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Big Bang YG-Entertainment Captain
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 Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:06 pm
gyaru-chu i'm working on mine. but it ended up being longer than expected. sweatdrop can they be chaptered stories? heart
As long as you want! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:11 pm
@: I Wo I
Hmmmm, did you read the rules? confused But since you already did it, I guess, I'll accept your entry.
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Big Bang YG-Entertainment Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 4:55 pm
Big Bang YG-Entertainment gyaru-chu i'm working on mine. but it ended up being longer than expected. sweatdrop can they be chaptered stories? heart
As long as you want! 3nodding fabulous! blaugh i'll post it now, ^_^
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:07 pm
"A Fool's Only Tears" CHARACTERS : Kailyn and Jarren :] As Kailyn walks home from school , she thinks to herself " is Jarren a a good man for me ? " She shakes her head and says quietly " Well of course he is ! What was i thinking ? " Then she hears her phone ring , " Oh . A text , it's from Jarren ! " She says . She reads the text " Meet me at Cafe Latte in an hour . " Oh yay ! A date with Jarren ! " Kailyn said . As she makes her way to Cafe Latte , she looks up at the sky and says " Oh my gosh . It might rain I'll just get a ride with Jarren . I'm sure he won't mind ! " When she arives at Jarren's apartment room she sees an unfamiliar car parked in Jarren's parking spot . She makes her way up to Jarren's room and knocks on the door , there is no answer for about 3 minutes , then she hears Jarren's voice " JUST A SECOND ! " he yells . She hears the lock unlock and the door finally opens . " Oh .... Kailyn .... w-w-what are you doing here ? " Jarren said " Oh im just here to get a ride with you ... it looks like its about to rain . " She says . Then Kailyn hears a woman's voice . " Baby ? Who is there ? " The woman said . " Oh ... Nobody ! " he yells . " Uhh nobody ? I'm your girlfriend ! " Kailyn yells . The woman comes out , " Excuse me . But i'm his girlfriend . I've been his girlfriend for 10 months now ! " The woman yells . " Baby i'm sorry " He said to Kailyn . " Baby i'm sorry ?! Is that all you can say ?! When we first met you said : Come be my lady , I will bring you love . I said yes , but that was probably the BIGGEST MISTKAE OF MY LIFE . I promised that i will always be forever with you . But i guess you just played me like a fool . You were my everything . You made my life Heaven . Well i guess that was all a lie . I always loved the way you used to only look at me . " Kailyn said . Then Jarren said , " Baby im --- " . Then Kailyn interupted " Baby im sorry ?! Have you been paying attention to what i've been saying ? If sorry would fix everything why is there a thing called jail , police , and law . Sorry will get you nowhere ! " Kailyn paused and started again . " You know what . WE ARE THROUGH . " she said . Jarren said " But baby i love --- " Kailyn interupted once again " no . no you don't . stop faking . thats all i ask you . " she said . " ohkay .... " Jarren said . Kailyn walked away crying . " We are over too ! you really thought you could play us ? " The woman said while she walked off . " They're gone . . . what did i just do ? Even worse .... i just lost her ! " Jarren screamed , He walked outside to calm himself down . "The sunset glow is beautiful . As Jarren started to calm down he walked back to his room and plopped down onto the couch and drifted off to sleep .
When he woke up the next day he thought : i should just breathe i will just be a big boy and just forget about all this . She was my butterfly , my Everything , lady , and Friend . Now she's my heart breaker " he said . "KAILYN I'M MAD ABOUT YOU ! He screamed . "Oh my baby WHY DID I DO THIS ?! " he said . He went outside for a jog to clear his mind . He ran past Kailyn's house and stopped .... stared .... cried .... then ran again . Ten minutes away from Kailyn's house a car crashed into Jarren . As the car slammed into jarren a fools only tear ran down his cheek . " Kailyn . I love you " He said right before the car hit him . That night Kailyn turned on the TV so she could watch the news . When she got to the news channel she heard the story about Jarren . She cried for days . When she went to his funeral she wouldn't let his coffin go down . When she finally let it drop she whispered " I love you . I'm so sorry that i yelled at you . I will be with you soon . " When she got home she saw her mom . Her mom got up and hugged her and whispered " im so sorry " Kailyn answered " He didnt live his life to the fullest like everyone else . " Kailyn started crying and went to sleep .
