.Hack Poem thing(creative title, huh ^-^)

[RivenPanic]

XxGrieverxX

RivenPanic

Elk:
Slowly losing Mia
The first person I met here
By use of this grass

This is kind based off of the 3 Volume in the Novel Series with Black Rose and Kite. Its in Haiku form 5-7-5 (i think thats right)

That's beautiful. :0

Thanks ^^ Kinda thought of it on a whim... I love those books and the whole series. Net Slum was my favorite place ever  

[RivenPanic]

Someone should make a poem bout Balmaug.  

[Kitkumi]

RivenPanic

Someone should make a poem bout Balmaug.

I kinda did, but it was about Orca too. I'm finding that doing poems about just one character at a time is hard, lol sweatdrop Why dont you write one and post it up, Riv?  

[RivenPanic]

In the beginning it was Fragment
An undeniable passion
A high school past time
A simple mistake and lead to a loner
Soon you were charmed by another
Into playing with them
It was a perfect partnership
A duo that would accept no other
How long did we practice
How long were we friends?
And we’ll be together in the end
Orca of the Azure Ocean
Balmung of the Azure Sky
Descendants of Fianna
Conquerors of the One Sin
MVP’s forever separated by the game
Now walk alone, a system admin
Figure what’s wrong with the game to win
Balmung how long will you walk
Silently in the World
Will your wing allow you to save?
You warrior friend
Can you fly with those wings?
Will you help the boy with the unique items?
Will you help save the World?
Monsters run rampant
Data is constantly corrupted
Will you be forced to run?
Will you be forced to fight?
Will you use your wings?
To shed angelic light?
Bide your time, slowly level up
Be ready for it
What ever it is
When the time comes.  

[RivenPanic]

XxGrieverxX

RivenPanic

In the beginning it was Fragment
An undeniable passion
A high school past time
A simple mistake and lead to a loner
Soon you were charmed by another
Into playing with them
It was a perfect partnership
A duo that would accept no other
How long did we practice
How long were we friends?
And we’ll be together in the end
Orca of the Azure Ocean
Balmung of the Azure Sky
Descendants of Fianna
Conquerors of the One Sin
MVP’s forever separated by the game
Now walk alone, a system admin
Figure what’s wrong with the game to win
Balmung how long will you walk
Silently in the World
Will your wing allow you to save?
You warrior friend
Can you fly with those wings?
Will you help the boy with the unique items?
Will you help save the World?
Monsters run rampant
Data is constantly corrupted
Will you be forced to run?
Will you be forced to fight?
Will you use your wings?
To shed angelic light?
Bide your time, slowly level up
Be ready for it
What ever it is
When the time comes.

surprised heart

biggrin thanks  

[RivenPanic]

The
Heroic
Expedition

While game is
Overrun with
Riddled with viruses
Live or
Die

Look at the vertical words *the first ones in each line* I used DeathNotes way of riddling.  

[Kitkumi]

Nice. However, you start sending me odd little notes and get a black notebook with names written in it and we're going to have to talk....... wait... you have one of those already, don't you ^^  

[RivenPanic]

Kitkumi

Nice. However, you start sending me odd little notes and get a black notebook with names written in it and we're going to have to talk....... wait... you have one of those already, don't you ^^

If notes would be to any thing. L whose name in our group starts with L *laughs* Yea i already have a death note, and I have a Ryuk too I'm set. And plus I eat apples. *laughs again* Leonidis ate apples too Spartans are the harbringers of death heh. Love writing things with the words going down like that though...not to get off topic