i want to battle

[L0rde]

Eclipse The Righteous

personally not tryna start something but i think both were garbage. again no offense to those that would get mad over a disappointment

only matching my opponent  

[Eclipse The Righteous]

BrownPaperBagBoy

Eclipse The Righteous

personally not tryna start something but i think both were garbage. again no offense to those that would get mad over a disappointment

only matching my opponent

heh, nicely stated. cool  

[L0rde]

IceyPimp15

sry i was late kid, but yo flows is constipated*/
im fast gunnin like bb's, u caint see me u dialated**/
(lol 6/10)
but thanks for tha hatin cause i luv it/
i spit hot shyt off the top like an oven/
(3/10 This is a cliche'd rap line...oven lines are lame nowadays)
open up and git shoved in. im burnin this *****/
bring em out. leave no reasonable doubt like i learned it frum jigga/
(7/10 Not a bad line)
a real *****. i'll let the ruger dump and make the muller jump off ya wrist/
***** u aint shyt. im a pitt, u just a flee on my d**k/
(Fleas on my d**k? 4.5/10 Overused. Made common since used by Lil Wayne on the It's Me Bitches (remix))
and when them shots holler like rottweilers it'll really make em tic***/
wit out the toc. told father time gimme a second/
(That holla/rottweiler s**t is familiar...think Cassidy used it occasionally 6/10)
robbed him for his clock like "yea tht'll teach em a lesson"/
time waits for no man unless u in my proffesion/
(WHAT PROFESSION U IN? ***** THIS IS s**t. 4/10)
BrownPaperBagBoy reppin the west like a legend****/
ready wit weapons. leave a whole in his heart like depression/
(4/10 That legend line was stupid...a legend tells what symbols used on a map mean...compasses tell directions)

Overall your verse was....uhhhh...what are the words I'm looking for...mediocre. U seem to b a new gangsta rapper who is talented in similies...Ur average was around a 4.9...lmao. The sad part is that even with that 4.9, u mutilated ur competition. Note he's a noob who's beginning to get this rap thing so losses r 2 b expected. He will get better. Azhjfgjhgf keep practicing you'll get better over time.

xd its a freestyle, tha ******** u want for free?  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

...Lol i find it funny that ur talkin s**t but yet u used a Lil Wayne line in your rhyme..."Ur a bunch of fleas on my d**k"
Exact same s**t Weezy says in "Its Me Snitches" remix...
So who knows what else you took...  

[CripNiccaFoLyfe]

A2DaMFK

...Lol i find it funny that ur talkin s**t but yet u used a Lil Wayne line in your rhyme..."Ur a bunch of fleas on my d**k"
Exact same s**t Weezy says in "Its Me Snitches" remix...
So who knows what else you took...

rofl ..........  

[L0rde]

A2DaMFK

...Lol i find it funny that ur talkin s**t but yet u used a Lil Wayne line in your rhyme..."Ur a bunch of fleas on my d**k"
Exact same s**t Weezy says in "Its Me Snitches" remix...
So who knows what else you took...

i play wit influenza ***** my games sick
dnt try me like a trina bitin on waynes d**k
u lame b***h. u on some cam'ron flow
u bout tht nitty griddy, itchy bitchy tampon flow
so stop the hatin, debatin on how u might git off as the truth
u just bad meat, mad no ones bitin off of ********... another freestyle for yo punk a**. say i bit tht
matter of fact, gimme a break like a kit-kat
i spit bars so hard, u'd think i wripped em frum a six-pack
but not no diet-coke, my ***** we talkin bodies, f**
i let the iron smoke toke then we stuff him in a body bag
im prolly mad cause im a G and u just tested it
no SATs ***** please im just a mess wit it
anything commin off the top is crushal
and my guns be like my d**k: bigger than usual
but ***** u shuld kno. u on it pretty hard
***** im the king u just another criminal card
and not tht u would kno who tht was but trust me cuz
yo whole flow embodied that busters ugly mug

another freestyle u b*****d. all off the top and it still wuld kill anything u wrote down bytch. shyt, tryin me like im related to his punk a**  

[L0rde]

and for tha record, Wayne was not tha first to use tht line, its ancient. there for sayin i bit off of him is tha sorriest criticism a loser could make. and even w/out tht line i burned u ***** so git on my hype or go home!  

