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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2020 12:47 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2020 6:17 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2020 6:17 pm
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Character Name: Edward Schnitt Character Class: Hueco-Hybrid Bount Link to Profile: ![User Image](https://i.imgur.com/jumkCUL.png) Ability: Hueco-Hybrid Mutation (Lv. 50) Name: Shadow Thread Description: Edward can pull a black energy thread from the hole in his chest that when attached to another living being will allow Edward and whoever he is attached to to share their pools of spirit energy. Cost: 2 SE per thread to maintain Effect: After attaching a thread to a willing target, Edward and the target can both spend up to 10 points of the other's SE pool per post. By default Edward can only have one thread out at a time (the max number must be increased by a separate custom to have multiple) Duration: Until Edward dismisses them or they are forcefully cut by someone Cool-down:After a thread is cut there is a 5 post cool-down before that thread is repaired and can be used again (this cool-down is separate per thread and only one thread can be repaired at a time so if multiple threads are cut they form a Que of separate cool-downs that happen in sequence rather than being simultaneous) Range:
To attach to a willing target: Touch Max length of thread(s): Edward's SP meters
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - - 1. Approved- Jake Comments: This ability is way too busy. It needs to be narrowed down. It seems like multiple customs all in one. 2. Approved - Chaos Comments:[/i] Need a cost of some sort. Ex: If you're transfering SE, costs the same amount in HP
Ability: Bount Spirit Release Lv. 1 Name: Leaking Dark Power Description: the blackness of Edwards eyes grows darker and shadows start leaking from his eyes like tears Effect: Edward gains a +5 boost to Spirit Power and Speed for every 100 reiatsu he has (minimum +5) with a maximum boost of +200. Activating this form requires 5 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
Quote: - - - - - - -- - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - - 1. Approved - Jake Comments: 2. Approved - Cass Comments:
Ability: Bount Spirit Release Lv. 2 Name: "Witness my Dark Power in it's True Glory" Description: Edward's entire body is cloaked in shadows of dark energy and begins cracking with bolts of red electricity. Effect: Edward gains a +10 boost to Spirit Power and Speed for every 100 reiatsu the user has (minimum +20) with a maximum boost of +300. Activating this form requires 8 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - - 1. Approved - Jake Comments: 2. Approved - Cass Comments:
Ability: Bount Doll Spirit Release Lv. 1 Name: Heavily Armored Wolf Description: Fenrir's first level Spirit Release hardens his armored outer shell. Effect: Fenrir gains a +5 boost to his Defense and Stamina for every 100 reiatsu the user has (minimum +5) with a maximum boost of +200. Activating this form requires 5 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
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Ability: Bount Doll Spirit Release Lv. 2 Name: Red Lightning Wolf Description: Fenrir's Second level of spirit release completely removes his armored outer shell revealing his true form as a beast formed out of pure electricity. Effect: Fenrir gains a +10 boost to his Strength and Speed for every 100 reiatsu the user has (minimum +20) with a maximum boost of +300. Activating this form requires 8 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
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Ability: Bount Doll Lv. 25 Name: Armored Snout to Tail Description: Fenrir fights in a manner that keeps his more heavily armored areas as the only open places to attack him and what few less armored areas he has out of harms way. Effect: Defensive Style: a +5 power boost to defensive actions per 100 Rei (Cap of +50).
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Ability: Bount Doll Lv. 50 Name: Electrified Acidic Touch Description: After spending a long time in hueco mundo with his master Fenrir is just as physically corrupted as his master and his mutation is the Acidic Touch that is standard to most hollow's hands has been both been increased in potency and applied to the entirety of his pure electric form and solid outer shell. Effect: Increases the attack power boost from "Acidic Touch" by an additional +10 (making it +15) and makes it apply to all of Fenrir's physical attacks where any part of his body comes into contact (not just his hands or fists)
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Ability: Bount Doll Lv. 100 Name: Pinning Claw Strike Description: Fenrir forces his claws through the target(s)' foot or leg and into the ground and puts his whole weight into keeping them pinned. Cost: 3 SE for the initial attack and 1 SE per post to maintain the pin Effect: Fenrir makes a basic claw attack at a target in range (or two claw attacks at two targets in range) with 0 Power, and Speed equal to Fenrir's movement speed. If the target(s) is(/are) hit they are put into a pin that prevents them from dodging and can only be broken if they have Strength greater than Fenrir's Strength + 20. Fenrir can not use his claws to make attacks or dodge while he is maintaining the pin. Duration: Until the target(s) break free or Fenrir releases the pin Cool-down: 2 Posts after the pin ends Range: Melee
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - - 1. Approved- Jake Comments: Too busy, and the comparison makes no sense. If you're physically restraining a person, it would be Strength vs Strength. Also it's pretty overpowered when it calculates Attack Speed and Attack Power off the Attack Speed stat. Then it does damage, and inflicts a pinning maneuver. 2. Comments: Approved - Chaos
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2020 9:31 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2020 11:47 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2020 9:04 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2020 5:44 am
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Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2020 11:57 am
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Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2020 2:17 pm
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Character Name:Chouko Luna Yukimura Character Class:Powered Soul Link to Profile: Ability:Level 25 Specialization Name:Soul-Frightening Blades Description: Chouko devised a dangerous fighting style that involves making blades of darkness, forming them then throwing them at her opponent or using them up in close combat dealing with her opponent personally. Effect: +5 Offensive. This bonus increases by +5 each time the style improves (Cap of +50).
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Character Name:Chouko Luna Yukimura Character Class:Powered Soul Link to Profile: Ability:Spirit Release Lv.1 Name:Senshi Yami Description:With this power, she takes on her true form of Yami, her scout persona, hiding her civilian self Chouko. Effect: Speed and SP are increased by +5; further increasing them by another +5 per 100 Rei Chouko has [maximum of +200], 5 SE [Activation]; 3 SE [Maintain]
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Character Name: Chouko Luna Yukimura Character Class: Powered Soul Link to Profile: Ability:Level 100 Specialization Ability One Name:Body Of Darkness Description: Chouko reaches the true pinnacle of her darkness techniques as she no longer holds back any reserved power. Effect: Increases the Attack Speed of Chouko's [Darkness] techniques by +15 and their power by +5; +2 SE [to costs]
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Character Name: Chouko Luna Yukimura Character Class: Powered Soul Link to Profile: Ability:Level 100 Specialization Ability Two Name:Dark Regeneration Description:Chouko's body whenever injured, by will, the wounds would mend itself back together like shadows as if nothing happened. Effect: Chouko can use this as an [Augment] to heal their own HP [by 20] or recover from one stage of a Wound [Fatal > Major] this post. 4 SE [HP Regen]; 4 SE [Wound Recovery]
Quote: - - - - - - - - - - Approval/Denial - - - - - - - - - - 1. Approved - Chaos Comments: Healing costs a defensive/offensive action unless it is a technique like a hollow's regeneration. If you, or gain, the ability to learn regeneration via Hollow techs, this needs to changed or denied. 2. Approved - Ryuu Comments: As the guy who helped make this tech for him; it works like Hollow Regeneration. It has to be paid for still, but it just happens. Chouko can choose either the HP or wound, but it should prioritize Fatal Wounds.
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