The next morning she found a note on her dresser . " Kailyn , im going out to the grocery store . if you need anything just call . Love mom . " the note said . " now is my time .... " she said . She went to the kitchen and grabbed a knife , pen and paper . she wrote on the paper , " mom , i love you , please don't hate me for this but i can't take a day without Jarren . I hope that you will live the rest of your life better than i did . Love you always and no matter what , Kailyn . " She walked back to the the counter , grabbed the knife , and commited suicide . When her mom got back she yelled " Kailyn im home ! come help me with the groceries . " She heard no answer . She looked around and came to the kitchen and saw Kailyn on the ground with multiple stab wounds and started crying . Then she saw the note , read it and called the police .
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 5:01 am
One day, HyunJi was walking with her two friends, Choi Seung Hyun and Kwon Jiyong. Choi Seung Hyun was always called TOP because he's such a good man. While JiYong, HyunJi, and TOP were walking to the beach, since they lived only a block from the sunny west side California Laguna Beach.
Hyunji said, "I want to get a smoothie! Do you guys want anything else?"
Jiyong said, "Sure, I'll have a caffe latte." TOP had been crushing HyunJi from the moment he saw her in the neighborhood. He decided to pay for the things. TOP also said, "I'll have a caffe latte too if you let me buy it for you." He had an irresistible smile and Hyunji just couldn't let go. So she nodded. So Hyunji and TOP stand up from their umbrella spot on the beach and left for the cafe stand. Hyunji asked TOP, "Do you have enough money?" TOP ignored her and took her hand. He's been eying her for almost his whole life because HyunJi was so beautiful. Hyunji looked rather surprised than flattered. "What happened?", asked Hyunji.
TOP pulled her over behind the cafe shop and said, "Baby baby... We belong together. I want to spend my whole life with u. You're my girl. Only look at me, not Jiyong or anyone else in this world. Until whenever we both go to heaven." Hyunji laughed so suddenly that TOP was confused. He looked at her sparkling eyes and her beauty of a butterfly. At the blink of an eye, Hyunji fluttered her imaginary wings and disappeared before his eyes. "She's Gone", TOP murmured in sympathy. TOP looked down and started to cry like a fool.
Hyunji giggled and said out of no where behind TOP, "Together forever, TOP. Stop crying a fool's only tears. Try Smiling. Your a big boy, aren't you? We will always be together, no matter what happens.
The beginning of a new relationship began.
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When Hyunji dragged a now happy TOP back to Jiyong, Jiyong looked confused. "Why aren't you here with everything?", Jiyong asked.
Hyunji was also confused and finally snapped back to the real world. "Oh yeah! I completely forgot. Follow me TOP!", so the two went to the cafe stand again.
"I'll have a Crazy Dog, one smoothie, 2 caffelattes, and a hot caramel bun please!", Hyunji said to the cashier. The cashier nodded and hastily prepared the orders. "It's a big hit, that caramel bun. We almost ran out today!", the cashier blurted out. When the cashier finally came back with the food, he said, "10.50 please." Hyunji took out her money and said, "Here you go." The cashier looked at it and took it. He said, "Why is this dirty cash?" Hyunji giggled and said, "oh, the sand must've gotten wet or something." After paying and everything, TOP and HyunJi walked back to Jiyong with the food.
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Jiyong was waiting patiently at their umbrella spot, waiting for the food and drinks. He thought, "Gosh, I love HyunJi. She's my all. Boy, I can't breathe without her." He saw Hyunji and TOP giggling and smiling with the food. 'Yummy, the food's here!', Jiyong thought.
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With Hyunji sitting down right between Jiyong and TOP, the two boys both loved HyunJi. TOP had already confessed, and Hyunji was also into him. Jiyong had no clue that TOP loved her. Hyunji took a big bite into her hot dog and set it down. She grinned with pleasure, eating the delicious hot dog.
Jiyong said, "Now's my time. I have to tell her."
After washing down that hotdog with a smoothie, Jiyong whispered something into her ear. "I'm mad about you, Hyunji. Remember that I love you so. Stay with me forever. Keep your face like a sunset glow. This love will never be separated."
TOP hadn't heard this, but HyunJi obviously had. She didn't want any drama, and why did the two boys have to love her both?? She truly loved TOP more, but she couldn't be a heartbreaker to Jiyong. What to do... So, Hyunji stood up, both boys looking very confused, when TOP stood up also and said, "I love you." He kissed her deeply and that made Hyunji feel on top of the world.
Jiyong was heartbroken, and Hyunji just ran. She ran and ran until her feet were cracking with blisters. She forgot to put her sandals on, so she had a bikini with bare feet.
