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OMG!!!!!My brain pretty much just exploded, so i'll ask you guys whatcha think about this...SasukeXAyona. (Not all fanfictiony. but just a crush...)
  Don't care, your story.
  NO! THAT'S JUST WEIRD!
  That would be cute ^-^ *nods*
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:52 pm

Ayona woke up and realized her music had been on all night, luckily it was quiet.

Her and Hinata had done the usual stretch and a few songs of work out, then went home.

Ayona got up and changed out of her dark blue pajama pants and Baggy White T and into her normal clothes.
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When she got down stairs, Sasuke had already started breakfast, he was a surprisingly good chef.

“I was thinking, we need to sort of assign chores. ‘k?” said Ayona as she walked through the kitchen to see what he was doing.

“Sure. I’ll be cook if you don’t mind.”

“I’ll do laundry.” Ayona needed to be able to cover all her other clothes they didn’t know she wore.

“That leaves Naruto with Cleaning.”

They both looked at each other, oh god, this was going to be very interesting. Everyone knew Naruto was not exactly a “cleanly” person.

“He can deal.” Said Ayona as she headed for the bathroom to brush her hair, Sasuke silently agreed. That was the longest conversation they had ever had between them. Amazingly, Ayona hadn’t criticized anything.
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Naruto came down late, still in his pajamas.

“Naruto, your job is to make sure the house isn’t a mess. Ayona’s is laundry. And mine is cooking.”

Naruto was way too tired to say anything mean back.
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The days passed on like this for a while. Ayona had learned to be a little nicer. Naruto had learned to cooperate and shut up. Sasuke had learned to respect people’s differences and space, especially Ayona’s.

~*FLASHBACK*~

Ayona was having a bad day, so when Sasuke made a nasty comment she had grabbed his shoulder and shoved him to the ground and stormed away from training.

Kakashi proceeded to tell Sasuke and Naruto to give her some space, she wasn’t all she appeared to be.

~*END FLASHBACK*~

Sasuke knew Ayona was Hiding something. More than the things she had already told them about. He was determined to find out what.
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At the Hokage office the next day Naruto was complaining about only getting stupid missions liking saving cats. It was true, for the past three weeks, and first three weeks of being a team, they had only gotten bad missions.

The Hokage began lecturing all of team 7 about how the missions were given out and Naruto started talking about Ramen, surprise, surprise.

The Hokage agreed to give them a better mission.

“You will escort a man to the land of waves, where he needs to finish building a bridge for his people.” here the third looked over at the door were a drunk man was holding a sake bottle and stumbling around. “here he is.”

“great, three little kids and a guy with a wack hairdo, just great.” said the man, obviously stoned.
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The next day they all set off for the land of waves. Ayona was getting very nervous of seeing battle, and fire. She knew it was coming for some reason. She could tell. freaking demon….what are you?

“I’ve never been out of the village before! This is so exiting!”

The man they had come to know as Tazuna said, “Wow, punk, you’re a real traveler, never been out of the village, psht.”

Naruto began trying to attack him but Kakashi held him.

It had been nearly an hour since they had left the village, and Naruto was still going on and on about how great the outside world was. no wonder he’s a troublemaker, he doesn’t know any better.

“Naruto, shut up. I hear something.”

Ayona spun around at the sound of foot steps running at her. Two wave chuunin where coming at Tazuna!


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A/N: semi-cliffhanger ^.^
 
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:02 pm
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conert oufit (Is used in later chapters)

more to come...  

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:14 pm
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HAHAHAHA!!! lol. I just typed "hinata" into word document and it said it was spelled wrong, so i go check what they want me to right instead just for the heck of it and it says; Piñata. HAHA!!! Hinata is a Piñata in english terms apperently

yeah i just tell Word to learn the spellings...if u look in my dictionary you will find things like Hayate, Solari, Hinata, Hyuga, Sharingan, Ninjutsu....taht is like all i do on word......alright..now i will read that chapter and tell u what i think if it.....

P.S. noooooo ur fic is catching up to mine in posts burning_eyes
 
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:23 pm
yeah....semi-cliffhanger......waiting for the next chapter........hmmm it sounds like she is kinda like a demon...that would be too much like xRyuuki's...oh well lets see how it pans out  

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:14 pm
god this is a really good fanfiction i'm hooked  
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:14 pm
why, thank you.  

