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 Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:31 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:33 am
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The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy E~Clipse The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard?*** Most of the guild wondered why his post took so long, Well I got an answer: it took Graphitty, E-Clipse, Nicca and Icey to get it done! tht shyt was funni. yall gotta admit xd They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... tht shyt was hella funni tho, but E got this... tht Bill Cosby shyt was gutter I felt as if it were less of a diss, especially to me, and more of a simple mention of Bill Cosby. The punchlines he attempted to construct were very weak, and his verse was mostly composed of him attempting to mention a few irrelevant names. Atleast I focused on dissing him with personals and stuff. razz But then again, you're his pal. He finished poorly as well. My last line was genius, taking into consideration the astrological references. His was just empty. Yes I agree my ending was somewhat weak, but for a min. of 6 bars my verse was better than yours...AND for the record I'm on my school's wrestling team and we've been extending practice this week...Yesterday we had a match and when I came home I saw all the s**t u had been talkin so I sat down for like a hour and a half just writin...I made 2 verses then took the hotter bars from the two...Ur just using that 3 day s**t as a reason as to y my verse was better...u want some cheese wit that whine? cheese_whine xd @Mak: in tht case the same could be said about dudes in yo crew. its just slang to me. we all do it I have no crew. I'm here alone to grab a few more easy wins. And you seem to be quite the critic. My verse was "simple" was it? And his was better than mine? Let's have a battle then, buddy. |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:57 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 5:45 pm
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The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard?*** Most of the guild wondered why his post took so long, Well I got an answer: it took Graphitty, E-Clipse, Nicca and Icey to get it done! tht shyt was funni. yall gotta admit xd They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... tht shyt was hella funni tho, but E got this... tht Bill Cosby shyt was gutter I felt as if it were less of a diss, especially to me, and more of a simple mention of Bill Cosby. The punchlines he attempted to construct were very weak, and his verse was mostly composed of him attempting to mention a few irrelevant names. Atleast I focused on dissing him with personals and stuff. razz But then again, you're his pal. He finished poorly as well. My last line was genius, taking into consideration the astrological references. His was just empty. u did end off hot, but what he said wasnt empty. it fell off on some parts, but they were all OBVIOUSLY directed towards you. cause, keep it real, no dissin intended, but when u and yo homebois came in here all yall did was critisizing folk left n right like Bill Cosby be doin. you was gettin him wit what i posted up there earlier and how you ended it, but erethang seemed empt to me... but thts just me I guess that means my verse was too intelligent. rofl More votes, folks!
If thats how U must interpret it, considering U think Ur better than evryone else. Sad... |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 6:59 pm
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Graphitty-King The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard?*** Most of the guild wondered why his post took so long, Well I got an answer: it took Graphitty, E-Clipse, Nicca and Icey to get it done! tht shyt was funni. yall gotta admit xd They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... tht shyt was hella funni tho, but E got this... tht Bill Cosby shyt was gutter I felt as if it were less of a diss, especially to me, and more of a simple mention of Bill Cosby. The punchlines he attempted to construct were very weak, and his verse was mostly composed of him attempting to mention a few irrelevant names. Atleast I focused on dissing him with personals and stuff. razz But then again, you're his pal. He finished poorly as well. My last line was genius, taking into consideration the astrological references. His was just empty. u did end off hot, but what he said wasnt empty. it fell off on some parts, but they were all OBVIOUSLY directed towards you. cause, keep it real, no dissin intended, but when u and yo homebois came in here all yall did was critisizing folk left n right like Bill Cosby be doin. you was gettin him wit what i posted up there earlier and how you ended it, but erethang seemed empt to me... but thts just me I guess that means my verse was too intelligent. rofl More votes, folks! If thats how U must interpret it, considering U think Ur better than evryone else. Sad... |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:53 pm
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The Legendary Makairo Graphitty-King The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy The Legendary Makairo Young_Droopy Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard?*** Most of the guild wondered why his post took so long, Well I got an answer: it took Graphitty, E-Clipse, Nicca and Icey to get it done! tht shyt was funni. yall gotta admit xd They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... tht shyt was hella funni tho, but E got this... tht Bill Cosby shyt was gutter I felt as if it were less of a diss, especially to me, and more of a simple mention of Bill Cosby. The punchlines he attempted to construct were very weak, and his verse was mostly composed of him attempting to mention a few irrelevant names. Atleast I focused on dissing him with personals and stuff. razz But then again, you're his pal. He finished poorly as well. My last line was genius, taking into consideration the astrological references. His was just empty. u did end off hot, but what he said wasnt empty. it fell off on some parts, but they were all OBVIOUSLY directed towards you. cause, keep it real, no dissin intended, but when u and yo homebois came in here all yall did was critisizing folk left n right like Bill Cosby be doin. you was gettin him wit what i posted up there earlier and how you ended it, but erethang seemed empt to me... but thts just me I guess that means my verse was too intelligent. rofl More votes, folks! If thats how U must interpret it, considering U think Ur better than evryone else. Sad... Don't be mad because I won.
