hips turned X3
biggrin pretty sure you could push that pose more. If you haven't started to finish it already maybe play with that idea, or in another picture possibly. You've got a good thing going there. 3nodding

the arm behind the body seems a tad long o.o I think it could be shortened a little bit.

biggrin You've got some nice line weight going

:3 it's going good so far
do you have another iteration?
PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 4:19 pm


iteration? O.o

-is confuzzled-

What's that?

eIitebanao


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 5:34 pm


[Shimizu-chan]
iteration? O.o

-is confuzzled-

What's that?


I'm guessing what he means is a new version of it. Personally I don't think I can give you much of a critique without a finished sketch.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 11:25 pm


surprised yeah I was wondering if you have another updated version of it, since you said it was a WIP

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 3:57 pm


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> w< I'm in the process of coloring this avatar

biggrin any advice on coloring so far? @____@ I know some of you guys really have an eye for that kinda jazz heart
PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 12:18 pm


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loma816197
This is kinda my first time posting here, so here it goes.

well I made this for a friend and I kinda was hoping people would be nice enough to critiqeize mine or 2...:

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t318/loma816197/Drawings/FashionsArtWork.jpg

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t318/loma816197/Drawings/Drawing1.jpg

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t318/loma816197/Drawings/puppydogluv1234.jpg

Thanks!
~loma816197 whee


ooh I see that you're not afraid to draw hands in that one pic there XD
3nodding good good
Keep drawing hands biggrin they are complex but with practice you'll have them down nicely

For your lines I see you got a lot of jaggedness. X3 Don't be afraid to make long strokes instead of many short ones when drawing out a line. If it isn't what you wanted it to be, lay down another line.

biggrin drawing lightly will help so you can make many light lines then darken the one you'd like to keep and erase the rest!


Thanks so much!
Sorry it took so long to answer, I haven't been able to get to the computer. sweatdrop

le petit crayon


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 12:08 pm


http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t318/loma816197/Drawings/DreamAvis.jpg
Here are 2 drawings, one I did when I joined gaia and the other a day ago.
The one on the right was my second avatar drawing ever since I joined gaia.
The left was of my two accounts, the left person was a dream avatar for my
mule, and the right was on a current avatar.

Enjoy!
~Loma816197

Edit:
Loma816197's Edit
Help Me... I know the hands are wrong, but is there anything else?
PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:56 am


i judt dtsrted drawing again i need to get bsck in the swing of things i drew this picture and i know it looks bad but hey how can i not make it look bloody horrible?User Image

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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 2:33 pm


here are some links to my pics^^
..
so what do you think?? sweatdrop

http://dieubastard.deviantart.com/art/Ramen-fox-77206949
http://dieubastard.deviantart.com/art/Naga-worrior-77305104
http://dieubastard.deviantart.com/art/Historical-fashion-Ancie-Egypt-71189553
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