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:16 pm
your welcome  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:03 am
Yeah, Maeve-chan (if I may call you that) is pretty good. You should read her last story... what was it called again?
But welcome to the fan fiction sub-forum, agent_leon, and I hope you stay a while. smile  

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 1:43 pm
Purple dragon lady; yup1 you can call me Maeve-chan. Oh, and thanks for the compliment. The other one has a terrible name, 'A naruto story!" it'll say [completed] because It's just that, completed.

Agent_leon; oh, please keep reading. And I do hope you stay, it's quite friendly around here. If she doesn't mind me saying, xxrokixx is sort of new as well ^.^  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:31 pm

Ayona was at a slight lose of breathe but managed to pull out a kunai and throw it at them. Of course in her state of shock it was easily dodged.

Sasuke stepped in. he jumped up in the air and threw a shuriken at the chain connecting the two. It chained them to a tree. He threw a kunai to keep it in place.

Ayona regained her senses a little later and tried to throw more kunai at them but her hands wouldn’t move. ahhh! What the heck! Is it the demon thing? Ayona’s hand forced itself to spread as far as her bones and skin would allow and her hand moved up and her arm stiffened. Her eyes flashed a pastel purple for nearly a second, she began to see things as if they were standing almost still. She noticed Kakashi who was shivering in a way that told her he was making himself invisible to the human eye. She saw Sasuke was barely moving down do to gravity. Naruto was trying to regain his senses. The world looked reddish and dull. What was this place, all she could think before it went back to normal and her hand and wrist hurt so much she almost screamed at the top of her lungs, but her body would not allow it. She looked at her hand that was throbbing at the amount of pain she was in. It was covered by what seamed to by light purple pencil markings. But with closer inspection, she realized it was like a curse mark. Wait, curse mark, so no demon? But what sort of curse?

The chunnin had escaped and were headed to take out Naruto. Ayona spun on her heels and shot out of her hand a rather small glowing ball of what seemed to be air. It hit the enemy so fast no one had seen it. But they were instantly knocked way far. Kakashi appeared and looked at her in a bit of shock but quickly tied the limp, unconscious, and bleeding young men to a tree.

Ayona looked back at her hand witch was still hurting like heck and fell to the ground. She landed on her knees and screamed in pain. The lines were residing in a circular fashion, she looked at her palm. There was a small swirl on it, colored in the same purple.

“what happened.?” Kakashi demanded.

“I-I-I d-don’t know.” Ayona stuttered.

“I think Hinata’s wearing off on you.” Kakashi said, his voice rather sarcastic.

Ayona’s head snapped up from looking at her palm and she stared a thousand daggers at her teacher, “Would you like to end up like the others?” she asked, referring to the two almost dead chunnin tied to the tree.

Kakashi didn’t say anything as a response.

“Let me see your hand.” He asked, his voice had changed.

Ayona tried to get up but her legs buckled and she fell back down. Being this helpless reminded her of her childhood. Tears began to form in her eyes, but refused to fall.

Kakashi knelt down in front of her and looked at her palm.

“That was some stunt you pulled off, how?” he whispered.

“No clue.” she whispered back.

“We’ll talk with the Hokage when we get back, for now I’ll just bandage it.”

Ayona nodded as the jounin took out a bandage and wrapped it around her arm and wrist.

He stood up and smiled under his mask to everyone. “Well? What are we all waiting for? Lets go!”
Ayona tried again, but fell once more.

“awww… what’s wrong? Did wittle Ayona hurt herself?” Sasuke asked as he started to walk away.

“Sasuke!” Kakashi said rather loudly, “I wouldn’t get on her bad side, after all, you’re carrying her.”

Sasuke was a little shocked but helped Ayona onto his back, she was very small. Her body was very light do to her excessive training.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:43 am
A curse seal? How'd she get that? And light purple? Sasuke's seal marks were black, weren't they? So Ayona-san's aren't from Orochimaru... Good!  
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:54 pm
Hmm, light purple...I don't have a very fond history with that color in fanfictions, xD. I wanna see where that goes.

