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 Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:53 pm
-pout- can no one on this earth give serious poetry criticism??? UGH I need a constant critic really badly, I mean, I love giving poetry to my girl friend and close friends to read, but they say "I like it" and I say "why" and that isnt to be annoying its just to get a sense of what the actual good points of the poem are
I tend to beat good critiques out of my readers with a barrage of questions sweatdrop
now I just need a REALLY good critic who gives me all of the specifics, good and bad.
Any volunteers, anyone think they have the skill ninja
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:58 pm
CHALLENGE ACCEPTED pirate http://ibegyourpudding.deviantart.com/thats my deviant art! It needs some serious critique-age Just browse through my gallery and if your REALLY up for a challenge, try reading my short story "first wives" its about extra-marital lesbian affairs -GASP-
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:02 pm
your deviant art isn't loving me... I can't even read hte first paragraph cuz it's covered by... a thing!
halp
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:03 pm
Daydream Delivery your deviant art isn't loving me... I can't even read hte first paragraph cuz it's covered by... a thing! halp a thing???? wait what gonk
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:05 pm
problem solved! the thing will not move but I copy/pasted the hell out of it!
*commences in reading*
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:08 pm
Thank you dearest 3nodding
but now i have to run errands scream scream scream scream
but ill be back
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:12 pm
I'd help, but I'd just probably end up being all obsessed. Like "OMG I LUUUUUUUUURVE IT!!!!! biggrin " And then I'd probably be able to tell you exactly why I loved it, but that probably wont help too much.
Not to mention, I'm on a sugar rush right now. I wouldn't be able to focus. ]:
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:19 pm
im fat too much chinese food xp
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:18 pm
I read your poem "I-40 to Wherever" and it's pretty good it really seems to paint a picture in my head especially when you mentioned Crossville Ancient decaying barns water towers rusted bridges and southern hills. I think what you were trying to say was expressed well. I'm not the best critic but I think I will read more.
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:44 pm
Muffy, I love that you ACTUALLY know the places I talk about! And your not bad at critiquing, I'd totally appreciate it if you became a regular critic
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:37 pm
ibegyourpudding Muffy, I love that you ACTUALLY know the places I talk about! And your not bad at critiquing, I'd totally appreciate it if you became a regular critic Okay I will if you critic my photography. http://missmuffy.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 9:00 pm
Jusт lιke тнε moon
ι'll sтεp вεsιđε
I tried to submit a poem but it's not showing up. Anyone know why?
αnđ lεт youя sun sнιnε
ωнιlε ι Ғolloω вεнιnđ
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