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Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee That's a good point. That should make her better than Sakura. Sakura displays no actual SKILLS, which is why I find it hard to use her in my doujinshi. But she saves Ino and Shikamaru. So... I just need to figure out HOW. gonk as skills you mean jutsus? I dont if she needs them with that monstrous strength of hers pirate Skills fall under ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. I was thinking in DND terms. xp DN what? DND... I clearly typed it. >.>;; Dungeons and Dragons.
sorry, I'm slow emo , and you're making a Doujinshi?
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Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee That's a good point. That should make her better than Sakura. Sakura displays no actual SKILLS, which is why I find it hard to use her in my doujinshi. But she saves Ino and Shikamaru. So... I just need to figure out HOW. gonk as skills you mean jutsus? I dont if she needs them with that monstrous strength of hers pirate Skills fall under ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. I was thinking in DND terms. xp DN what? DND... I clearly typed it. >.>;; Dungeons and Dragons. sorry, I'm slow emo , and you're making a Doujinshi? Yes. A band of ninja, sort of like Akatsuki but way weaker (just a set of bag guys), want to assasinate Naruto. They're obsessed with killing the Kyuubi because it threatens their power.
The leader finds a girl who recently lost her home. This girl is a shinobi. The leader convinces her that killing the kyuubi will be the only way to save the hundreds (if not thousands) of people who live in Konoha.
Chapter one: Starts with Naruto in the shower. It's chibi and funny, not porn. Then it switches to Ino watering flowers, and Shikamaru who was dragged in, reluctantly helping. Asuma pops in and notifies them they have a, "mission." This mission is to well... do his errands. He also tells them Chouji has caught the flu. As usual, they b***h about it.
The scene switches to this girl I told you about. It introduces her. Her name is Hikaru. She is seen sitting by a tree, dirty and tattered up (she'd been in the wilderness a while). The leader meets her. Tells her about the Kyuubi. VAGUELY describes Naruto. Says, "We need to kill..."
"...Uzumaki Naruto." In this panel, you see Naruto grinning big in the shower.
Hikaru heads for Konoha. Scene switches back to Ino and Shikamaru. Running... errands. sweatdrop Still bitching. Ino asks how many grams are in a pound. Both confused because they don't use the imperial system, they bonder over this. Suddenly, Shikamaru jumps, and pushes Ino. A ton of cans (or something) on a shelf (they're at a street market) falls. The cans sliced through the middle. Confused, they look around. Get back up and move on. "Let's just skip it" Ino suggests. Then this time, Shikamaru stops walking. Ino turns around, "What the hell? Why'd you..." She notices a cut on his cheek. He reaches for it. They freeze. Then Ino is cut on the right side; they both clearly see it. "s**t!" She yells, and they run towards the bridge (by Ino's shop), Ino behind Shikamaru. Then he stops suddenly, Hikaru in front of them hanging updown from the bridge. "Prepare to die..." She says. Both bewildered, they look at her wide-eyed. "...Kyuubi." She says, holding a blade to Shikamaru's chin. This is when the chase starts; she creates bunshin and heads for both of them. Yes, she is convinced he's Naruto.