Anyways, I'm sorry about not posting and everything for the past week or so. It's just that my internet has been being more of a butt-head than usual, since my computer is not connected to the other two computers in the house, thus slowing it down by a lot. I'm on my dad's right now...which explains why the font is a little big. sweatdrop . He uses reading glasses, so neh...

Ooh...Ayona is a bit touchy, ain't she? xD. Practically threatening to kill her own sensei right there. And Sasuke is starting to act more and more like an annoying git who teases a lot...or an older brother of sorts.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:13 pm
hmm interesting....when her eyes turned purple for a second i was like "alright if she i a hyuga this is going to be really lame" but then there was the whole thing about the light purple markings which totally disproves my theory...i like alot  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:19 pm
hey justed wanted to say keep going i'm still hooked  

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:57 pm


Sasuke had managed to keep his mouth shut for the rest of the trip, aside from the occasional murmer.

Ayona was slowly regaining strength and was able to walk when they had reached a check point. She was sort of wably but could walk.

Tazuna had shut up about his sexist comments on a girl escorting him when she had basically pulverized the two stalkers.

Naruto had become a little quieter, too.

It was a relief when they made it to the water edge, where they were to meet a man whom would take them to the small village Tazuna lived in.

They got on the boat in silence. Naruto had began talking but was immediately slapped by Ayona to shut up.

They all got off the small boat and onto the shore.

"Come on, I'll take you to my house and we can get some food and rest." Tazuna said as he led the way.
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They had walked some of the way and Tazuna had predicted about ten minutes until they reach the house.

All os a sudden a massive sword came flying at the group. Fortunately, no one had gotten hurt.

Ayona's scarf had been blowing in the breeze and when she ducked, it had gotten a bit of it cut off.

No way, the fool was getting away with that.

A man apeared standing on the sword that was now stuck in a tree.

"Ah...Kakashi, the copy ninja, what a pleasure to meet you."

"Zabuza, what do you want-" Kakashi was not able to add the last two words of his sentence because of three kunai being thrown at the Zabuza.

They had come from Ayona. Zabuza was not expecting it so he had to not so gracefully dodge them.

"So, you brought a few pests along with you, how nice." Zabuza sneered.

"Come again?"

"Why do I bother talking to such weak lings, oh wait, I don't." Zabuza disappeared and reappeared on the lake in front of them.

"Guard Tazuna!"

"Hai!" yelled Naruto as the three made a triangle around the man and pulled out a kunai.

Ayona was barely able to control her temper, this scarf was the only thing she had left of Carmine, it was her constant reminder of her previous experiences.

Zabuza had made a thick mist. Kakashi was reaching to move the headband that covered his eye.

"Oh? What's this?" Zabuza asked as Kakashi's sharingan was revealed.

"The sharingan...A special ninja art only given to a certain bloodline." Sasuke continued to tell them about the aspects of the Sharingan.

"You seem to know quite a bit, but you've only scratched the surface. It can also copy any ninja's move or technique, to the very last detail, and it only takes a nano second."

"THAT'S AMAZING!" Naruto yelled.

After Zabuza had been toying with they're minds a bit, he disappeared.

"Where'd he go?" Sasuke asked. He was not happy and seemed to be thinking a lot to much.

"Don't worry, I'll protect my comrades, even if it means giving my own life." Kakashi smiled under his mask.

"Big words, no action." said Zabuza as he appeared between Ayona and Tazuna.

Kakashi was right in front of him before he could strike, but he didn't have time as Ayona stabbed him with a kunai, right in the heart.

Everyone gasped, some more than others.

Then, Zabuza melted into water.

"Clone." Ayona muttered as she quickly regained her stance of guarding Tazuna.

"See, Zabuza, where ever you might be hiding, you made one mistake, taking on all of us. Kakashi is an amazing sensei, Sasuke is an Uchiha, Naruto, well let's just say he's more than what he appears, and Me, well, I'm just a whole different story." Ayona said.

"Well, don't get cocky." Zabuza said as he appeared on the river.

"Don't worry, I won't" said Ayona as she ran and threw several kunai at Zabuza and kept running.
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