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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:53 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:24 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:37 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:47 pm
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Kali Eyad I really enjoyed "Pillage." It wasn't quite what I was expecting from the title. The allusions to a ship were well used. Really good. "I Think It's Fall Again" was pretty good, but "The Lights are on, but nobody's home" seems like it's a saying that is too well known to be used as an opening line, especially in such a short poem. Mosqui It seems to get harder to write a new poem every night without repeating subject matter over and over again. I also seem to be lacking sources for inspiration aside from the drained and lonely feeling I've been having frequently. Not exactly the fuel for great poetry. Repitition of subject matter shouldn't be a problem as long as you are expressing it in a new way, or from a different view. Any feeling, even if it is "drained and lonely," can be turned to good use as inspiration. Especially if you don't mind probing personal feelings and posting them for anybody to read... xd After all, it's easiest to write what you know. At least that's what they say (not sure who "they" is, but someone said it before me) and that's usually how I write best.
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad that you enjoy some of my stuff.
I know that expressing the same items in new ways can make for decent poetry, the thing is that, while that may be the case, I don't want to keep writing the same things over and over again.
I'd like to come up with novel and original. Something that can set me fourth as a leader and not a follwer. Now I'm not saying that I want to write something that's going to make me famous and earn me beaucoup bucks. I just want to write something that's really going to make people think, and maybe even inspire them. I don't think I can do that when I'm rewriting the same material
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:25 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 9:35 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 12:20 am
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 5:17 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:20 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:24 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 3:46 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 6:57 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:59 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:16 pm
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