I kno U won, my vote wasn't in need to be cast, but I'm just glad at the proven fact that EC isn't a s**t rapper like U thought. |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:10 pm
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I got Eclipse...he hat 6/10 hot bars...mak only had 3/10. Though mak ended with a good 2-3 bars...Eclipses was all around better...
Mak's highlight:
Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark,
You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard?
***** you're false, you're fake, your skills are fictional and pseudo,
The E-Clipse is about as real as the imaginary planet of Pluto,
I'll shatter the eclipse and announce this battle's over
And I bid the sun farewell - call this a Supernova.****
Eclipse's Highlight:
A bill cosby wannabe, it’s time he get cut down like a wooden block
I bet he’d like us if we gave his wack a** a pudding pop
That’ll make u stop critizing even though no one holds a small care
U might need 2 change ur Theories before I go call Claire
I got a gun! There’s a stereotype since that’s ur favorite topic
I got a desert flow, but Mak’s is more subtropic
They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me
They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky...
Mak basically whined about the time he was alottted, but chose 2 post his verse around 11, 13 hours b4 the due time. The majority of his verse was pure bitching and whining...
VOTE ECLIPSE
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:15 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:16 pm
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IceyPimp14 I got Eclipse...he hat 6/10 hot bars...mak only had 3/10. Though mak ended with a good 2-3 bars...Eclipses was all around better... Mak's highlight: Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard? ***** you're false, you're fake, your skills are fictional and pseudo, The E-Clipse is about as real as the imaginary planet of Pluto, I'll shatter the eclipse and announce this battle's over And I bid the sun farewell - call this a Supernova.**** Eclipse's Highlight: A bill cosby wannabe, it’s time he get cut down like a wooden block I bet he’d like us if we gave his wack a** a pudding pop That’ll make u stop critizing even though no one holds a small care U might need 2 change ur Theories before I go call Claire I got a gun! There’s a stereotype since that’s ur favorite topic I got a desert flow, but Mak’s is more subtropic They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... Mak basically whined about the time he was alottted, but chose 2 post his verse around 11, 13 hours b4 the due time. The majority of his verse was pure bitching and whining... VOTE ECLIPSE
E Clip!!!???!?!?
anyways... I'd have to agree wit Icey here... Mak didn't have that much in the way of disses as come paired to clipse here |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:19 pm
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C Teezy IceyPimp14 I got Eclipse...he hat 6/10 hot bars...mak only had 3/10. Though mak ended with a good 2-3 bars...Eclipses was all around better... Mak's highlight: Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard? ***** you're false, you're fake, your skills are fictional and pseudo, The E-Clipse is about as real as the imaginary planet of Pluto, I'll shatter the eclipse and announce this battle's over And I bid the sun farewell - call this a Supernova.**** Eclipse's Highlight: A bill cosby wannabe, it’s time he get cut down like a wooden block I bet he’d like us if we gave his wack a** a pudding pop That’ll make u stop critizing even though no one holds a small care U might need 2 change ur Theories before I go call Claire I got a gun! There’s a stereotype since that’s ur favorite topic I got a desert flow, but Mak’s is more subtropic They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... Mak basically whined about the time he was alottted, but chose 2 post his verse around 11, 13 hours b4 the due time. The majority of his verse was pure bitching and whining... VOTE ECLIPSE Sadly Ima vote for E-Clipse here also.. Mak You could have easily DESTROY THIS MAN ON NAME ALONE E Clip!!!???!?!? anyways... I'd have to agree wit Icey here... Mak didn't have that much in the way of disses as come paired to clipse here
VOTE MAK!! |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:27 pm
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C Teezy C Teezy IceyPimp14 I got Eclipse...he hat 6/10 hot bars...mak only had 3/10. Though mak ended with a good 2-3 bars...Eclipses was all around better... Mak's highlight: Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard? ***** you're false, you're fake, your skills are fictional and pseudo, The E-Clipse is about as real as the imaginary planet of Pluto, I'll shatter the eclipse and announce this battle's over And I bid the sun farewell - call this a Supernova.**** Eclipse's Highlight: A bill cosby wannabe, it’s time he get cut down like a wooden block I bet he’d like us if we gave his wack a** a pudding pop That’ll make u stop critizing even though no one holds a small care U might need 2 change ur Theories before I go call Claire I got a gun! There’s a stereotype since that’s ur favorite topic I got a desert flow, but Mak’s is more subtropic They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... Mak basically whined about the time he was alottted, but chose 2 post his verse around 11, 13 hours b4 the due time. The majority of his verse was pure bitching and whining... VOTE ECLIPSE Sadly Ima vote for E-Clipse here also.. Mak You could have easily DESTROY THIS MAN ON NAME ALONE E Clip!!!???!?!? anyways... I'd have to agree wit Icey here... Mak didn't have that much in the way of disses as come paired to clipse here Wait.. no.. no.. just noticed the power of Maks ending.. HE DID BLOW THIS MANS NAME OUT OF THE WATER!!! MWHAHAHAHA VOTE MAK!!
