[CRIT] Please critique my character!

[Avid_RPer18]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Patchwork - Undead
Looking For: Thoughts, questions, comments, I'd be up for anything...Please and thank you. ^^
Quest Link: Beckett  

[[ X_Bleeding Roses_X ]]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Amnesia Demon
Looking For: General crit
Quest Link: Britannica  

[Lilbabe808]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Mage - Reaper
Looking For: General crit please.
Quest Link: Enya the Mage  

[Andraia]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Giant Black Chicken - Monster
Looking For: Crits on anything would be helpful~.
Quest Link: Pipelle  

[- h a b i b a t i -]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Witch - Reaper
Looking For: Everything. 8D
Quest Link: Minnie Crimson, The Witch  

[Eight]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster
Looking For: FEAR help? Or just GLARINGLY BAD things that ABSOLUTELY NEED TO BE CHANGED WHAT IS THIS. Everyone is free to ask clarification questions/stir up ideas as well.
Quest Link: Sibyl the Selkie  

[Manda]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Ghost
Looking For: Anything and everything! Mostly hoping to get him GM-stamped at some point soon :3
Quest Link: Dariya  

[TheWishling]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Ghost
Looking For: Crit on EVERYTHING
Quest Link: Kala Itar  

[Chobi_Chocobo]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster
Looking For: General Crit
Quest Link: Neil Howlison  

[Hes a Trap]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Reaper
Looking For: Crit on everything
Quest Link: ZuZu and Jake  

[Mewsings of An Angel]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Demon - Unseelie
Looking For: Crits on everything!
Quest Link: Liobhan  

[KanamiTenjo]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Demon
Looking For: General crit please. Also some suggestions if I should add more to my characters persona.
Quest Link: Caelestis  

[Scyerline]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Undead/Cowboil Vampire
Looking For: General Critique would be awesome. (I think I got hte cowboy down, but need help thinking of vampire personality? No sparkles...)
Quest Link: Zeke  

[Chi Sohma]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Undead - Patchwork
Looking For: There are several things listed on the 2nd page ^-^ Of my Quest on things I'm still looking to fix or want some advice on~ But some range from how my Fear looks ( is it ok ) to hair color. I have some questions that range from everwhere about the character. ^^ But would love some general critics and overall fitting in.
Quest Link: Melody A. Fortesque  

[ramenli]

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Mage - Reaper
Looking For: Crit on everything. Some things I may have just not been clear on because I kept trying to make it long. I'd also really like some crit on FEAR as its still a bit new to me.
Quest Link: Sasha