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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 6:31 pm
Ayane, you'd start out not knowing any skills, and also, for unformity's sake, please remove all the other elements except Fire, Spirit, and Fighting Styles  
PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 6:42 pm
edits made...looks good to me.
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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 7:07 pm
User Image__________[basics]>>>
Full Name: Evelene Mol'atra
Nicknames: Eve
Notable Title:
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Birth date: 10/15
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Water Tribe
Rank: Trainee


__________[combat]>>>
Elemental Affinity: Water
Specialized Bending: N/A

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:

Secondary Weapon Class:
Secondary Weapon Name:
Secondary Weapon Description:
Secondary Weapon Location:

Extra Items-
Name:
Description:

Pet-
Name:
Species:


__________[techniques]>>>

Water-




Fighting Style [Name]









__________[appearance]>>>
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 126 lbs
Build: Athletic
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Purple
Complexion: Light
Outfits: Picture


__________[mentality]>>>
Personality: Sporty, Feisty, Talkative. She likes to play sports, she tends to be feisty around people and likes to talk to people even when they don't want to talk.
Relations: Straight
Take on battle:
Theme song:


Favorites-
Food: Sea Food
Drink: Cold Drinks
Color: Purple
Animal: Wolves
Dislikes-
Food: Nothing
Drink: Extremely hot drinks
Color: None
Animal: None


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Having lost her parents to the ocean, she has made it her life's goal to learn water bending to its fullest to learn and avoid the way her parent's died and conquer the ocean one day. She is very athletic always going out to swim, or snowboard down the mountains that are nearby the tribe's location belonging to the Northern Water Tribe. She is a talkative girl, though she can control herself, it normally leads to her being a feisty one.

She is one who is willing to learn, though not always easily accepting everything taught to her. One thing that came naturally to her was hunting and fishing, able to cook to feed herself and others when necessary.


__________[extra]>>>

whatever you wish
 
PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 7:20 pm
Already making your second RPC?
you sure you wanna make it this soon?  

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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 7:20 pm
User Image__________[basics]>>>
Full Name: Shura Yon Ming
Nicknames: "Moontide" "Yang"
Notable Title: -
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Birth date: May 17th
Sexuality: Bisexual
Nation: Water Tribe
Rank: Trainee


__________[combat]>>>
Elemental Affinity: Water
Specialized Bending:

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:

Secondary Weapon Class:
Secondary Weapon Name:
Secondary Weapon Description:
Secondary Weapon Location:

Extra Items-
Name:
Description:

Pet-
Name: Ling Ling
Species: Penguin


__________[techniques]>>>

Water-




Spirit Techniques




Fighting Style [Name]









__________[appearance]>>>
Height: 5' 09 ''
Weight: 98 lbs.
Build: Lean
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Complexion: Young
Outfits: [Same as pic.]


__________[mentality]>>>
Personality: Shura is a calm and innocent individual, one who wishes to work hard and become strong. His actions in battle and out of battle vary though, in battle, he is calm cool and collected, out of battle, he can be easily prone to picking fights and such because of his words.
Relations: None
Take on battle: "Water's calm, keep that mentality or death is certain."
Theme song:


Favorites-
Food: Stew
Drink: Wuai Juice
Color: Orange
Animal: Polar Bear Dog
Dislikes-
Food: Broccoli
Drink: Tea
Color: Pink
Animal: Platypus Bear


__________[background]>>>

U/C

__________[extra]>>>

-
 
PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 7:28 pm
Hadou, I swear..if you and shane go around raping each other in this guild, I'm going to break you.... xd :

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and Alicia, since you'r positive, approved  

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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 9:22 pm
User Image__________[basics]>>>
Full Name: Yun Sung
Nicknames: Yun of the Mist, Yun of the Flowing Fist
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Birth date: Unknown
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Southern Water Tribe (raised in the Earth Kindom)
Rank: Novice


__________[combat]>>>
Elemental Affinity: Water
Specialized Bending:

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:

Secondary Weapon Class:
Secondary Weapon Name:
Secondary Weapon Description:
Secondary Weapon Location:

Extra Items-
Name:
Description:

Pet-
Name:
Species:


__________[techniques]>>>

Water-





Spirit Techniques




Fighting Style [Name]









__________[appearance]>>>
Height:
Weight: 140 lbs
Build: Athletic, slightly muscular
Hair Color: brown
Eye Color: grey
Complexion: light tan
Outfits: links or descriptions are just fine.

typical water tribe wear, but wears a vest-like top with the southern water tribe symbol on the bottom..