[CripNiccaFoLyfe]

oh s**t rofl  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

this faggots raps monotonous, Ill rip out his esophagus fa talkin s**t...
this clowns a bore, hes 'bound ta fall' like 'buildins before demolishment'
I cause collosal carnage n harness the darkest offense so pay homage
or I'll repay damage n spray cannons, you left heartless since you started it
this the last bar, you jus act hard..n let em 'gass you past the laps' like 'nascar'
im similar to 'ya mother' brother, leave bloods color 'whiplash' n have ya 'a** scarred'

-Get ya vocabulary up *****...
U aint burn s**t... I was jus playin around ya kno havin a lil one on one scince i we both new but u jus come off talkin s**t...Well then ***** lets go.. u kno wat i aint even finished ill hit u up wit another verse...Ho-ish *****  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

You comming at me like i'm a rookie, boy i'm a ******** 'vet/'
i'm rippin off ya neck, forget Gaia ban em from the i'nternet'/
steel weapons when i cop it, raise up, smile and 'c**k it'/
protection nice like a quarterback when he in the 'pocket'/
but let's stay on 'topic', keep ya rap safe Yung Blessed a 'crook'/
heard he beat a dude up,and took him for his rhyme 'book'/
Ak a super villian, when it come to killin/
burner to head leave his brain on the ceilin/
***** sit down and listen,nobody believes your written's,
Rap's like your religion, only "Five" percent wasn't bitten

p***y ***** freestyle my d**k u dun made this s**t personal
Either choke or hit me bak but ima keep commin at u u worthless piece of s**t wish u mama had an abortion dannm daddy shoulda wore a rubber...  

[IceyPimp15]

A2DaMFK

You comming at me like i'm a rookie, boy i'm a ******** 'vet/'
i'm rippin off ya neck, forget Gaia ban em from the i'nternet'/
steel weapons when i cop it, raise up, smile and 'c**k it'/
protection nice like a quarterback when he in the 'pocket'/
but let's stay on 'topic', keep ya rap safe Yung Blessed a 'crook'/
heard he beat a dude up,and took him for his rhyme 'book'/
Ak a super villian, when it come to killin/
burner to head leave his brain on the ceilin/
***** sit down and listen,nobody believes your written's,
Rap's like your religion, only "Five" percent wasn't bitten

p***y ***** freestyle my d**k u dun made this s**t personal
Either choke or hit me bak but ima keep commin at u u worthless piece of s**t wish u mama had an abortion dannm daddy shoulda wore a rubber...

lmao...***** ur hilarious. How the ******** u be dissin and tell peeps 2 get their vocab up when ur in summer school? xd But do u homeboi, just watch who u choose 2 come at. All eyez on u lil *****. BUT 4 the record some of those bars were ridiculous...some MJ off the wall s**t.  

[CripNiccaFoLyfe]

IceyPimp15

A2DaMFK

You comming at me like i'm a rookie, boy i'm a ******** 'vet/'
i'm rippin off ya neck, forget Gaia ban em from the i'nternet'/
steel weapons when i cop it, raise up, smile and 'c**k it'/
protection nice like a quarterback when he in the 'pocket'/
but let's stay on 'topic', keep ya rap safe Yung Blessed a 'crook'/
heard he beat a dude up,and took him for his rhyme 'book'/
Ak a super villian, when it come to killin/
burner to head leave his brain on the ceilin/
***** sit down and listen,nobody believes your written's,
Rap's like your religion, only "Five" percent wasn't bitten

p***y ***** freestyle my d**k u dun made this s**t personal
Either choke or hit me bak but ima keep commin at u u worthless piece of s**t wish u mama had an abortion dannm daddy shoulda wore a rubber...

lmao...***** ur hilarious. How the ******** u be dissin and tell peeps 2 get their vocab up when ur in summer school? xd But do u homeboi, just watch who u choose 2 come at. All eyez on u lil *****. BUT 4 the record some of those bars were ridiculous...some MJ off the wall s**t.

lol why aint he spit like that when battlin me  

[Chames The Lyrical Spirit]

Im in summer school 2 get extra credits so i dont hav 2 do alot my senior year and im in Basketball conditioning...I was only callin out Yun Blessed cuz i neva wanted no friction then he come off talkin s**t...And i didnt care at 1st but how are you gonna talk s**t after you took lines? So i was got mad and really started writin...The other thing was a verse i wrote when i was like 9 i jus switched a couple words and posted it up i was lazy...  

[L0rde]

A2DaMFK

Im in summer school 2 get extra credits so i dont hav 2 do alot my senior year and im in Basketball conditioning...I was only callin out Yun Blessed cuz i neva wanted no friction then he come off talkin s**t...And i didnt care at 1st but how are you gonna talk s**t after you took lines? So i was got mad and really started writin...The other thing was a verse i wrote when i was like 9 i jus switched a couple words and posted it up i was lazy...

wow, did u read wat i sed? well i will reply to tht last lil verse u spit if u agree to put some gold up, if not then i won because only our first verses counted  

[L0rde]

and dnt go thinkin im trynna git outta this. im trynna git my money back up. if u aint kno im a REAL vet in this guild, but my account got hacked. if u dnt believe me go check out anything posted by "account banned"