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Purple dragon lady

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:09 pm
Danm... four years?
Does the day have some special signficiance? Like... her birthday?  
PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:37 pm
maybe...  

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 9:23 am
"talking"
thinking
"telepathy"

"huh.." sighed Hinata.
"That's weird." said Harmony, thoughtfully.
"What's weird?" asked Hinata.
"Look, around her eyes...."said Harmony, now transfixed by the preteen's eyes.
"You know, I'm right here!" said Shourai, a little miffed.
"Harmony, what is that?" asked Hinata.
"It's the SEAL! You did it! Shourai, you've done it! You've created a seal to hold in the curse! IT's a mirracle!" yelled Harmony in delight.
"Huh?" asked Shourai.
"Shourai, congragulations. You've finally overcome the barrier! This is great. Now, you can go from the human world straight to any other!" said Hinata, a little surprised it took only four years for this girl to figure out the ways of the universe, when after one hundred fifty years, she couldn't.
"Wel- o no. No! it can't be." said Hinata, distastfuly.
"Wha- Oh." said Harmony, her face full of careing, hate, and shock.
"tsk, foolish mortals, you shoul- Get out of MY head!! Grr... you little, You're just my Jinchurruki! AHH!!! NO I'm NOT!" Shourai yelled, cluching her head in pain.
"We must help." said Harmony.
"no. This is her battle, her heart verses her demon." said Hinata, grabbing Harmony's shoulder.
"Hai." said Harmony grudgingly, "Then let's bring her to the pool, atleast we can do that."
"Good idea." said Hinata, "Maybe the water can help her."


Hinata and Harmony both grabbed one of Shourai's arms, lifting her up between them.
Shourai was Fighting herself. The demon of the black was aching her heart.

"we must go fast, straight to the holy grounds." said Hinata.
"But, we've never been there! who knows what lies in that place." said Harmony.
"Get everyone, we'll need them." ordered Hinata.
"Leguin, Shourai's fighting her demon inside her, we're bringing her to the holy pool, We need escorts." Harmony said to Leguin, after activating the telachaneisis.
"How many?" came the answer.
"all of you. This just might be the end." said Harmony.
"hai." said Leguin.

Soon after, fourty black cloaked teens came.
"This isn't everyone." said Hinata.
"Leguin's protacting the castle, He sent the fastest five to go to the nearest villages, and spread the word. As planned." said the first one to get there.
"Good, just as planned." said Hinata, as all fourty-three of them bolted up the mountain side, all bluring out of sight.
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Author's note: so... that's some more writing... yeah...  
PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 9:38 am
I see... So she managed to seal it...
I hope all comes out well!  

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:42 pm
Yikuomaru jumped in front of the Konoha door.
"Go."
Nods from his two peers were emmited.
They all jumped over the door while forming the hand signs for the clone jutsu. Four of each nin were created, all of them started going to different sections of the town. Konoha Hadn't changed much, except the Hokage carvings, there were now six.

Yikuomaru went with his black cloaked clones to the Hokage office.

"Hokage-sama!" said Yikuomaru when right outside the door. The door was opened to several alert Jounin. "Come with me, the world is ending!"

"WHAT?" yelled Naruto-sama in disbelief.

"Hinata has requested you and the rest of Konoha to come to the diamond Mountain." he explained.

"H-Hinata?..." said The Sixth in wonderment, remembering his old friend. "I th-thought I-I had killed her."

"She escaped, bring the peoples of Konoha to the diamond mountains immediatly! Hinata says Shourai,er...Seelia, needs love." said Yikuomaru.

"Of course! Seelia! Hatake, everyone is to go to The Diamond Mountain, ASAP!" yelled Hokage Naruto.

"Sir yes, sir!" come the response as the present Hatake shunshined away.