__________[mentality]>>>
Personality: Yun is a very social person, who enjoys a fight more than anyone else. He loves his friends, the only ones who he considers family after losing his to bandits. He likes to drink and eat.

Due to his life of living in the wilds around the world, Yun is very connected to the nature, a connection that seems almost other-worldly. Whenever he passes by a stream, it is not uncommon for him to walk into the water and just begin meditating, no matter what the whether is like.

Relations: None
Take on battle:
Theme song:


Favorites-
Food: Beef and potatoe stew
Drink: Mint tea
Color: Cyan
Animal: Cat
Dislikes-
Food: Spinach
Drink: Poorly prepared tea
Color: Black
Animal: none


__________[background]>>>

Yun was born to a female water tribeswoman and a merchant, he was raised in the mountains of the air benders. While one a business trip with his father and mother, their convoy was attacked by a group of bandits. His father was killed and his mother and him were taken into slavery. Yun's mother was used as a concubine and prostitute. Many days did you see his mother taken away and r*ped viciously by the bandits, both away and infront of him. His mother would later die when he was only ten years old of an unknown disease quite common among the slaves. On a slave trade, Yun's ship was hit by a storm and he was thrown overboard. He washed up on shores of the Earth nation where he traveled on foot to Basingseih. There, he trained in martial arts and weaponry, not knowing of his true powers passed down to him by his mother, an expert water bender. He now wishes to return to his true home in the South Pole, to learn of his hidden strength and to train to avenge his family.


__________[extra]>>>



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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 9:28 pm
your specialized bending is what you unlock after master. Waterbending comes with your elemental affinity

Please remove any elements that do not apply to you, leave spirit, fighting, and water  

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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2012 9:44 pm
changes look good. Approved  
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Age: 14
Birth date: June 21st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Fire
Rank:
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Personality: He can be really quite if he chooses to, but he also can be quite talkative if he's with the right people. He has a difficult past, but he doesn't show it he tries to stay positive about it. He is also confident in his abilities; he isn't cocky, but he believes in his skills and it isn't easy to get in his head.
Take on battle:
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100 lbs.
Build: Athletic, mostly agile, and a little bit of muscular.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Complexion: Pale
Outfits: Wears fire bender clothing

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Isn't picky
Drink: Tea
Color: Red
Animal: Dragons

XXXXD I S L I K E S
Food: Inedible food
Drink: Alcohol
Color: Blue
Animal: N/A

XXXXXXXX backgroundXstory
Kuzon grew up like a normal kid he had a mother, father, and two siblings. They had a nice lifestyle they lived in a house and made decent money and everything was alright. His father was in the military and taught him firebending and they had a close relationship because of it. Kuzon's dream was to be in pro-bending he would always listen to it on the radio and trained even harder to make it. One day his father had to leave because the military needed him and over time his mother became really ill. It got to the point that his mother couldn't take care of him and his siblings, so they were in foster care. After several months there mother died which was very upsetting for him, and a week later they found that there father has died as well. Kuzon didn't know how to handle the news, so he was very quiet for years; he rarely spoke and stop firebending as well. He had a dream that his father was very upset with him that he stop firebending in the dream his father said these exact words, "you can't stop firebending because of me, it's apart of you, and it lives and grows in you. You promised me that you will make it to pro-bending, so live up to that promise". After that he left the orphanage, so he can live his dreams for him and his father.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Fire.
Specialized Bending: Lightining (once at master)

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:


XXXXP E T S
Name: Drago
Species: Dragon
Abilities: He can grow in size and can be pocket size or huge enough to use as transportation *can't be used as mount until he meets requirements*


XXXXE X T R A S
Name:
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

FIRE TECHNIQUES

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES

what do you mean by specialties for fighting and effectiveness of specialties?  

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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 11:40 am
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Full Name: Kuzon
Nicknames:
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birth date: June 21st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Fire
Rank:
Trainee
XXXXXXXX appearance
Personality: He can be really quite if he chooses to, but he also can be quite talkative if he's with the right people. He has a difficult past, but he doesn't show it he tries to stay positive about it. He is also confident in his abilities; he isn't cocky, but he believes in his skills and it isn't easy to get in his head.
Take on battle:
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100 lbs.
Build: Athletic, mostly agile, and a little bit of muscular.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Complexion: Pale
Outfits: Wears fire bender clothing

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Isn't picky
Drink: Tea
Color: Red
Animal: Dragons