I could tell you more but... It gets rather elaborate and violent. sweatdrop And Doujin, mind you. It's a comic, and no, there's no romance.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 6:14 pm
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Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Skills fall under ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. I was thinking in DND terms. xp DN what? DND... I clearly typed it. >.>;; Dungeons and Dragons. sorry, I'm slow emo , and you're making a Doujinshi? Yes. A band of ninja, sort of like Akatsuki but way weaker (just a set of bag guys), want to assasinate Naruto. They're obsessed with killing the Kyuubi because it threatens their power. The leader finds a girl who recently lost her home. This girl is a shinobi. The leader convinces her that killing the kyuubi will be the only way to save the hundreds (if not thousands) of people who live in Konoha. Chapter one: Starts with Naruto in the shower. It's chibi and funny, not porn. Then it switches to Ino watering flowers, and Shikamaru who was dragged in, reluctantly helping. Asuma pops in and notifies them they have a, "mission." This mission is to well... do his errands. He also tells them Chouji has caught the flu. As usual, they b***h about it. The scene switches to this girl I told you about. It introduces her. Her name is Hikaru. She is seen sitting by a tree, dirty and tattered up (she'd been in the wilderness a while). The leader meets her. Tells her about the Kyuubi. VAGUELY describes Naruto. Says, "We need to kill..." "...Uzumaki Naruto." In this panel, you see Naruto grinning big in the shower. Hikaru heads for Konoha. Scene switches back to Ino and Shikamaru. Running... errands. sweatdrop Still bitching. Ino asks how many grams are in a pound. Both confused because they don't use the imperial system, they bonder over this. Suddenly, Shikamaru jumps, and pushes Ino. A ton of cans (or something) on a shelf (they're at a street market) falls. The cans sliced through the middle. Confused, they look around. Get back up and move on. "Let's just skip it" Ino suggests. Then this time, Shikamaru stops walking. Ino turns around, "What the hell? Why'd you..." She notices a cut on his cheek. He reaches for it. They freeze. Then Ino is cut on the right side; they both clearly see it. "s**t!" She yells, and they run towards the bridge (by Ino's shop), Ino behind Shikamaru. Then he stops suddenly, Hikaru in front of them hanging updown from the bridge. "Prepare to die..." She says. Both bewildered, they look at her wide-eyed. "...Kyuubi." She says, holding a blade to Shikamaru's chin. This is when the chase starts; she creates bunshin and heads for both of them. Yes, she is convinced he's Naruto. I could tell you more but... It gets rather elaborate and violent. sweatdrop And Doujin, mind you. It's a comic, and no, there's no romance.
It's not like I haven't watched Doujinshis before, there are lots of them in the Naruto Websites (I currently watched 11 and formed part of a volume of them called Shinobi No Okite Gaiden)
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Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Skills fall under ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. I was thinking in DND terms. xp DN what? DND... I clearly typed it. >.>;; Dungeons and Dragons. sorry, I'm slow emo , and you're making a Doujinshi? Yes. A band of ninja, sort of like Akatsuki but way weaker (just a set of bag guys), want to assasinate Naruto. They're obsessed with killing the Kyuubi because it threatens their power. The leader finds a girl who recently lost her home. This girl is a shinobi. The leader convinces her that killing the kyuubi will be the only way to save the hundreds (if not thousands) of people who live in Konoha. Chapter one: Starts with Naruto in the shower. It's chibi and funny, not porn. Then it switches to Ino watering flowers, and Shikamaru who was dragged in, reluctantly helping. Asuma pops in and notifies them they have a, "mission." This mission is to well... do his errands. He also tells them Chouji has caught the flu. As usual, they b***h about it. The scene switches to this girl I told you about. It introduces her. Her name is Hikaru. She is seen sitting by a tree, dirty and tattered up (she'd been in the wilderness a while). The leader meets her. Tells her about the Kyuubi. VAGUELY describes Naruto. Says, "We need to kill..." "...Uzumaki Naruto." In this panel, you see Naruto grinning big in the shower. Hikaru heads for Konoha. Scene switches back to Ino and Shikamaru. Running... errands. sweatdrop Still bitching. Ino asks how many grams are in a pound. Both confused because they don't use the imperial system, they bonder over this. Suddenly, Shikamaru jumps, and pushes Ino. A ton of cans (or something) on a shelf (they're at a street market) falls. The cans sliced through the middle. Confused, they look around. Get back up and move on. "Let's just skip it" Ino suggests. Then this time, Shikamaru stops walking. Ino turns around, "What the hell? Why'd you..." She notices a cut on his cheek. He reaches for it. They freeze. Then Ino is cut on the right side; they both clearly see it. "s**t!" She yells, and they run towards the bridge (by Ino's shop), Ino behind Shikamaru. Then he stops suddenly, Hikaru in front of them hanging updown from the bridge. "Prepare to die..." She says. Both bewildered, they look at her wide-eyed. "...Kyuubi." She says, holding a blade to Shikamaru's chin. This is when the chase starts; she creates bunshin and heads for both of them. Yes, she is convinced he's Naruto. I could tell you more but... It gets rather elaborate and violent. sweatdrop And Doujin, mind you. It's a comic, and no, there's no romance. It's not like I haven't watched Doujinshis before, there are lots of them in the Naruto Websites (I currently watched 11 and formed part of a volume of them called Shinobi No Okite Gaiden) What do you mean, "THIS"? DX I read as many doujins and fanfics as I could to be certain mine wasn't like theirs.
