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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:52 pm
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Manda_Tifa Leyla Giselle Leyla Giselle I redid my sketch for Maxblackrabbit. The original: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/404187/ The redone version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/473916/ I apologize if this seems like a cry for attention, but I would highly appreciate some sort of criticism. This is going to Maxblackrabbit afterall, and I don't want it to seem low grade. I like the redone version better, but the hand she seems to be leaning back on appears to be a lot bigger than her other hand...you might wanna fix that. Other than that, it's looking superb! 4laugh Noted and thank you. I'll try to fix that tomorrow when I work on it. biggrin
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:01 pm
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Leyla Giselle Manda_Tifa Leyla Giselle Leyla Giselle I redid my sketch for Maxblackrabbit. The original: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/404187/ The redone version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/473916/ I apologize if this seems like a cry for attention, but I would highly appreciate some sort of criticism. This is going to Maxblackrabbit afterall, and I don't want it to seem low grade. I like the redone version better, but the hand she seems to be leaning back on appears to be a lot bigger than her other hand...you might wanna fix that. Other than that, it's looking superb! 4laugh Noted and thank you. I'll try to fix that tomorrow when I work on it. biggrin Uhm her boobs are really big... like size of her head big. But I could understand where that might be to match the character. Only thing I would do is try to bring up that one foot so you don't crop up the toes where you have it. Right now it looks distracting and like you just ran out of room, not an intentional crop. That and the way she is leaning on her one hand looks strange, though that is probably because we can't tell what she is leaning on yet. Other than that I think it looks good so far.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:11 pm
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Krissim Klaw Leyla Giselle Manda_Tifa Leyla Giselle Leyla Giselle I redid my sketch for Maxblackrabbit. The original: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/404187/ The redone version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/473916/ I apologize if this seems like a cry for attention, but I would highly appreciate some sort of criticism. This is going to Maxblackrabbit afterall, and I don't want it to seem low grade. I like the redone version better, but the hand she seems to be leaning back on appears to be a lot bigger than her other hand...you might wanna fix that. Other than that, it's looking superb! 4laugh Noted and thank you. I'll try to fix that tomorrow when I work on it. biggrin Uhm her boobs are really big... like size of her head big. But I could understand where that might be to match the character. Only thing I would do is try to bring up that one foot so you don't crop up the toes where you have it. Right now it looks distracting and like you just ran out of room, not an intentional crop. That and the way she is leaning on her one hand looks strange, though that is probably because we can't tell what she is leaning on yet. Other than that I think it looks good so far. Oh god, if you saw the real ref of her...her breasts are three times bigger than her head. xD I can't draw large breasts well, but I was trying to stay true to his character. The pose is somewhat on the floor, with the viewer looking down on her. I will be adjusting that hand tonight. I'll make the size of the canvas larger from the bottom so I can add her foot in entirely. Thank you for the advice. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:53 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:02 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:36 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:33 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:50 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 10:03 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 10:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:54 pm
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