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"Hyunji-yah. Where are you going?", TOP screamed after her, looking at Jiyong in confusion. "I told her I loved her.". Jiyong said. TOP shouted at him. "You fool! I loved her. I felt like I reached victory when she said she loved me too. You just couldn't see us together, could you?" Jiyong looked nervous and said, "I love her too, TOP. But you can have her. It's fine." TOP was madder than ever. "Then why'd you say you loved her in her ear!? It's a little too late saying that I can have her. She's probably freezing to death right now!!"
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Hyunji was freezing to death, she slowly walked back to her house, with her blistered feet, crying silently. I have to act like nothing's wrong, Hyunji thought.
She suddenly felt warmth all over her body and looked up. It was TOP, bear hugging Hyunji with the warmth she needed all along. TOP said, "oh my baby, it's alright. Jiyong was just kidding around. No need to cry the tears of a fool. we're together forever." TOP looked at HyunJi and she was smiling faintly.
"Till we're in Heaven.", Hyunji said and she pulled TOP in for a long, deep kiss.
Ahahaha, sorry. I was confused, logging on and off, writer's block. I don't think I'll win anything. ;D ahaha, it was just for random, weird fun x) The prize goes to: The Dot Fairy, for the most confusing and random and useless and no plot story!! X) hehe
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:47 am
this contest seems so awesome biggrin too bad im a horrible writer neutral
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Big Bang YG-Entertainment Captain
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:22 am
KarenAppleLove this contest seems so awesome biggrin too bad im a horrible writer neutral It doesn't matter if you are a horrible writer, just do it! biggrin
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:53 pm
Big Bang YG-Entertainment KarenAppleLove this contest seems so awesome biggrin too bad im a horrible writer neutral It doesn't matter if you are a horrible writer, just do it! biggrin I agree because you might end up being the winner of this contest!
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:55 pm
blaugh blaugh blaugh blaugh blaugh So far all of the stories I read are super cool!
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:29 pm
Date extended. Look at Post#3. biggrin
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Big Bang YG-Entertainment Captain
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WonderfulPanda Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:34 am
Wow, not much participating. biggrin
HI.
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:22 pm
I shall participate! >D
In the morning, Michael always went to cafe latte with his very special friend. People always called him foolish to be in love with a girl that only sees him as a friend, and nothing else. O, what the desperate emotion he had for her. He knew that she will never be his lady. He knew almost everything that she liked, what she disliked, and they spent like almost every moment together.
One morning, while he sat there waiting for her, running his finger on the cup of his finger, he was whispering to himself. "I don't understand..."
"What don't you understand?" The voice startled him half to death. The voice of an angel from heaven.
"Hey-y-y-y Jessica." Michael stuttered. "It's nothing really...." He turned his face away from her, avoiding to look into her eyes. He couldn't tell her lies whenever he looked into them. It only made him feel guilt.
"Well anyway! Happy Birthday!" Jessica cheerfully laughed as she slammed a plastic bag with a butterfly on it. "I hope you like it!"
Reaching into the bag, Michael pulled out a picture of them two together on one of their many trips together. Written in sharpie was the words "Together Forever. I Love you Bestie!" Michael was touched.
"So...what do you think of it?" Jessica cheerfully said, standing there smiling at him.
"All I have to say is...I remember that day..." Michael closed his eyes as a smile came onto his face. "We gave a lollipop to that little girl. Rain is falling. Voices everywhere in the crowd as that little girl was lost. Nobody was paying attention to her and she started to cry."
"And then you gave her your lollipop to help her and we helped her though the crowd." Jessica completed the memory, smiling. "Michael your so sweet you know?"
"I learn from the best." He smiled at her as he took a sip out of his coffee.
"Aw...thanks!" Jessica laughed as she sat down across from him. "That day was so beautiful...I remember the rain and the laughter we had after that. Getting strangers to take pictures for us and us just fooling around, running to places."
"Ah..." Michael simply replied.
"I felt like I was on top of the world that day..." Jessica cutely said.
"Why?" He looked at her mysteriously. Out of all the stuff he knew about her, he never knew about what happened that day.
"I realized something." Jessica walked towards him and whispered into his ear, making him tremble. "Everything between us has been wonderful and I can't help but say this..." She took a pause. "We belong together..." Michael's eyes popped open as she whispered the words he always wanted to hear. Standing up, he looked at her in the eyes.
"With U...Together Forever?" Michael laughed as he pulled her close to him, hugging her. "That'd be like heaven on earth..."
Well that's the best I got so yeah(:
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:49 pm
Oh this looks like fun!!!
Awww but I don't think I can write fast enoough to meet the deadline... crying
Will there be another contest like this???
Darn I'm so slow to fin dout about things... or I'm just completely oblivious lol razz
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