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 Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:18 pm
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True Hip Hop Graphitty-King True Hip Hop Aight crip ima rip this, i rep the 210, ***** dont foget it// I burn niggas wit my quickness, shut em down wit my illness// you aint no rappa, u just a gangs biznitch// keep the punchlines to a minimum, meet the end of my aluminum// cant handle my lyricism, stop with your noobism// That was just an uppercut to yo style, how// well let me tell you wit a smile, take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle// This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down// Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now// my rap is so unique, like a b***h in her heat// rap with a haiku, who, me dawg you just beat yah meat// my ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo, before you can eva touch me// its sad just like the blues, on the 10 o'clock news, ***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history, dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy// cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy, hurry, befor you bore me wit yah fake a** story's// last verse before i have to bounce, dawg dont worry// if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie// If U don't strap a vest in a battle U'll end up gon Say s**t that niggas can't bust on The ryhmes I mean U really can't miss Let me demistrate, something like this "...meet the end of my aluminum"? "..... take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle" What the hell U mean? "This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now" If U said the words exactly how they are, "Down" doesn't ryhme with "Now" "My ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo...." Corny confused "***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history" This doesn't flow that great, and the atom bomb punch could have been said much better "....dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy//" This would have been a good ryhme to start with but not the way U ended with it "cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy....." Scurrvy is an illness with the lack of vitemin C, how does it cripple U? "....if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie" The wackest ending to a ryhme let alone a whole damn Diss, what was U think'n? I'd save the best punch for last thanks for the constructive critiscism but it dont really help all that much
I kno but for future reference I want U to kno why what U said was bad so U don't do it again. And better listen at least because CrippNicca ain't gonna do it, what he'll do is use Ur flaws and wipe Ur a** from the rap game! LOL So that was a bit exaggerated but I'm just saying, nobody else will do it and I wanna help cuz I'm nice |
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:20 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:20 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:21 pm
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Graphitty-King True Hip Hop Graphitty-King True Hip Hop Aight crip ima rip this, i rep the 210, ***** dont foget it// I burn niggas wit my quickness, shut em down wit my illness// you aint no rappa, u just a gangs biznitch// keep the punchlines to a minimum, meet the end of my aluminum// cant handle my lyricism, stop with your noobism// That was just an uppercut to yo style, how// well let me tell you wit a smile, take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle// This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down// Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now// my rap is so unique, like a b***h in her heat// rap with a haiku, who, me dawg you just beat yah meat// my ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo, before you can eva touch me// its sad just like the blues, on the 10 o'clock news, ***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history, dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy// cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy, hurry, befor you bore me wit yah fake a** story's// last verse before i have to bounce, dawg dont worry// if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie// If U don't strap a vest in a battle U'll end up gon Say s**t that niggas can't bust on The ryhmes I mean U really can't miss Let me demistrate, something like this "...meet the end of my aluminum"? "..... take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle" What the hell U mean? "This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now" If U said the words exactly how they are, "Down" doesn't ryhme with "Now" "My ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo...." Corny confused "***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history" This doesn't flow that great, and the atom bomb punch could have been said much better "....dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy//" This would have been a good ryhme to start with but not the way U ended with it "cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy....." Scurrvy is an illness with the lack of vitemin C, how does it cripple U? "....if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie" The wackest ending to a ryhme let alone a whole damn Diss, what was U think'n? I'd save the best punch for last thanks for the constructive critiscism but it dont really help all that much I kno but for future reference I want U to kno why what U said was bad so U don't do it again. And better listen at least because CrippNicca ain't gonna do it, what he'll do is use Ur flaws and wipe Ur a** from the rap game! LOL So that was a bit exaggerated but I'm just saying, nobody else will do it and I wanna help cuz I'm nice
ok...well thank you |
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:22 pm
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Graphitty-King True Hip Hop can we vote for ourselves???if not then my vote i just did dont count Dude itz math.... True + his own vote = 1 vote Cripp + his own vote = 1 vote So is there a point in voting for Urself?
