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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:29 pm
(((Then it shall commence!))) (((SORRY sorry sorry sory sorry sorry sorry. I apologize.))) Brooke eyed the stranger wearily. She was a woman. This usually gained a little trust, but after what that demon that had married her father had said, she wasn't taking any chances. "Where are you headed?" Brooke could feel some force pulling her to go along.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:43 pm
[lawl i rewrote it ... doh well ill just repost it :3 and no problem :3]
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:48 pm
*Logen smiled to her, and said:*
"Well, i was thinking of going away from this Stinking Toxic city... Do you have a destination for where you are going?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:51 pm
(((MORE SORRY!))) Brooke drew her arms in around her cradling a bag of her possessions. *Memory trick* Something about this woman is familiar. (((Sidenote: Artemis and Athena are sworn not to have children. We picked odd mothers, eh? Also, I'll go back and change it if necessary, Brooke's memory allows her to tap into a greater pool. She senses this familiarity because of memories of Artemis.)))
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:53 pm
"That sounds about right." Casting one last look back at her city, Brooke accepts the woman's offer and goes around the other side of the car to get into the passenger's seat.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:00 pm
[Not a problem it is about to be a war soon or what maybee that is why it becomes a war?? well.. dont worry :3 i will too if neccesary but i like Artemis so i think im going to keep her razz ]
*Logen smiles and start to drive... then she presses a button, wich allowed a Automatic system to take over for her, and made her car more confertable to sit in, she then said while leaning back from the steering wheel while it started to melt, it melted intoo a cup and went intoo the interior, the car started to become more than just a car, now it had some sort of television, and a table in the middle and some refreshments like water, apple soda, champagne and chips:*
"So whats your story?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:05 pm
(((Artemis is a pretty amazing gal. I was lucky enough to be chosen as a Hunter of Artemis at a camp once.))) Brooke's mouth fell slightly agape. After weeks of planning to run away, she'd finally got out on the road and was now "toughing it" in... the luxury of an amazing automobile? "I... I'm just getting out of town for a bit. You know, a trip." Brooke tried to word things carefully. She was ready to lie if she had to, but the less that this woman knew about her family, the better. "Erm, excuse me, ma'am, but wh-who are you?" (((Should I be colour coding as well?)))
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:17 pm
[well athena is a nice god too :3 umm... i choose to color code it becouse i want to,... and if you dont want to you dont need to!... becouse its just how i like to rp :3]
*Logen smiled still, and she said:*
"umm, im going for a year long vacation... im tired of this city..."
*Logen held her hand out to Brooke waiting her to shook it lightly and she said:*
"Logen is my name whats your?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:24 pm
(((Oh, I see. I'm going to leave it in monochrome for now. Athena and Artemis are my favourites.))) "Uh, I'm Brooke." Brooke thought this would be enough information. Last names aren't necessary, I guess. "A year vacation? Vacation from what? You seem to have enough money to be retired! This car must--" Suddenly Brooke realized how rude her words were. Ashamed, she turned to look out the window. I hope she'll forgive me. I don't want to have to get in some other stranger's car... (((I added italics for thoughts, I'll go add it to the first page of rules and notes.)))
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:39 pm
*Logen smiled and said:*
"well nice to meet you Brooke, you are quite right my dear... i got alot of money yes... but i dont work for the money, it is more for the good of humanity and to test my creativity... and umm, this car was the last thing i got from my dad... though i have redesigned the inside and all that is inside is my design"
[hehe i realized i havent described the inside]
*the inside was stylish and had a really shiny polished tree kind of look, but what it really was, was some sort of matherial that could change form, Logen liked the colour, and everywhere it was monitors and the seats was purple as Logen's hair and eyes, the design was reall nice and Logen was now smiling as she understood that this girl was running away from something, she could see on the girl that she couldnt be more than 16 she was happy looking at the screen that showed some sort of design she had made... maybee she could act as a guardian for this girl?*
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:46 pm
[hey for outside thoughts why not allso Meta parantese? --- theese signs ->[] ^^ I seem to use them alot when talking outside the story :3 and umm, okies . im going to watch Bleach!--- be right back after it!]
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:46 pm
"Wow..." Brooke sat, rather perplexed. So much for goddess of wisdom, I wouldn't ever be able to accomplish a feat like this. Is this real? Brook couldn't help but wonder if this woman was inhuman. Why was she offering her a ride? How did she create such technological wonders? Why was she so kind. "My dad won't let me drive," she said. "I am out of high school." Brooke's voice assumed a resentful tone. Her words hung with an air of repetition. It was obviously not the first time this argument had been made. (((I apologize. I realize that I've changed tenses a bit. I'll try to stay in one, but sometimes I get distracted by the actual story...))) Wacram Glaziuz [hey for outside thoughts why not allso Meta parantese? --- theese signs ->[] ^^ I seem to use them alot when talking outside the story :3 and umm, okies . im going to watch Bleach!--- be right back after it!] (((Okay))) [or rather, okay. I was using a lot of parenthesis, but these are much easier.]
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:50 pm
*Logen smiled and said:*
"Well, i didnt go to school at all... my father Teached me Everything i know... and umm some online coarses in something... i dont really remember but it was something to do with art... why did you go out of high school?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:58 pm
"I graduated." Brooke considered lying about her age, but decided avoiding the topic altogether would be wiser. "So, er, why did you pick me up? And where are you driving to?"
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