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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 6:48 pm
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Thank you so much for the criticism, but... I totally forgot the warning!!! I got so excited about writing that I forgot the materials that some people might find.... squeamish. I'm sorry for my inconsideration!!!
WARNING!! This fanfic contains crude language, graphic scenes of violence, mature themes, nudity, zany humor, and obscure video game references. Please read at your own risk.
Right, now that that's out of the way...*Reads stampede part* Sweet Mercy of Nayru, you're absolutely right! I agree whole heartedly, and I'm the author... go figure.
P.S Yes, I draw pretty, lovely pictures that aren't quite good yet. xd
P.S.S I'm sorry! I totally forgot to reply to your P.S! Yes, I will go back and explain that. I'll actually be doing it through flashbacks, it's quite entertaining.
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 12:53 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:00 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:45 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 2:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 7:19 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:25 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:41 am
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Haha, cool, and before I write, I'll give you this little something, so you're caught up on this much at least:
Strider turned his body to face his left and jumped for safety. Strawberry’s body had no choice but to comply as her arm was nearly ripped out of the socket. Her face turned only to see a glistening gray club at the end of a hairy brown snout, with bone-white tusks jutting out under beady yellow eyes not five feet away from her. A giant boar. The boy and girl landed the second the torrent broke from the edge of the wall two meters away from their landing spot on the ground. The pair held onto each other for dear life, praying that they would make it out of this alive.
It was a terrifying experience, completely unlike anything they had ever felt. Their ears roared with the dozens of battering hooves and the savage piercing cries of the strange beasts. Each sound amalgamated into the next, turning everything into a ludicrous stentorian drone. The thunder pounded against them, echoing from the rock beside them and the ground beneath them. They did not dare look up or turn their heads to see, but they could feel the rocks and dust kicked up from the tidal march, and each pebble that hit made them flinch. Each second they feared one of the over-sized swine would veer from its already proximate path and squash them straight into the ground. As the morbid parade came to an end, one of the riding creatures brought up the rear with a great flying banner with a foreign insignia. It was a small green monster with hunched shoulders and elongated arms. It was mostly covered by a ragged, dirty blue tunic, and bandages for the sleeves and leggings. The bottom half of the face and the scalp of it was covered, so only its angry red eyes and curved small horns showed. It said nothing, but growled and whined in its beastly language as it tried to lope up with its comrades.
Well, I'm trying to make it more clear, while still being somewhat vague. Gives me more to work with next chapter. But I did need to catch you all up before I showed the other, so you wouldn't be in the dark. Frustration galore I know. Key is finding time to work on it. For me anyway.
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:11 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:19 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:09 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:20 pm
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