"huh.." sighed Hokage, "Things have gotten so Military-like, I remember my first real mission, I had whined to the Third Hokage to give us a cool mission. We were to escort a man to the Hidden village in the mist, it was supposed to be a C class mission. Turns out it was more like an A mission.  
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:29 pm
I don't quite get the time stuff. If it's been 150 years since the Kyuubi was released and supposedly killed Hinata, then wouldn't they all be over 150 years old? Is that possible for a human? I suppose certain jutsu could help Hinata, and the Kyuubi would help Naruto out, but still...

It took me a while to remember that Seelia became Shourai, though, lol. Hatake...so, a relative of Kakashi? Maybe a grandson or great grandson or something like that.

When Naruto ordered Hatake, I had this vivid image of a 12 year old Naruto ordering the 26 year old Kakashi to do buy him some ramen for some strange reason...
 

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:18 pm
I see... Huh, Naru must be pretty old. Didn't you have a boy named Naruto in the first part? Was he named after our favorite whisker scared Hokage?
And the plot proceeds to thicken.  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:59 pm
yes.  

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:45 pm
lol, ryuuki. that's quite the image. Yeah, it's his grandson. If you don't believe me that Kakashi had a kid, then don't read! -sniffles nose- I have a cold, and it's so ABNOXIOUS!  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:33 pm
"Faster, Damn it!" yelled Hinata at the slackers behind her.
"We're getting closer!" She yelled again, "Stop."
Everyone froze.
"Harmony, it's your time." said Hinata with a far off sound in her voice. Harmony just cocked her head, as if to say'Huh?'

"Harmony, you're the only one of all of us who can touch the rest of the mountain. The reason I called you Harmony is because .... You aren't Human. We, humans, are to be called the melody of life, like in a song. Currently two people in this world are neither. Me, and...and- Naruto-kun." explained Hinata.

"N-Naruto-kun? like the Hokage? He's still alive?" asked Harmony. A loud scream was heard from Shourai, who was sitting on a nearby branch. She was cluching her head in her hands.
"Go!" yelled Hinata.
Harmony immideatly ran to the 13-year-old and ran as fast as she could with her on her arm up the mountain. Hinata thought she heard a 'Hai' as harmony dissapeared from site.
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" Faster Slackers!" yelled the still young looking Hokage.
"Sir, were are we going?" asked the hatake, appearing next to him.
"Holy grounds. This is the end of the world, for good." said Naruto.
"Wha?" asked Haruno hatake.
"Haruno, do you remember what lies sealed inside my stomach, the only reason i can't die, not even naturaly?" asked Naruto.
"Hai, the Nin-tailed Fox. The biggest threat to the Leaf Village, ever. " answered Haruno.
"Well, a young girl by the name of Seelia has twin black holes sealed in her eyes. Together, those demons can destroy the universe alone." said Naruto. Haruno only gasped and dropped back a few paces, almost fainting.

"Yeah, it is a bit shoking, but it's over. There's nothin' we can do about it." said naruto, simply.
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"Harmony...." came a raspy voice from the girl on her back.
"Yes?" asked Harmony, slowing a little so she could look around better.
"Where are we?" she asked, looking around, "Where's Hinata?"
"We are on the tip of the highest diamond Mountain, Holy grounds. Hinata was trying to explain the universe to me, but i had to rush you up here 'cause I'm the only one that can escort you up here, something about melodys and Harmonys of the universe." said Harmony.
"oh." was all Shourai said.
"Why is it Holy?" asked Shourai.
"I don't know, bu- Oh My God !!" yelled Harmony.
"Ack! What the hall is that thing?" yelled Shourai.
"Demon, leave this place!" yelled Harmony, a new fire in her heart.
The demonic creature started to disinigrate as Harmony started coming close to it.
Both girls mouths were wide open, staring at the nothingness that used to be a bloodthursty demon.

