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[K-DUCK]

nighty night you guys! MWAH.  

[Daydream Delivery]

Devil of your mind

When I grow up I want to be as cute as Shell Shell.

redface  

[Daydream Delivery]

"What's Wr-"
Gavin stood tall. "How could you do it?"
Jessi shook with anger and fear. "Charlotte Elizabeth Bowman. Come here now"
The little girl looked confused as she took a step forward. Gavin turned to her and pulled her into a tight hug.
"How could you take away my daughter?"
Bill stepped forward. "Listen... Just give us the girl and then we can talk about this..."
"No." Gavin stepped back and kept Charlotte close. "i want her."
"Mommy?" Charlie clutched her bear and her father shushed her.
"You told me she was a miscarriage!" he shouted.  

[Hiroran]

{ xd }

 

[Liquid_Lullaby]

Im off to! HAY! Make it to 1700 so we can have another thread! I really dident care about the gold, i just wanted a place for a good convo! lol, and i got it! (Even if i was alittle hyper and probly REALLY annoying...i blame the chocolate! I am actually REALLY mature and aged byond my years! lol, i just dont come off that way when i am making friends and being nice! Mature me isent always nice...)  

[Daydream Delivery]

emo  

[Hiroran]

{ Hmm.....Not a lot on today.. }

 

[Daydream Delivery]

Heavy paws bounded towards the girl. No owner was in sight as Jessi found herself face to face with a caramel dog with a brown face. The English Mastiff nudged at her hand and jumped up to lick her face. Jess smiled a bit and bent over slightly to pet the humongous animal. His tail wagged and a look of utter content was plastered on his canine face.
A familiar voice came then.
"KLUTE?!"
Jessi stood there for a moment. Pure terror touched her eyes.
"Klute!" came Gavin's voice again. Close. Clear.
"Klute?" Her dog. Gavin's dog. She couldn't let the tyrranical man keep him... Klute was hers! a present... "C'mon, Boy. Let's go."

***

"Klu-ute!" The voice was too close. Jessi felt the low rumble in the matiff's throat like a dagger through her heart.
"Pleas No. Shh!"
The dog's bark rang out and the girl's will shattered.  

[Hiroran]

{ Wow your good at writing o.O!! }

 

[Daydream Delivery]

lol not really.
I cut those parts out of my novel thingy ma jig.
I cut out a lot of things........
and I don't like the name 'Jessi' as much as I once did...I need to change it, I think  

[Hiroran]

{ Well..At least you write better than I can xD }

 

[Tetsudai-chan]

uhhhh ninja  

[Guru Drak]

So what to do in the last 15 point something pages?  

[Daydream Delivery]

lol i'm practically rewriting the whole story line...
it's intimidating.


"Daddy?" She was sixteen years old. The affectionate name would have been lost long ago in most families.
Gavin, now at the age of thirty-seven, smiled. "Yes, Charlotte?"
"Do I have a mother?"

lol sometimes it's difficult for me to follow my own writing.

I have a crazy train of thought.  

[Hiroran]

{ Lol I have to write a 35 page novela..and I don't know how to write it anymore.. }