The first half irritated me a little. It stunk like horrible fanfiction....y'know, the type you write when you first start writing and you're like, 12 years old. It was terrible. I didn't mind the rest though. And I think that person was pleasantly surprised when Breaking Dawn plopped onto their lap!^^ RosetteCullen on DeviantArt and FanFiction.net writes REALLY good fanfics! (She writes good lemons....I know because I'm 17, and I love to read gewd stuff like that...don't judge!) I still have yet to read everything of hers...but I will eventually. 'Cause it's that amazing.