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 Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:37 pm
shadow toan ~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
First encounters:
Coredramon: Toan and Dracomon was traveling threw the digital forest and happen upon a lake. Toan and Dracomon decided to take a rest from their long journey and went to the lake to take a drink but when they were about 2 feet away from the water a serpent arise from the lake and blasted at them. luckily Toan training keep them alive and roll to the side in the same instant dodging the blast. Toan took out the Digivice to examine the new serpent and found out it was metal Seadramon. "Leave before I destroy you! This is my Lake Everything in the forest is my slave bow before my power!" and smash his tail at them. Dracomon stood petrified and couldn't move so Toan Knock him out of the way and was sent smashing back into a tree shattering it and landing straight into another one and the tree fell to the ground. The Digivice fell out of Toan hand and started to glow. Dracomon Face suddenly went dark and angry and he started to glow with the Digivice. just before Toan slip out of consciousness He saw Dracomon Growing bigger. When Toan reawaken he saw a new dragon digimon staring at him he never saw the digimon before but looking into his eyes he knew... Dracomon has digivolve.
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~ Toan and Dracomon were traveling through the digital forest and happened upon a lake. Toan and Dracomon decided to take a rest from their long journey and went to the lake to take a drink, but when they were about two feet away from the water, a serpent arsse from the lake and blasted them. Luckily Toan's training kept them alive and rolled to the side in the same instant dodging the blast. Toan took out the Digivice to examine the new serpent and found out it was metal Seadramon. "Leave before I destroy you! This is my Lake Everything in the forest is my slave bow before my power!" and smashed his tail at them. Dracomon stood petrified and couldn't move so Toan knocked him out of the way and was sent smashing back into a tree shattering it and landing straight into another one and the tree fell to the ground. The Digivice fell out of Toan hand and started to glow. Dracomon's face suddenly went dark and angry and he started to glow with the Digivice. Just before Toan slip in unconsciousness he saw Dracomon growing bigger. When Toan reawakened he saw a new dragon digimon staring at him. He never saw the digimon before but looking into his eyes he knew... Dracomon had digivolve.
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:08 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
ok that dont explain the mistakes
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:53 am
No, I fixed the mistakes. Read it over again. Read the one you wrote, and then read it fixed. ...Tenses seem to be your main problem. But otherwise, it's alright.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:05 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
alright thanks hmmm i read over some of the guild encounter story and bio they dont have much of an imagination
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:50 pm
I know. It happens a lot.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 7:20 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
hmmm what is television doing to these kids now a day
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 3:56 am
I don't know. Maybe they should read more, ban television one or two days a week. All you do is read all day. Like the weekend. That would be perfect!!!
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 12:28 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
hell no! i watch tv on the weekend Saturday anyway they should do it for Monday and Sunday and maybe ban church as well i hate going on Sunday
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:40 pm
I don't know...some people like church. I'm not particular about it, but its okay. I'm for home churching people myself, where you do your church things whenever you feel like. I don't like having to listen to some pastor spout what they think and then you have to donate to the church and then you've got choir and then you have people becoming radical Christians...it's not right if you ask me.
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:52 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
Toan shrugs "What can you do?" oh i made Wingdramon story first page
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:27 am
Sweet. Still have some minor errors, but I forgive you. 3nodding Because you amuse me.
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:08 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
Well you freak me out but in a good way i think 3nodding
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:14 pm
As long as its in a good way, I'm okay with freaking you out.
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:23 pm
~I have search the earth and walk among the heaven and hell for an answer and my results are.....~
"She Freaking me out too" Said Wingdramon Toan look up and said "Be polite" Wingdramon laughs "Your weren't being polite" Toan shrugs "Fair enough"
~Their are idiots everywhere.....~
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:39 pm
I wouldn't worry about me. Honestly, I'm normal, just quirky.
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