Group Art Critique! Crushing Egos since... Today D:

[Shinigami Whistle]

Hmmm, Rinnie. Perhaps you could try drawing Male Kai with shorther hair or at least a very different hair style? Other then that, I'm really not sure what to tell you crying  

[Manda_Tifa]

Rinchans-flower

Alright! My turn!

Male Kai: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/gaiaart/genderswap.jpg
(Ref for coloring: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/gaiaart/kai.jpg)

Sirus:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/gaiaart/Sirus2.png

Look familar? I like drawing Kai as a guy. But the only problem is that Sirus looks waaaaayyyy too much like her. The coloring is diffrent, but for the most part they look a lot alike. Any suggestions for making them look diffrent?

*purrs* Sexy picture...*coughs* Ahem...critique..right.

Main thing I have is something about his chest. It looks too...concave...like it might have collapsed on him. Maybe round it out JUST slightly??  

[haythere]

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

It's looking rather good to me. Lovely coloring job, expression and pose! Shading is simple, but there's nothing wrong with that. There is a problem is the breasts. They're connceted in one curvy line. You might want to seperate them. And the crotch looks a little awkward.

But I love the hands most of all. They're slender and lovely. heart  

[haythere]

Manda_Tifa

Rinchans-flower

Alright! My turn!

Male Kai: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/gaiaart/genderswap.jpg
(Ref for coloring: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/gaiaart/kai.jpg)

Sirus:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/gaiaart/Sirus2.png

Look familar? I like drawing Kai as a guy. But the only problem is that Sirus looks waaaaayyyy too much like her. The coloring is diffrent, but for the most part they look a lot alike. Any suggestions for making them look diffrent?

*purrs* Sexy picture...*coughs* Ahem...critique..right.

Main thing I have is something about his chest. It looks too...concave...like it might have collapsed on him. Maybe round it out JUST slightly??

Male Kai? I can work on that 3nodding  

[Shinigami Whistle]

Alright, a question. Does anyone know of any good tutorials about this, or can sketch me up one real quick...on how to draw equine fursonas? Zella wants to do a trade with me or whatever, but I really have no idea how to draw equines crying  

[Manda_Tifa]

Rinchans-flower

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

It's looking rather good to me. Lovely coloring job, expression and pose! Shading is simple, but there's nothing wrong with that. There is a problem is the breasts. They're connceted in one curvy line. You might want to seperate them. And the crotch looks a little awkward.

But I love the hands most of all. They're slender and lovely. heart

*makes mental notes*

Yea about the crotch...it probably looks like that cause I fixed her right (?) leg so many times.....that and I've never really gotten into much detail with crotches before....  

[haythere]

Kyoni Malkat

Hmmm, Rinnie. Perhaps you could try drawing Male Kai with shorther hair or at least a very different hair style? Other then that, I'm really not sure what to tell you crying

That's what I was thinking. Sirus, drawn here by Mephi, I have the black tips on the hair taken away for him. Sometimes I can draw him really fem, so he'll look even more like Kai xd  

[haythere]

Manda_Tifa

*makes mental notes*

Yea about the crotch...it probably looks like that cause I fixed her right (?) leg so many times.....that and I've never really gotten into much detail with crotches before....

I had that same problem. It takes practice, and not to sound perverted, look at some pictures if you're really unsure. Looking at medical pictures or anatomy books really help.

Kyo - I'm really unsure...I really don't draw them often.  

[Manda_Tifa]

Kyoni Malkat

Alright, a question. Does anyone know of any good tutorials about this, or can sketch me up one real quick...on how to draw equine fursonas? Zella wants to do a trade with me or whatever, but I really have no idea how to draw equines crying

*tries to sustain the inner mod....but it escapes* Stickies, dear....*coughs quietly and shuffles feet*  

[WasabiFennec]

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

Hokay so, this is very sexy. ( Probably your best yet. ) :3 Still I am having a few anatomical issues.
First off, her boobs are far too low. Just cause they're big, doesn't mean they have to hit the floor, she's young, so perk them up!
Kay, so here is somethin called a " redline ", it should make somethins easier to understand:

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d74/wasabiwaif/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg
If you have any trouble decifering my 1:30am handwriting, just ask. #_#

My main qualms with this piece is the droopiness of the boobs and the skinniness of the legs. :3  

[haythere]

Dr.Voodoo

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

Hokay so, this is very sexy. ( Probably your best yet. ) :3 Still I am having a few anatomical issues.
First off, her boobs are far too low. Just cause they're big, doesn't mean they have to hit the floor, she's young, so perk them up!
Kay, so here is somethin called a " redline ", it should make somethins easier to understand:

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d74/wasabiwaif/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

My main qualms with this piece is the droopiness of the boobs and the skinniness of the legs. :3

Droopiness I don't think is a big deal. If they're big, they're gonna droop. I've seen bigger chested girls with some droopage, she's young, but droopage is okay.  

[Manda_Tifa]

Dr.Voodoo

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

Hokay so, this is very sexy. ( Probably your best yet. ) :3 Still I am having a few anatomical issues.
First off, her boobs are far too low. Just cause they're big, doesn't mean they have to hit the floor, she's young, so perk them up!
Kay, so here is somethin called a " redline ", it should make somethins easier to understand:

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d74/wasabiwaif/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg
If you have any trouble decifering my 1:30am handwriting, just ask. #_#

My main qualms with this piece is the droopiness of the boobs and the skinniness of the legs. :3

*giggles* I love that....that's the best! Thank you! I hope Sphyxie doesn't get her hopes up, though....I really don't have the time to go back and fix (I rarely do, this is mainly for future pictures).  

[Rainey_angel81]

i love that red line..  

[WasabiFennec]

Rinchans-flower

Dr.Voodoo

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

Hokay so, this is very sexy. ( Probably your best yet. ) :3 Still I am having a few anatomical issues.
First off, her boobs are far too low. Just cause they're big, doesn't mean they have to hit the floor, she's young, so perk them up!
Kay, so here is somethin called a " redline ", it should make somethins easier to understand:

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d74/wasabiwaif/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

My main qualms with this piece is the droopiness of the boobs and the skinniness of the legs. :3

Droopiness I don't think is a big deal. If they're big, they're gonna droop. I've seen bigger chested girls with some droopage, she's young, but droopage is okay.

Oh, there WILL be droopage, but still, they look a little low to me. Perhaps it's the connectedness of the line. #_#;;  

[haythere]

Dr.Voodoo

Rinchans-flower

Dr.Voodoo

Manda_Tifa

Okay...I'm proud as hell of this...but I keep getting the feeling that I did something wrong...and I think that problem lies in shading...opinions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v197/Manda_Tifa/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

Hokay so, this is very sexy. ( Probably your best yet. ) :3 Still I am having a few anatomical issues.
First off, her boobs are far too low. Just cause they're big, doesn't mean they have to hit the floor, she's young, so perk them up!
Kay, so here is somethin called a " redline ", it should make somethins easier to understand:

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d74/wasabiwaif/Asphyxiationcopy.jpg

My main qualms with this piece is the droopiness of the boobs and the skinniness of the legs. :3

Droopiness I don't think is a big deal. If they're big, they're gonna droop. I've seen bigger chested girls with some droopage, she's young, but droopage is okay.

Oh, there WILL be droopage, but still, they look a little low to me. Perhaps it's the connectedness of the line. #_#;;

Probably. But it really doesn't look unnatural