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 Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:53 am
Zaaki Your poem's are awesome mashallah xd Poems not Poem's cool
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Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:04 am
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-keisha rayana hanaquil23 Crew
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Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 9:35 pm
salam.. you have posted lots of religious poem... but now, i would like to post the poem i have made for muhaymin. we are friends in real, but nowadays, he was depressed and i made a poem for him to cheer him up. i hope you won't get mad. biggrin so, here's my poem for muhaymin and i just want to share it with you guys : You’ve Got A Friend
I’m not a perfect friend,
Nor a perfect person;
But I’m trying my best
To be a good friend of yours.
Five years have almost past,
And we’re still good friends.
We’ve been through it all,
A lot of memories to keep.
You’ve been depressed, nowadays;
Dealing only with yourself,
And saddened by the things or thoughts
You may not understand.
I may not know how hard
you feel right now;
but remember I’m here,
I’ll lend a helping hand.
Have this little thing from me;
A little way to cheer you up…
You’ve got a friend, MUHAYMIN;
You’re not alone… icon_biggrin.gif
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 5:17 am
-keisha rayana hanaquil23 salam.. you have posted lots of religious poem... but now, i would like to post the poem i have made for muhaymin. we are friends in real, but nowadays, he was depressed and i made a poem for him to cheer him up. i hope you won't get mad. biggrin so, here's my poem for muhaymin and i just want to share it with you guys : You’ve Got A Friend
I’m not a perfect friend,
Nor a perfect person;
But I’m trying my best
To be a good friend of yours.
Five years have almost past,
And we’re still good friends.
We’ve been through it all,
A lot of memories to keep.
You’ve been depressed, nowadays;
Dealing only with yourself,
And saddened by the things or thoughts
You may not understand.
I may not know how hard
you feel right now;
but remember I’m here,
I’ll lend a helping hand.
Have this little thing from me;
A little way to cheer you up…
You’ve got a friend, MUHAYMIN;
You’re not alone… icon_biggrin.gif
That's a nice poem xd
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dark__sunshin Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:28 am
Speechless
When the sound of the thunder calls
It blows my words
And when the clouds gather
My words madly shatter
Drops get down
And my words scatter around
Darkness begins to thread around
Words start to whisper a sound
Then Rain covers miles
While words fade within skies
And the frozen snow on the other hand
Carries my words strongly bound
On the next day , All goes away..
Then sun shines brightly
And
My Words just bounce lightly Done By : Hadeel mrgreen which is uhum uhum .. ME !! ^^ Copy right.2008
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:32 am
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dark__sunshin Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:04 am
really ????? i thought it was awful stressed
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 11:21 am
What ya talking about? eek It's really pro! It's a very nice poem xd
And sister, i'm telling ya! Your english, is not bad! surprised
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-keisha rayana hanaquil23 Crew
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:23 pm
zaaki: TY for appreciating the poem i've made. biggrin
DS: it's a nice poem.. biggrin
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 10:01 pm
-keisha rayana hanaquil23 zaaki: TY for appreciating the poem i've made. biggrin DS: it's a nice poem.. biggrin
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dark__sunshin Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:59 am
Zaaki What ya talking about? eek It's really pro! It's a very nice poem xd And sister, i'm telling ya! Your english, is not bad! surprised xD .. thankz =) !~ Haaaaaahaha ;P .. not bad!~ is that like .. good ?! xD haha
@keisha : ur poem rocks gurl biggrin .. it shows how u are a true friend ^^
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 8:58 am
dark__sunshin Zaaki What ya talking about? eek It's really pro! It's a very nice poem xd And sister, i'm telling ya! Your english, is not bad! surprised xD .. thankz =) !~ Haaaaaahaha ;P .. not bad!~ is that like .. good ?! xD haha
@keisha : ur poem rocks gurl biggrin .. it shows how u are a true friend ^^
Not bad = Good razz It's slang wink rofl Here in Denmark, people changed it all to slang i guess... Old danish is a really fine language. It's like french... lol New danish, is like german wink razz It is... The gramatic is just 10 times harder...
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-keisha rayana hanaquil23 Crew
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:03 pm
dark__sunshin
@keisha : ur poem rocks gurl biggrin .. it shows how u are a true friend ^^
_rainarai_ And Rayana, your poem comes from your heart, it's nice ^^ TY sis.. heart yah... btw, my nicknem too is rai. ^^
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:56 pm
-keisha rayana hanaquil23 TY sis.. heart yah... btw, my nicknem too is rai. ^^
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