XXXXD I S L I K E S
Food: Inedible food
Drink: Alcohol
Color: Blue
Animal: N/A

XXXXXXXX backgroundXstory
Kuzon grew up like a normal kid he had a mother, father, and two siblings. They had a nice lifestyle they lived in a house and made decent money and everything was alright. His father was in the military and taught him firebending and they had a close relationship because of it. Kuzon's dream was to be in pro-bending he would always listen to it on the radio and trained even harder to make it. One day his father had to leave because the military needed him and over time his mother became really ill. It got to the point that his mother couldn't take care of him and his siblings, so they were in foster care. After several months there mother died which was very upsetting for him, and a week later they found that there father has died as well. Kuzon didn't know how to handle the news, so he was very quiet for years; he rarely spoke and stop firebending as well. He had a dream that his father was very upset with him that he stop firebending in the dream his father said these exact words, "you can't stop firebending because of me, it's apart of you, and it lives and grows in you. You promised me that you will make it to pro-bending, so live up to that promise". After that he left the orphanage, so he can live his dreams for him and his father.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Fire.
Specialized Bending: Lightining (once at master)

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:


XXXXP E T S
Name: Drago
Species: Dragon
Abilities: He can grow in size and can be pocket size or huge enough to use as transportation *can't be used as mount until he meets requirements*


XXXXE X T R A S
Name:
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

FIRE TECHNIQUES

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES

what do you mean by specialties for fighting and effectiveness of specialties?


Personality is a little brief, but the largest issue...

A dragon at trainee rank. Even if it can't be used as a mount until you're a high rank, it's too much for right now... Dragons are master benders, a trainee having one isn't fair, and too overpowered. Also, it being able to grow and shrink in size isn't really possible, even if it is a mythical creature. Avatar is still somewhat realistic, so a growing/shrinking dragon would only be possible if it were a Spirit... and we can't have pet spirits, lol

So yeah. Just remove the dragon for now, and maybe try to get one at Adept rank or Master, but not one that can shrink and grow.  
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Full Name: Matthew Damon
Nicknames: Matt (what he goes by) or whatever you want to call him.
Notable Title: None yet
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Birth date: 8/7
Sexuality: Bi
Nation: Earth
Rank: Trainee

XXXXXXXX appearance
Personality: Matthew is a very calm individual. He is level headed and acts rationally, thinking situations through. He has a clear view of justice and tends to only use his bending to protect himself and/or his friends or to help someone in need. He is almost always happy and loves to sleep. He is usually not very serious but can focus up as the time needs.
Take on battle: It has no reason other then to protect the innocent. He is kind and giving.
Theme song: Today - Smashing Pumpkins
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 120
Build: Slightly skinner then average.
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Complexion: Tan
Outfits: Most of the time Matt wears a simple brown shirt and pants and is barefoot with a random assortment of flowers in his hair (pictured). He will wear other clothes though.

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None right now
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Rice
Drink: Tea
Color: Brown, Earth-tone green.
Animal: Cats and his Eel Hound.

XXXXD I S L I K E S
Food: Not super picky
Drink: Again not picky
Color: Super bright colors.
Animal: None.

XXXXXXXX backgroundXstory
Matthew was born into an underprivileged earth nation family. His father was a very humble and giving man and his mother was quite. They lived happily in the calm countryside of the earth nation. His family was one of only 25 in the whole area with only 5 benders other then himself. He was taught his form of bending by one of these villagers, and old wise man who taught him little. He was raised to be nice to all and to never act of anger. When he was 15 he left to start his own adventures as the area he grew up in began to bore him. So off he went and he has been freelancing ever since.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Earth
Specialized Bending: None yet

Weapon Class: None
Weapon Name: None
Weapon Description: None
Weapon Location: None

Secondary Weapon Class: None
Secondary Weapon Name: None
Secondary Weapon Description: None
Secondary Weapon Location: None


XXXXP E T S
Name:
Species:
Abilities:


XXXXE X T R A S
Name: (Could you please help guide me as to what goes here.)
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

EARTH TECHNIQUES None (yet)

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE Shifting Earth
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE (Again not sure what to put here)
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES (Not sure...)  

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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 7:06 pm
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Full Name: Kuzon
Nicknames:
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birth date: June 21st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Fire
Rank:
Trainee
XXXXXXXX appearance
Personality: He can be really quite if he chooses to, but he also can be quite talkative if he's with the right people. He has a difficult past, but he doesn't show it he tries to stay positive about it. He is also confident in his abilities; he isn't cocky, but he believes in his skills and it isn't easy to get in his head.
Take on battle:
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100 lbs.
Build: Athletic, mostly agile, and a little bit of muscular.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Complexion: Pale
Outfits: Wears fire bender clothing

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Isn't picky
Drink: Tea
Color: Red
Animal: Dragons

