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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 11:50 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:47 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:04 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:07 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:24 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:19 am
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fumiko_uchiha Wow... just.. wow. XD I wrote a description for Sickness, my failed neglected attempt, and someone rejected it because they said it was 'evil and horrible.' Here's the description: Quote: Sickness was an experiment in neglected dragons. From the day her egg was laid to the day she became an adult her dragon researcher kept her hidden until the last possible moment. It took all of the dragon researcher's will to keep her hidden, isolated and alone for so long; the researcher even made it so she had softshell as an egg to better the chances of her being sick. In the end the experiment was a failure but she is still much weaker than normal dragons of her breed. While the researcher shows little remorse, she WAS only following orders after all, the researcher wonders how many dragons have died in trying to replicate these poor, isolated creatures that live their lives crippled and weak. Now I love these dragons, but I also know that they're just pixels. What are your opinions on this description, guys (and girls)?
I haven't had much luck writing my own descriptions and they were "nice" ones... only using the rationale some arbitrary person did to label yours, Fumiko. I thought your description was accurate and actually a triumph to the dragon's will to live.
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:46 am
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Willa-Wisp fumiko_uchiha Wow... just.. wow. XD I wrote a description for Sickness, my failed neglected attempt, and someone rejected it because they said it was 'evil and horrible.' Here's the description: Quote: Sickness was an experiment in neglected dragons. From the day her egg was laid to the day she became an adult her dragon researcher kept her hidden until the last possible moment. It took all of the dragon researcher's will to keep her hidden, isolated and alone for so long; the researcher even made it so she had softshell as an egg to better the chances of her being sick. In the end the experiment was a failure but she is still much weaker than normal dragons of her breed. While the researcher shows little remorse, she WAS only following orders after all, the researcher wonders how many dragons have died in trying to replicate these poor, isolated creatures that live their lives crippled and weak. Now I love these dragons, but I also know that they're just pixels. What are your opinions on this description, guys (and girls)? I haven't had much luck writing my own descriptions and they were "nice" ones... only using the rationale some arbitrary person did to label yours, Fumiko. I thought your description was accurate and actually a triumph to the dragon's will to live. Heh.. thanks. ^_^ I try to come up with witty and interesting descriptions. And a few of them have been approved and can be seen on my dragon's pages. (I think Moegami, Gekigami, Mizugami, and Tsukuyomi are the ones that have been approved.)
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:52 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:11 pm
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