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[CRIT] Please critique my character!

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Wolfish Nature

Durem Rogue

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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:21 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Kelpie (Sea Variant) Monster Looking For: I would like people's general impressions and would espcecially like critique's/suggestions of the Fear ability. For whatever I think monster's are the trickiest . . . Quest Link: Mairead Awaits!

Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:04 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Jiang-Shi - Undead Looking For: Everything! V8 Crit me to the moon and back, please and thank you! <3 Quest Link: Say hello to Cody Li~

alpha lyrae

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Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 12:20 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: SWind-Up Doll - Monster Looking For: A general Critique, especially on personality, since I'm bad at those ><;; I just want to make sure he's someone that would be welcome into the academy. Quest Link: Ralph

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:22 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Unformed - Monster Looking For: E-everything? Especially the subspecies, though, since the Unformed are an idea I've toyed with for a while and I want to know if it fits. I am super-enthusiastic about them but everyone else may not be. :c Quest Link: Nerves!

Coronaviridae

Business Cat

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Citanul Lunatic

Devout Lunatic

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Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 9:35 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Monster - Werehyena Looking For: Everything, haha. This is my first quest, and I want to see if I did it alright! Quest Link: Homer the Werehyena

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 1:46 am


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Xiuhcoatl - Monster Looking For: Anything and everything to help her become something real * o* Critiques are more than love <333 Quest Link: Cleite

Frezir

Kawaii Wolf

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amicableAggressor

Versatile Vermin

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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 12:05 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Adze - Undead Looking For: Crit all around. First TiH quest so I want to make sure I got everything to fit the shop. Quest Link: Kwasi

Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2012 4:47 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Sorceress - Reaper Looking For: Crit all the Things Quest Link: Mercy

jessieomer

Generous Entrepreneur

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iStoleYurVamps

Crew

Trash Husband

22,750 Points

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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:30 am


	Crit Please! Character's Race: White Wolfos-Ghost Looking For: Everything preferred, but if you only want to do certain stuff that is fine too, just like a cat Quest Link: King

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:57 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Tengu - Demon Looking For: Crit on everything, my first quest so I need lots of help. Quest Link: Boop

Eloquent Sonata

Dapper Citizen

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Noir Songbird

Dramatic Senshi

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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 7:18 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Onryo - Ghost Looking For: Everything please; just want to know what can be improved! Quest Link: Reiko

Posted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 6:50 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Monster- Were-deer/Deer woman {what I need help with! } Looking For: I'm torn between two monsters he could be. 8V Would just like some opinions, really. I'm leaning towards Deer Woman, but I don't know if he would be considered one? IDUNNO. Just... some collaboration, discussion would be nice. <3 Quest Link: Kadir

musicaloner7

Romantic Man-Lover

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Bloodlust Dante

Fortunate Hellraiser

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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:43 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Subspecie - Reaper Looking For: A little of everything please! Quest Link: Kiln

Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:21 pm


	Crit Please! Character's Race: Demon - Kumiho ((Korean version of Kitsune -- There are differences)) Looking For: Everything would be helpful <3 Quest Link: Lumikki