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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:11 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:13 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 12:39 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 12:21 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 1:51 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:30 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:48 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 4:35 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:51 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:53 pm
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Hello! I'm a bit new here, and I'd like to ask some questions about possibilities for a race that I believe would be classified under "undead."
I had in mind for something called a "Frez Drah", a corruption of the phrase "freeze dry" in reference to how a Frez Drah is created and what their ability would be (should it fit into the THIS IS HALLOWEEN) universe).
It's something a bit similar to a vampire as it's an undead species that doesn't necessarily decay visibly over time. A Frez Drah is created by drowning and/or freezing to death in areas with cold climates; ideally, I had in mind that a Frez Drah is held to this world by remembering an immense betrayal in their former life. They might be completely unaware of what this is, but instead they would only feel an overwhelming hatred that anchors them to the world instead of allowing them to pass on.
They have the look of someone who had frozen to death and/or drowned, complete with blued skin, any bloating, rotting, fish damage, etc. and slightly elongated fangs. Since one can't be "turned" into a Frez Drah, they also don't hold the ability to "turn" like a vampire would. Also, no pointy ears (it just didn't make sense to have them be pointy, haha). Their eyes also won't change color -- basically, they'd look more or less like their previous form but drowned/frozen, if that makes sense.
In the context I had created Frez Drahs for, their only special ability/skill would be a sort of freezing venom they'd inject into their prey. It's not something fatal in itself. Basically, it would immobilize you long enough for the Frez Drah to feed upon your innards. So, unlike vampires which suck blood, Frez Drahs would inject venom and then feed. If for whatever reason the Frez Drah was unable to feed on you while you had the toxin in you, it would wear off gradually over time with a few side effects (these would also disappear after a period of time).
Frez Drahs would be solitary creatures. They don't really form colonies or groups because they're very territorial and have relatively extensive hunting areas. They're generally mean-spirited (an after-effect of the betrayal in their former lives), untrusting and apathetic towards the suffering of others. More or less, they'd live almost entirely selfish afterlives.
They have the strength of normal humans, so no heightened senses or anything like a vampire might. They "live" to freeze their prey much like how time has been frozen for them. Generally, they're sadistic and motivated by a revenge they can't clearly remember. If for whatever reason the Frez Drah exacted revenge against their betrayer, they would cease to exist.
The container/body of a Frez Drah can be damaged, but the hatred that has seeped so deeply into the bones allows a Frez Drah to move without the human equivalent of a soul. However, if the body parts were scattered, it would be rendered more or less harmless, even if the Frez Drah was still "alive." Likewise, since they died by freezing/drowning, they are extraordinarily sensitive to heat and fire of any kind. If the heat becomes too severe, oddly the Frez Drah would melt into a kind of mercurial liquid. The only way for the Frez Drah to return to normal would be to dump the liquid into a cold body of water so that the Frez Drah's container could reassemble. So long as it's kept in the heat, the Frez Drah must remain in the puddle-form.
This is what I had worked out so far. What in here would you suggest I elaborate on/alter in order to better suit the universe of THIS IS HALLOWEEN?
Thank you! c:
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:06 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:13 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:27 pm
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