Besides, that's the first part. More details come in the second part. Which is probably what makes mine so unique. Besides, mine is violent. VERY. So that makes is special. Ino is sliced to ribbons, and Shikamaru breaks a leg and a few ribs. gonk Hikaru pushed him out of a tree (I got this idea because NO ONE ever falls out of trees... I thought it was about time it happened). Bone mending takes a long time, so Tsunade explains how this works. Mine has actual... FACTS in it. Cool stuff Kishimoto hasn't mentioned (according to true ninjutsu).
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Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee DND... I clearly typed it. >.>;; Dungeons and Dragons. sorry, I'm slow emo , and you're making a Doujinshi? Yes. A band of ninja, sort of like Akatsuki but way weaker (just a set of bag guys), want to assasinate Naruto. They're obsessed with killing the Kyuubi because it threatens their power. The leader finds a girl who recently lost her home. This girl is a shinobi. The leader convinces her that killing the kyuubi will be the only way to save the hundreds (if not thousands) of people who live in Konoha. Chapter one: Starts with Naruto in the shower. It's chibi and funny, not porn. Then it switches to Ino watering flowers, and Shikamaru who was dragged in, reluctantly helping. Asuma pops in and notifies them they have a, "mission." This mission is to well... do his errands. He also tells them Chouji has caught the flu. As usual, they b***h about it. The scene switches to this girl I told you about. It introduces her. Her name is Hikaru. She is seen sitting by a tree, dirty and tattered up (she'd been in the wilderness a while). The leader meets her. Tells her about the Kyuubi. VAGUELY describes Naruto. Says, "We need to kill..." "...Uzumaki Naruto." In this panel, you see Naruto grinning big in the shower. Hikaru heads for Konoha. Scene switches back to Ino and Shikamaru. Running... errands. sweatdrop Still bitching. Ino asks how many grams are in a pound. Both confused because they don't use the imperial system, they bonder over this. Suddenly, Shikamaru jumps, and pushes Ino. A ton of cans (or something) on a shelf (they're at a street market) falls. The cans sliced through the middle. Confused, they look around. Get back up and move on. "Let's just skip it" Ino suggests. Then this time, Shikamaru stops walking. Ino turns around, "What the hell? Why'd you..." She notices a cut on his cheek. He reaches for it. They freeze. Then Ino is cut on the right side; they both clearly see it. "s**t!" She yells, and they run towards the bridge (by Ino's shop), Ino behind Shikamaru. Then he stops suddenly, Hikaru in front of them hanging updown from the bridge. "Prepare to die..." She says. Both bewildered, they look at her wide-eyed. "...Kyuubi." She says, holding a blade to Shikamaru's chin. This is when the chase starts; she creates bunshin and heads for both of them. Yes, she is convinced he's Naruto. I could tell you more but... It gets rather elaborate and violent. sweatdrop And Doujin, mind you. It's a comic, and no, there's no romance. It's not like I haven't watched Doujinshis before, there are lots of them in the Naruto Websites (I currently watched 11 and formed part of a volume of them called Shinobi No Okite Gaiden) What do you mean, "THIS"? DX I read as many doujins and fanfics as I could to be certain mine wasn't like theirs. Besides, that's the first part. More details come in the second part. Which is probably what makes mine so unique. Besides, mine is violent. VERY. So that makes is special. Ino is sliced to ribbons, and Shikamaru breaks a leg and a few ribs. gonk Hikaru pushed him out of a tree (I got this idea because NO ONE ever falls out of trees... I thought it was about time it happened). Bone mending takes a long time, so Tsunade explains how this works. Mine has actual... FACTS in it. Cool stuff Kishimoto hasn't mentioned (according to true ninjutsu).
