Poetry

[gamin247]

Off the top off my head I can think of one. Anyone every hear The Footprints of God?  

[Otulissa]

Hm... No, I don't believe so. Who wrote it?

Oh, and by the way, I have read some of Shakespeare's sonnets... I have one favorite, but I don't remember the name. XD;; I will remember if I see it. I also like poems by Emily Dickinson, and some of Edgar Allen Poe's poetry.

And don't worry if you don't like classics; I read a variety of poems. XD;;  

[gamin247]

Otulissa

Hm... No, I don't believe so. Who wrote it?

Oh, and by the way, I have read some of Shakespeare's sonnets... I have one favorite, but I don't remember the name. XD;; I will remember if I see it. I also like poems by Emily Dickinson, and some of Edgar Allen Poe's poetry.

And don't worry if you don't like classics; I read a variety of poems. XD;;

No offence but Edgar Allen Poe can drive you nuts with some of his poems. I think we all have heard of The Raven before.  

[Otulissa]

Yup! The Raven is a good poem. But, yeah... I guess Edgar Allen Poe CAN annoy you at times, but he IS a great poet. (His poems make me depressed though...)  

[Otulissa]

By the way, I posted a poem in Otu-chan's Scrapped Writings. Go check it out. biggrin  

[gamin247]

Yeah Footprints of God is by ,if this is right, Kat Brown.  

[Otulissa]

Hm...never read it. XD;;  

[MassViolence]

Nice poems man your good , i like poem too but since i'm french i'm making them mostly in french but i made one in english anyway , the mirror one is really good!  

[Otulissa]

Oh, you're French? I am taking French in school right now. Second year of taking it. Hm... I would like to read your French poems if you would care to post them...  

[MassViolence]

Well there's one here , must sound weird to you but it's making sense to me! lol...

Déssespoir d'un poète

Ceci n'est qu'un poème de déssespoir
puisque maintenant j'ai peur d'aimer
je ne voie plus le jour
mais que le soir

Je ne veut plus me faire blesser
alors je reste seul dans le noir
le vie n'est que mansonges et douleurs
je t'ai aimé et je l'ai regreté

J'ai deja vue la vie
la lumière après tant de haine
mais lorseque je me suis approcher
elle n'a fait que me brûler

J'ai été délaisser
et tant de fois rejeter
moi qui pensait que j'aurai pu être aimer
dans se monde de malheure
J'ai été abandonner

Tant de fois
que je ne veut plus m'approcher
de tout se qui est amour et amitié  

[Otulissa]

Okay. Here's my personal conclusion: Don't read poems when you are still in the process of taking a foreign language. XD;; Okay, I think you may have used some poetic devices, which confused me. But, I did understand some of it. I like the emotion! You showed the emotions of love, and friendship. I like this line the best: J'ai deja vue la vie
la lumière après tant de haine .  

[Irishroseh]

It's very pretty, even if I didn't understand all of it.

However, maybe you want to make your own thread for it?
:]  

[Fyrethil Fyrexetha]

Celestial Emotion


Oh thy torment, burning in me
Release, unleash
That roiling sea
Of guilt and grief
Potent and free
Forlorn, conformed
This pointless disease.
Destroy the inner clestial being
And rip out the corossion
Then cause it to bleed.

The abnormal feeling
I can't seem to shake
Writhing in silent insanity
Forcing, releasing
Its covenant sin
Feel all the pain, it starts to begin
To rip out the pieces
Red lettered, grim.

Grasp the finite angel inside
Tear off her wings
Then force her to fly
Celestial desire
Raging like fire
Cold as a blizzard
This isolated ward.

Forcing emotion
Conformity lost
That raging ocean
Of forgotten cost
Break away from the failure
And bleed out the sin
No feelings are conjured
So I cannot win.

Celestial angel
Fly over me
And grant me the wish
To make myself free.

 

[Otulissa]

Wow, awesome poem! I love the ethereal feeling you get from it!

By the way, everyone, you can make your own threads if you feel you'll be sharing more than one writing piece. XD;;  

[MassViolence]

We could also all get together and make a big threat all of us together?