XXXXD I S L I K E S
Food: Inedible food
Drink: Alcohol
Color: Blue
Animal: N/A

XXXXXXXX backgroundXstory
Kuzon grew up like a normal kid he had a mother, father, and two siblings. They had a nice lifestyle they lived in a house and made decent money and everything was alright. His father was in the military and taught him firebending and they had a close relationship because of it. Kuzon's dream was to be in pro-bending he would always listen to it on the radio and trained even harder to make it. One day his father had to leave because the military needed him and over time his mother became really ill. It got to the point that his mother couldn't take care of him and his siblings, so they were in foster care. After several months there mother died which was very upsetting for him, and a week later they found that there father has died as well. Kuzon didn't know how to handle the news, so he was very quiet for years; he rarely spoke and stop firebending as well. He had a dream that his father was very upset with him that he stop firebending in the dream his father said these exact words, "you can't stop firebending because of me, it's apart of you, and it lives and grows in you. You promised me that you will make it to pro-bending, so live up to that promise". After that he left the orphanage, so he can live his dreams for him and his father.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Fire.
Specialized Bending: Lightining (once at master)

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:


XXXXP E T S
Name: Drago
Species: Dragon
Abilities: He can grow in size and can be pocket size or huge enough to use as transportation *can't be used as mount until he meets requirements.*


XXXXE X T R A S
Name:
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

FIRE TECHNIQUES

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES

what do you mean by specialties for fighting and effectiveness of specialties?


Personality is a little brief, but the largest issue...

A dragon at trainee rank. Even if it can't be used as a mount until you're a high rank, it's too much for right now... Dragons are master benders, a trainee having one isn't fair, and too overpowered. Also, it being able to grow and shrink in size isn't really possible, even if it is a mythical creature. Avatar is still somewhat realistic, so a growing/shrinking dragon would only be possible if it were a Spirit... and we can't have pet spirits, lol

So yeah. Just remove the dragon for now, and maybe try to get one at Adept rank or Master, but not one that can shrink and grow.


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Nicknames:
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birth date: June 21st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Fire
Rank:
Trainee
XXXXXXXX appearance
Personality: He can be really quite if he chooses to, but he also can be quite talkative if he's with the right people. He has a difficult past, but he doesn't show it he tries to stay positive about it. He is also confident in his abilities; he isn't cocky, but he believes in his skills and it isn't easy to get in his head.
Take on battle:
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100 lbs.
Build: Athletic, mostly agile, and a little bit of muscular.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Complexion: Pale
Outfits: Wears fire bender clothing

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Isn't picky
Drink: Tea
Color: Red
Animal: Dragons

XXXXD I S L I K E S
Food: Inedible food
Drink: Alcohol
Color: Blue
Animal: N/A

XXXXXXXX backgroundXstory
Kuzon grew up like a normal kid he had a mother, father, and two siblings. They had a nice lifestyle they lived in a house and made decent money and everything was alright. His father was in the military and taught him firebending and they had a close relationship because of it. Kuzon's dream was to be in pro-bending he would always listen to it on the radio and trained even harder to make it. One day his father had to leave because the military needed him and over time his mother became really ill. It got to the point that his mother couldn't take care of him and his siblings, so they were in foster care. After several months there mother died which was very upsetting for him, and a week later they found that there father has died as well. Kuzon didn't know how to handle the news, so he was very quiet for years; he rarely spoke and stop firebending as well. He had a dream that his father was very upset with him that he stop firebending in the dream his father said these exact words, "you can't stop firebending because of me, it's apart of you, and it lives and grows in you. You promised me that you will make it to pro-bending, so live up to that promise". After that he left the orphanage, so he can live his dreams for him and his father.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Fire.
Specialized Bending: Lightining (once at master)

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:


XXXXP E T S
Name: Fire Ferret
Species: Bao
Abilities: He doesn't really do much he mostly a companian, but he is quite intellgent and can aid Kuzon from time to time.


XXXXE X T R A S
Name:
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

FIRE TECHNIQUES

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES

You never answered my question about what do you mean by specialties for fighting and effectiveness of specialties?  
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Full Name: Kuzon
Nicknames:
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birth date: June 21st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Fire
Rank:
Trainee
XXXXXXXX appearance
Personality: He can be really quite if he chooses to, but he also can be quite talkative if he's with the right people. He has a difficult past, but he doesn't show it he tries to stay positive about it. He is also confident in his abilities; he isn't cocky, but he believes in his skills and it isn't easy to get in his head.
Take on battle:
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100 lbs.
Build: Athletic, mostly agile, and a little bit of muscular.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Complexion: Pale
Outfits: Wears fire bender clothing