thanks for spoiling it to me... emo I like fan-fics / theorys (you probably should know about that from the discussion in the other thread). The one that I liked the most AND made me cry was ''Brothers'' (if you say you read all of the fanfics then you'll know which one is this). I'm not saying yours is crap (as some fan-fics are), I liked the ''Intro'' if you let me call it that way, I want to read more of it 3nodding
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Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee Juuyonbi_No_Peko_=3 Shikalee DND... I clearly typed it. >.>;; Dungeons and Dragons. sorry, I'm slow emo , and you're making a Doujinshi? Yes. A band of ninja, sort of like Akatsuki but way weaker (just a set of bag guys), want to assasinate Naruto. They're obsessed with killing the Kyuubi because it threatens their power. The leader finds a girl who recently lost her home. This girl is a shinobi. The leader convinces her that killing the kyuubi will be the only way to save the hundreds (if not thousands) of people who live in Konoha. Chapter one: Starts with Naruto in the shower. It's chibi and funny, not porn. Then it switches to Ino watering flowers, and Shikamaru who was dragged in, reluctantly helping. Asuma pops in and notifies them they have a, "mission." This mission is to well... do his errands. He also tells them Chouji has caught the flu. As usual, they b***h about it. The scene switches to this girl I told you about. It introduces her. Her name is Hikaru. She is seen sitting by a tree, dirty and tattered up (she'd been in the wilderness a while). The leader meets her. Tells her about the Kyuubi. VAGUELY describes Naruto. Says, "We need to kill..." "...Uzumaki Naruto." In this panel, you see Naruto grinning big in the shower. Hikaru heads for Konoha. Scene switches back to Ino and Shikamaru. Running... errands. sweatdrop Still bitching. Ino asks how many grams are in a pound. Both confused because they don't use the imperial system, they bonder over this. Suddenly, Shikamaru jumps, and pushes Ino. A ton of cans (or something) on a shelf (they're at a street market) falls. The cans sliced through the middle. Confused, they look around. Get back up and move on. "Let's just skip it" Ino suggests. Then this time, Shikamaru stops walking. Ino turns around, "What the hell? Why'd you..." She notices a cut on his cheek. He reaches for it. They freeze. Then Ino is cut on the right side; they both clearly see it. "s**t!" She yells, and they run towards the bridge (by Ino's shop), Ino behind Shikamaru. Then he stops suddenly, Hikaru in front of them hanging updown from the bridge. "Prepare to die..." She says. Both bewildered, they look at her wide-eyed. "...Kyuubi." She says, holding a blade to Shikamaru's chin. This is when the chase starts; she creates bunshin and heads for both of them. Yes, she is convinced he's Naruto. I could tell you more but... It gets rather elaborate and violent. sweatdrop And Doujin, mind you. It's a comic, and no, there's no romance. It's not like I haven't watched Doujinshis before, there are lots of them in the Naruto Websites (I currently watched 11 and formed part of a volume of them called Shinobi No Okite Gaiden) What do you mean, "THIS"? DX I read as many doujins and fanfics as I could to be certain mine wasn't like theirs. Besides, that's the first part. More details come in the second part. Which is probably what makes mine so unique. Besides, mine is violent. VERY. So that makes is special. Ino is sliced to ribbons, and Shikamaru breaks a leg and a few ribs. gonk Hikaru pushed him out of a tree (I got this idea because NO ONE ever falls out of trees... I thought it was about time it happened). Bone mending takes a long time, so Tsunade explains how this works. Mine has actual... FACTS in it. Cool stuff Kishimoto hasn't mentioned (according to true ninjutsu). thanks for spoiling it to me... emo I like fan-fics / theorys (you probably should know about that from the discussion in the other thread). The one that I liked the most AND made me cry was ''Brothers'' (if you say you read all of the fanfics then you'll know which one is this). I'm not saying yours is crap (as some fan-fics are), I liked the ''Intro'' if you let me call it that way, I want to read more of it 3nodding LOL!! Sorry. I didn't know you had any interest. But that's not the most shocking part. xd Actually, it is. Except for... well, I won't say. XD
ORLY? Yays. xD Yes, I plan to scan it. But I need to draw it, first. I'm still in the story boarding stage. I've been working on it for about a year. >.> (Started New Years)
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