Fun House :: Avatar Gurus :: OPEN!

[klausolas]

Okay rate me please
style: harsh (I can take it)  

[poojuice]

klausolas

Okay rate me please
style: harsh (I can take it)

Harsh it is then. :3

6/10.
Generally, I like the combination of items. I just believe you can do MUCH better, especially with a female avi. You can try to distribute the colors more. (For example: The only gray in the avi is the Lunar Scythe. The black and white of the cranes are not as bad, but also stand out) The pants kind of look like just one big mass of color. Try a different combination of skirts, stockings, shoes, etc.
You can also try different accessories to balance the colors out.

Bottom line: Okay avi, but colors are not balanced so well.

Your hair kinda stands out too much too, but that's not a problem for me. x3 I don't mind that as much.

 

[HuskyRedz]

Both Grade Me!!

SUPER HARSH!!!

LOL!!!  

[Bluegenius]

I'd like a style one rating by anybody.  

[poojuice]

@redz
7/10
Well, the bright orange from your suit is kinda amassed. It would be better to spread out colors more.

@Bluegenius
7/10
I really like the colors. I would suggest going for a different combination of clothes, and not just going for gowns. Gowns tend to look un-detailed. Plus, they don't allow you to spread colors more. xp I don't like gowns too much for that reason.

 

[Bara no Chikai]

Sorry, I wasn't able to reply much. I was very sick. Dx

Aurora Sing

Post a sticky in the main forum with a link to this tek-tek spot that can help you get some more people in here...What about a "tek tek" FunHouse subforum? Would that be better?

An entire subforum? But perhaps not just for tekteks. Do you believe the Fun House should have its own Avatar Talk subforum? O:

redzisminez

Both Grade Me!!

SUPER HARSH!!!

LOL!!!

I agree with Juicey-poo. The orange is way too concentrated on the center. Perhaps the Skull & Bones floatie instead of the pumpkin?

6/10

Bluegenius

I'd like a style one rating by anybody.

The greenblue of that Fausto's Bottle sticks out a little too much; it doesn't blend very well. Also I suggest gold shoes.
I do like the use of the rest of the items though. Particularly, how some the lace from the Gothic Veil shows underneath the wench bodice.

7/10  

[poojuice]

Rate this avi of mine, both of you?
Harsh, please.


 

[Xena~Rose]

Anyone Rate me please, Harsh is fine as long as you give me details. Like what I should get rid of or what I should maybe hunt down.

I stick almost purely to green and gold/yellow. Sometimes with browns or tans so I don't go much for anything not those colors.  

[poojuice]

Xena~Rose

Anyone Rate me please, Harsh is fine as long as you give me details. Like what I should get rid of or what I should maybe hunt down.

I stick almost purely to green and gold/yellow. Sometimes with browns or tans so I don't go much for anything not those colors.

6/10.

It's a teeny bit bottom heavy, so maybe you could use some top-focused handhelds and the like to balance out.

The colors are a bit overloaded too.
Try to focus on 3 colors only, 4 at max. Right now, there seems to be a few reds and bluish-whites that look lost.

Also, I don't suggest gowns too much. Gowns tend to be a huge obstacle in color flow.

Overall, it's okay, but it still needs more work.
 

[Bara no Chikai]

poojuice

Rate this avi of mine, both of you?
Harsh, please.

Your hair exploded. Kinda like mine IRL.
I think you should change the GO Player to white.
And then put Demonic Anklets on your ankles. 'Cause it looks too top-heavy.
6/10

Xena~Rose

Anyone Rate me please, Harsh is fine as long as you give me details. Like what I should get rid of or what I should maybe hunt down.

I stick almost purely to green and gold/yellow. Sometimes with browns or tans so I don't go much for anything not those colors.

I suggest taking out the Autumn Glory leaves or change its pose. It just adds random clutter everywhere. I also suggest the white Blade's Belt to make your center area a little more interesting. I just don't know if it'll layer properly. sweatdrop Be sure to preview first! Throw in a Clover pin also to make your center area a little bit more interesting, and I think its the same shade/almost same shade as your hair style.

5.6/10



Nobody wants the other rating styles? DDD8  

[poojuice]

Bara no Chikai

poojuice

Rate this avi of mine, both of you?
Harsh, please.

Your hair exploded. Kinda like mine IRL.
I think you should change the GO Player to white.
And then put Demonic Anklets on your ankles. 'Cause it looks too top-heavy.
6/10

Xena~Rose

Anyone Rate me please, Harsh is fine as long as you give me details. Like what I should get rid of or what I should maybe hunt down.

I stick almost purely to green and gold/yellow. Sometimes with browns or tans so I don't go much for anything not those colors.

I suggest taking out the Autumn Glory leaves or change its pose. It just adds random clutter everywhere. I also suggest the white Blade's Belt to make your center area a little more interesting. I just don't know if it'll layer properly. sweatdrop Be sure to preview first! Throw in a Clover pin also to make your center area a little bit more interesting, and I think its the same shade/almost same shade as your hair style.

5.6/10



Nobody wants the other rating styles? DDD8

I like the simple rating styles. xD
Oh, I wasn't referring to this avi. O__o
I wanted to have the avi before this rated.

Wait 'till I put it on again, I'll have you rate it. xD


 

[HuskyRedz]

poojuice

Rate this avi of mine, both of you?
Harsh, please.

7/10 I feel like I agree with bara...  

[HuskyRedz]

Please Grade Harshly....Both of you!! Just wondering....if this tektek was good...(?)  

[poojuice]

It looks a bit settish.


 

[Bara no Chikai]

redzisminez

Please Grade Harshly....Both of you!! Just wondering....if this tektek was good...(?)

I don't see what set Juicey-poo is talking about. o__o

Anyways, you needs more red or orange in the center. Maybe Fire Gauntlet in the arm nearest the viewer?
And the shoes don't match.
6.3/10