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Isn't picky
Drink: Tea
Color: Red
Animal: Dragons

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Food: Inedible food
Drink: Alcohol
Color: Blue
Animal: N/A

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Kuzon grew up like a normal kid he had a mother, father, and two siblings. They had a nice lifestyle they lived in a house and made decent money and everything was alright. His father was in the military and taught him firebending and they had a close relationship because of it. Kuzon's dream was to be in pro-bending he would always listen to it on the radio and trained even harder to make it. One day his father had to leave because the military needed him and over time his mother became really ill. It got to the point that his mother couldn't take care of him and his siblings, so they were in foster care. After several months there mother died which was very upsetting for him, and a week later they found that there father has died as well. Kuzon didn't know how to handle the news, so he was very quiet for years; he rarely spoke and stop firebending as well. He had a dream that his father was very upset with him that he stop firebending in the dream his father said these exact words, "you can't stop firebending because of me, it's apart of you, and it lives and grows in you. You promised me that you will make it to pro-bending, so live up to that promise". After that he left the orphanage, so he can live his dreams for him and his father.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Fire.
Specialized Bending: Lightining (once at master)

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:


XXXXP E T S
Name: Drago
Species: Dragon
Abilities: He can grow in size and can be pocket size or huge enough to use as transportation *can't be used as mount until he meets requirements.*


XXXXE X T R A S
Name:
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

FIRE TECHNIQUES

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES

what do you mean by specialties for fighting and effectiveness of specialties?


Personality is a little brief, but the largest issue...

A dragon at trainee rank. Even if it can't be used as a mount until you're a high rank, it's too much for right now... Dragons are master benders, a trainee having one isn't fair, and too overpowered. Also, it being able to grow and shrink in size isn't really possible, even if it is a mythical creature. Avatar is still somewhat realistic, so a growing/shrinking dragon would only be possible if it were a Spirit... and we can't have pet spirits, lol

So yeah. Just remove the dragon for now, and maybe try to get one at Adept rank or Master, but not one that can shrink and grow.


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Full Name: Kuzon
Nicknames:
Notable Title:
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birth date: June 21st
Sexuality: Straight
Nation: Fire
Rank:
Trainee
XXXXXXXX appearance
Personality: He can be really quite if he chooses to, but he also can be quite talkative if he's with the right people. He has a difficult past, but he doesn't show it he tries to stay positive about it. He is also confident in his abilities; he isn't cocky, but he believes in his skills and it isn't easy to get in his head.
Take on battle:
Theme song:
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100 lbs.
Build: Athletic, mostly agile, and a little bit of muscular.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Complexion: Pale
Outfits: Wears fire bender clothing

XXXXXXXX personalXinfo
Relationships: None
XXXXL I K E S
Food: Isn't picky
Drink: Tea
Color: Red
Animal: Dragons

XXXXD I S L I K E S
Food: Inedible food
Drink: Alcohol
Color: Blue
Animal: N/A

XXXXXXXX backgroundXstory
Kuzon grew up like a normal kid he had a mother, father, and two siblings. They had a nice lifestyle they lived in a house and made decent money and everything was alright. His father was in the military and taught him firebending and they had a close relationship because of it. Kuzon's dream was to be in pro-bending he would always listen to it on the radio and trained even harder to make it. One day his father had to leave because the military needed him and over time his mother became really ill. It got to the point that his mother couldn't take care of him and his siblings, so they were in foster care. After several months there mother died which was very upsetting for him, and a week later they found that there father has died as well. Kuzon didn't know how to handle the news, so he was very quiet for years; he rarely spoke and stop firebending as well. He had a dream that his father was very upset with him that he stop firebending in the dream his father said these exact words, "you can't stop firebending because of me, it's apart of you, and it lives and grows in you. You promised me that you will make it to pro-bending, so live up to that promise". After that he left the orphanage, so he can live his dreams for him and his father.

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XXXXXXXX weaponXinfo
Elemental Affinity: Fire.
Specialized Bending: Lightining (once at master)

Weapon Class:
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Weapon Location:


XXXXP E T S
Name: Fire Ferret
Species: Bao
Abilities: He doesn't really do much he mostly a companian, but he is quite intellgent and can aid Kuzon from time to time.


XXXXE X T R A S
Name:
Description:


XXXXXXXX techniques

FIRE TECHNIQUES

SPIRIT TECHNIQUES

NAME OF FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIALTIES FOR FIGHTING STYLE
EFFECTIVENESS OF SPECIALTIES

You never answered my question about what do you mean by specialties for fighting and effectiveness of specialties?


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