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There is another student here with the nickname 'Vivi' who also has a passion for Steampunk. XD Might want to be careful of such similarities less confusion follows.
Also, her physical age (29) seems to be strange in comparison to the fact that this is a school for teenagers. I'm not sure how to handle this particular thing when it comes to the age of a person in terms of dying, it may require asking to make sure that the sudden physical age difference doesn't cause any problems (as she'd look much more teacher-aged than student-aged and this cold cause some problems)
You have two things listed as her FEAR. Is one of them her natural ability? Be careful to make the distinction between which is which, and then the one which is FEAR, make sure you go into how it would be used in battle or a rollable stat.
Also, her physical age (29) seems to be strange in comparison to the fact that this is a school for teenagers. I'm not sure how to handle this particular thing when it comes to the age of a person in terms of dying, it may require asking to make sure that the sudden physical age difference doesn't cause any problems (as she'd look much more teacher-aged than student-aged and this cold cause some problems)
You have two things listed as her FEAR. Is one of them her natural ability? Be careful to make the distinction between which is which, and then the one which is FEAR, make sure you go into how it would be used in battle or a rollable stat.
I had no idea; I've had this quest up for quite a while, with the name 'Vivian'. I just recently updated it. I don't have internet at home so I have no such means to look at other quests. sweatdrop I did however look and I see no such quest...?
I changed her age. Thank you!
And as Huni Pi said, yes, her FEAR needed to be changed, I just hadn't gotten the chance to update it yet or think of a new one.
Thank you for the crits! heart