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"Naruto!" cried Hinata, looking at her old friend.
"Hinata!" he yelled as he ran up to her and glomping her.
"It's been too long." He said. Hinata nodded.
"Were's the rest of the villages?" asked Naruto.
"They can die for all I care. I've changed since you've last seen me. I gave up stutering when everyone in my family died." said Hinata harshly.
"Hinata, that not fair." whined Naruto.
"The Hidden Leaf Village is the only one who hasn't betrayed their alies for their own good." explained Hinata.
Naruto mulled it over, then nodded, understanding what she meant.
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Harmony and Shourai had stopped in front of a huge crystal clear lake.
"It's holy water, deadly." said Harmony.
"I must die. Kill me, then put my body in the holy lake, it'll kill the demon." said Shourai.
"But-H-hai." said Harmony.
"I'm sorry it's you who must do this." said Shourai looking down.
"It's not." came a womens voice, "This isn't your place, Harmony. It's mine."
"Who the hell are you?" yelled Harmony drawing out kunai from under her cloak and performing a few hand signs, a sheild appeared around the two.

a women appeared, half of her looked possesed by a demon, the other like an Angel.
"I am Orae, the daughter of the god of death and the goddess of heaven."

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A/N: cliffie!
 

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:06 am
I see... So because of the Kyuubi, Naruto is cursed with immortality...
And why is Hinata not quite human? And Harmony? It interests me...
And a young godess... What does she have to do with all this?
I await more!  
PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:04 pm
"Do not fear me, harmony, thank you so very much for bringing her up here.' said the distorted goddess.

"I...I d-don't understand." stuttered harmony.

"You dont need to, darling. I'll take it from here, my daughter." said Orae.

"Daughter? What is going on?" said harmony, completely confused.

"Harmony, you are my daughter. Your father is of the earth, human. This is why your name is Harmony, you aren't quite human and not qutie a goddess, but a perfect mix in the middle." explained Orae.

"m-me? Half god? M-mother?" asked Harmony.

"Yes, dear child." said Orae.

"Uhh....O-o-orae? w-wh-who k-kills m-me?" asked Shourai.

"You. The demon will kill you." said Orae.
"The demon? But it settled down." said Shourai.
"Touch the holy water and it won't. Go on, Shourai. walk on it see how it responds." ordered Orea

Shourai did as told, she took off her cloak to show a t-shirt and shorts. She slowly started to advance upon the water.
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A/n: OMG! I'm so sorry for like writing a paragraph. It's like ten here, and my dad's all "It's passed bedtime and you're ill!" whatever. I'll hopefully get on sunday or something, i have so much makeup work for school, I was sick ALL week.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 2:51 pm
Sick all week? Oh geez, that's awful!
But yeah, I eagerly await more.  
PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 3:24 pm
"What will happen to her?" asked Harmony.

"She'll be fine, she is an angel creature after all." said her mother.

"huh? What's an 'angel creature'?" asked harmony

"Well, if you're not human you're either a demon creature or an angel creature, she's not human, she's an angel creature. And if you're wondering about the demon, it took over her because she had heavenly powers, something it wanted." explained Orae.

"I still don't understand." said Harmony, looking away from her mother and to the girl walking on the holy water.

"You don't need to. These things I do not even comprehend. It is beyond everything." said Orae.
"hai" was the last thing said before... well, a miraculous thing ocurred.

Shourai let out a gasp as she reached the center of the lake and water began to move around her. she tried to ask Orae what was happening, but she couldn't speak, it was as if her voice box had simply failed.

Again, she tried to yell for help as water encircled her body, but she couldn't. The crystal water was now completely covering her, from head to toe. it began to do something unexpected.
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"Hinata, come on let go ofme! I want to see See- er Shourai!" yelled naruto, trying to get out of Hinata's strong grasp on his wrist.

"No" she said firmly. That was all that was needed to make him give up.
"You may be but a jinchuuruki (sp?), but you carry a demon, you're a demon creature!" said Hinata, rather loudly.

"Fine." said Naruto as he walked back to the main sitting room in the castle, were everyone else was.
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A/N: it's like dinner, i be back later, sorry for the long delay, as expected i still have a TON of make up work, neh. crying
 

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 5:02 pm
"Angel creature"... I see... Is Shourai descended from Gods as well?  
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