JAPANESE Lesson Five - Professions

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. watashi wa jyuu kyuu sai desu. ryokou "watashi no kazoku wa mama to papa...desu

heart understand.  

[onoir]

はじめまして。私の名前はズバーツです。じゅういつさいです。生徒です。私は高校二年です。私のかぞくは母と姉と兄です。どうぞよろしくおねがいします。

Is this correct?  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. watashi wa jyuu kyuu sai desu. ryokou "watashi no kazoku wa mama to papa...desu
wakari mashita.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. watashi wa jyuu kyuu sai desu. ryokou "watashi no kazoku wa mama to papa...desu
wakari mashita.  

[Ryuondo]

始めまして！俺の名はリュオンドだ。俺は二十三歳だ。サクラメント州立大学の五年生だ。アジア研究を専攻します。俺はＪＥＴの英語の先生になりたいだ。  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. watashi wa jyuu kyuu sai desu. ryokou "watashi no kazoku wa mama to papa...desu
wakari mashita.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. Watashi wa ni jyuu sai desu. watashi no kazoku wa mama to papa desu. Watashi wa gaku ichi nen desu.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. Watashi wa ni jyuu sai desu. watashi no kazoku wa mama to papa desu. Watashi wa gaku ichi nen desu.  

[Raven5023]

Watashi wa Raven5023 desu. Jyuu kyuu sai desu. Gakusei desu. Daigaku ichi nen sei desu. Watashi no kazoku wa haha to chichi to futari otouto to watashi desu. Haha wa shufu desu, chichi wa kaishain desu xD  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. Douzo Yoroshiku. Gakusei desu. Watashi ni jyuu sai desu. watashi no Kazoku haha to chichi desu.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. Douzo Yoroshiku. Gakusei desu. Watashi ni jyuu sai desu. watashi no Kazoku haha to chichi desu.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite. Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. Watashi wa juuhachi sai desu. Watashi no kazoku wa chichi to haha to imouto desu. Watashi wa daigaku ichi nen sei desu. Douzo yoroshiku onegaishimasu.  

[Priestess_Kelina]

Konichi wa, minna san. Watashi wa Kelina imasu. Ima wa, shigoto wo nai desu. sweatdrop

If I remember the first lesson correctly, Hajimemashita should only be used the first time you introduce yourself. Afterwards, a simple hello will suffice. The three terms are...

Good morning: Ohayo gozaimasu. (Ohayo for short.)
Good afternoon: Konichi wa. (Not sure if thats one word or two.)
Good evening: Konban wa. (Again, not sure if thats one word or two.

You should be able to figure out when to use which one on your own, I should think. biggrin

As for the second sentence, I'm trying to say I'm unemployed right now. Ima means now, nai desu is the negative form of desu. I'm missing the word for "have" but you get the idea.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite. Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. Watashi wa juuhachi sai desu. Watashi no kazoku wa chichi to haha to imouto desu. Watashi wa daigaku ichi nen sei desu. Douzo yoroshiku onegaishimasu.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

Hajimemashite! watashi no namae wa Emiko desu.Douzo yoroshiku. Watashi wa ni juu ichi sai desu. Watashi no kazoku wa chichi to haha desu. Watashi wa gakusei ichi ni sei desu.