"Stick Together No Matter What!!!"(Need Help With The Story)

[Amaterasu697]

((its okay...I like it ^_^))

*Chihiro sivered in the tunnel although knowing she was safe* (shes scared of Orochimaru)  

[Khana Uchiha]

Khana came up from the ground and punched Orochimaru in the chin.
((All Right Combo WWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTt))  

[Amaterasu697]

Chihiro: Im...always a target...this couldnt have happened if I met HIM in the Hyuuga Clan... crying  

[InVaDeRs_CrEaTuR]

((Think of this as slow motion))

As Orochimaru was going up, Sero jumped above him and headed down towards him. "TAKE THIS!" Sero kicked him straight in the face making him go down.  

[Amaterasu697]

Orochimaru: UGH!  

[InVaDeRs_CrEaTuR]

Sero appeared beside him. "I'M NOT DONE WITH YOU YET!" Sero did a 360 and rammed the side of his foot into his face, which made him rocket into a building.  

[Amaterasu697]

Orochimaru: hm hm hm...good...  

[InVaDeRs_CrEaTuR]

Sero was huffing, out of breathe. "This dude...just...won't...die!"  

[Khana Uchiha]

"I know,the last punch that I did I tried to put as much power that I can in it" she said panting.  

[InVaDeRs_CrEaTuR]

Sero growled and did a few hand signs. "THUNDER KAIDO!" Sero pointed at the building, a giant thunder bolt came down and imploded the whole building.  

[Khana Uchiha]

((impolded?lol!!!!What kind of word is impolded?! rofl rofl rofl ))
The building's foundation came flying everywhere.Khana covered her face but fell and got blown back and skidded across the grass.
((okay that was really fun visualizing the buliding exploding...BOOM!!!))  

[InVaDeRs_CrEaTuR]

((-looks left and right with his eyes- I meant implodded! I HATE it when it does that!))

Sero smirked as he stood his ground of the implosion. "Let's see him live through something like THAT!"

((I know! I saw the person filming get hit in the head with a big piece of rock! HAHAHAHA!!! {if there was a camera man}))  

[Khana Uchiha]

((I know but in my second vision there was a snowman under the buliding and the buliding crushed the snowman it was wierd but funny))
"How much power was in that?" she said in worry and anger.
((Yeah sure you meant that rolleyes twisted ))  

[InVaDeRs_CrEaTuR]

((O.O HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!))

Sero looked at the building. "Enough to kill 100 full grown Shinobi if they were standing in the same spot."  

[Amaterasu697]

*Orochimaru doesnt come out*