I figured that out after i posted it.....unless |
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:22 pm
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True Hip Hop Graphitty-King True Hip Hop Graphitty-King True Hip Hop Aight crip ima rip this, i rep the 210, ***** dont foget it// I burn niggas wit my quickness, shut em down wit my illness// you aint no rappa, u just a gangs biznitch// keep the punchlines to a minimum, meet the end of my aluminum// cant handle my lyricism, stop with your noobism// That was just an uppercut to yo style, how// well let me tell you wit a smile, take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle// This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down// Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now// my rap is so unique, like a b***h in her heat// rap with a haiku, who, me dawg you just beat yah meat// my ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo, before you can eva touch me// its sad just like the blues, on the 10 o'clock news, ***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history, dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy// cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy, hurry, befor you bore me wit yah fake a** story's// last verse before i have to bounce, dawg dont worry// if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie// If U don't strap a vest in a battle U'll end up gon Say s**t that niggas can't bust on The ryhmes I mean U really can't miss Let me demistrate, something like this "...meet the end of my aluminum"? "..... take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle" What the hell U mean? "This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now" If U said the words exactly how they are, "Down" doesn't ryhme with "Now" "My ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo...." Corny confused "***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history" This doesn't flow that great, and the atom bomb punch could have been said much better "....dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy//" This would have been a good ryhme to start with but not the way U ended with it "cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy....." Scurrvy is an illness with the lack of vitemin C, how does it cripple U? "....if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie" The wackest ending to a ryhme let alone a whole damn Diss, what was U think'n? I'd save the best punch for last thanks for the constructive critiscism but it dont really help all that much I kno but for future reference I want U to kno why what U said was bad so U don't do it again. And better listen at least because CrippNicca ain't gonna do it, what he'll do is use Ur flaws and wipe Ur a** from the rap game! LOL So that was a bit exaggerated but I'm just saying, nobody else will do it and I wanna help cuz I'm nice ok...well thank you
Ur welcome then sweatdrop |
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:22 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:23 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:53 pm
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Graphitty-King True Hip Hop can we vote for ourselves???if not then my vote i just did dont count Dude itz math.... True + his own vote = 1 vote Cripp + his own vote = 1 vote So is there a point in voting for Urself?
lol i only voted for myself cause he did |
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 12:49 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2006 10:44 am
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Graphitty-King True Hip Hop Aight crip ima rip this, i rep the 210, ***** dont foget it// I burn niggas wit my quickness, shut em down wit my illness// you aint no rappa, u just a gangs biznitch// keep the punchlines to a minimum, meet the end of my aluminum// cant handle my lyricism, stop with your noobism// That was just an uppercut to yo style, how// well let me tell you wit a smile, take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle// This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down// Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now// my rap is so unique, like a b***h in her heat// rap with a haiku, who, me dawg you just beat yah meat// my ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo, before you can eva touch me// its sad just like the blues, on the 10 o'clock news, ***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history, dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy// cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy, hurry, befor you bore me wit yah fake a** story's// last verse before i have to bounce, dawg dont worry// if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie// If U don't strap a vest in a battle U'll end up gon Say s**t that niggas can't bust on The ryhmes I mean U really can't miss Let me demistrate, something like this "...meet the end of my aluminum"? "..... take yah gurl and beat like machine doin doggystyle" What the hell U mean? "This aint no gangsta rap now, cuz if it was I'de put this down Pop pop, bang bang, huh dog, I cant hear you now" If U said the words exactly how they are, "Down" doesn't ryhme with "Now" "My ryhmes will murder you, like 23 skidoo...." Corny confused "***** im straight nasty// ryhmes like atom bombs, they make history" This doesn't flow that great, and the atom bomb punch could have been said much better "....dont bother me cuz you aint lyrically worthy//" This would have been a good ryhme to start with but not the way U ended with it "cripple you lookin like a pirate with scurvy....." Scurrvy is an illness with the lack of vitemin C, how does it cripple U? "....if you come back from your dog house, then ill give you a cookie" The wackest ending to a ryhme let alone a whole damn Diss, what was U think'n? I'd save the best punch for last
noone should use, lol, lmao, rofl, noob, or any of that s**t in a battle!
NOONE! |
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Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2006 10:46 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 9:09 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:17 pm
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