LOL, how U gon play tha ***** like dat? |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:30 pm
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Graphitty-King C Teezy C Teezy IceyPimp14 I got Eclipse...he hat 6/10 hot bars...mak only had 3/10. Though mak ended with a good 2-3 bars...Eclipses was all around better... Mak's highlight: Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark, You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard? ***** you're false, you're fake, your skills are fictional and pseudo, The E-Clipse is about as real as the imaginary planet of Pluto, I'll shatter the eclipse and announce this battle's over And I bid the sun farewell - call this a Supernova.**** Eclipse's Highlight: A bill cosby wannabe, it’s time he get cut down like a wooden block I bet he’d like us if we gave his wack a** a pudding pop That’ll make u stop critizing even though no one holds a small care U might need 2 change ur Theories before I go call Claire I got a gun! There’s a stereotype since that’s ur favorite topic I got a desert flow, but Mak’s is more subtropic They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... Mak basically whined about the time he was alottted, but chose 2 post his verse around 11, 13 hours b4 the due time. The majority of his verse was pure bitching and whining... VOTE ECLIPSE Sadly Ima vote for E-Clipse here also.. Mak You could have easily DESTROY THIS MAN ON NAME ALONE E Clip!!!???!?!? anyways... I'd have to agree wit Icey here... Mak didn't have that much in the way of disses as come paired to clipse here Wait.. no.. no.. just noticed the power of Maks ending.. HE DID BLOW THIS MANS NAME OUT OF THE WATER!!! MWHAHAHAHA VOTE MAK!! LOL, how U gon play tha ***** like dat? |
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:33 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:37 pm
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EC:
I wonder if Mak is gonna reply 2 my verse
Considerin that each word is a lyrical cusre
Make his respect ride away in a lyrical hurse
But I’m just preachin 2 the choir, time 2 take him 2 church
(Average)
Makairo know’s I’m g.o.o.d, and his homebois must testify
That I commonly make niggaz like him touch the sky
The light has shined on that dude so now I see through the darkness
He’s was once viewed as a rapper, now I see more of a pop artist
(Average)
A bill cosby wannabe, it’s time he get cut down like a wooden block
I bet he’d like us if we gave his wack a** a pudding pop
That’ll make u stop critizing even though no one holds a small care
U might need 2 change ur Theories before I go call Claire
(Thoughtful, and funni)
No need 4 a pause there, I’m just speakin facts…
U lion, so I say ******** all yal critiquing cats
(I like this one)
I got a gun! There’s a stereotype since that’s ur favorite topic
I got a desert flow, but Mak’s is more subtropic
(This was good)
It's the son, Eclipse, even when the sun get blocked you still go blind
Short term memory dont affect you cause u still remember my shine
They need 2 snoop 2 see the signs, their incorrect directions can’t stop me
They ride each others d**k, so of course they cocky... stare wack a** *****...
(I used a metaphor exactly like this last line once. Hmm.....LOL But I won't say U copied cuz it was a while ago sweatdrop )
TLK:
You need to improve your reading skills - your grammer is non-sense,
I could hardly make it through your verse without suggesting "Hooked On Phonics"
(Average)
A few bolded lines that his bitches will call wordplay
but you couldn't even think of what to type until the third day!*
(Filler)
Shaking in your Gaia gear, hoped to grab a victory
so unlike me, he gives a limit of time to post, 'cuz if I do - this niggas history,**
I don't need a flow or any tricks of the trade,
You and your e-boys are thugs? That's why your avi is the only one rocking a blade?
(Last line was clever, the rest was filler)
Nice profile, bro, pictures of yourself in the dark,
You trying to attract e-harmony males or just trying to make a baby face ***** look hard?***
Most of the guild wondered why his post took so long,
Well I got an answer: it took Graphitty, E-Clipse, Nicca and Icey to get it done!
(A shot at me? I hate it, but it was a good line stare )
They go "All for one and one for all"
So they all go down and deepthroat eachother's balls,
***** you're false, you're fake, your skills are fictional and pseudo,
The E-Clipse is about as real as the imaginary planet of Pluto,
I'll shatter the eclipse and announce this battle's over
And I bid the sun farewell - call this a Supernova.****
(I agree, very good ending)
FINAL JUDGEMENT:
-Mak's wasn't as good as he made it seem. There was a lot of average lines and filler, although some lines were kinda thoughtful. The ending was superb but it doesn't make up for the rest of the bars. hmmmm
-E-Clipse rapped on a lower level. No multis or nothing. No real good punches or things that made U think. Basic. But the punches were there, they weren't bad. Not far above average though. hmm...
-For some lines and the ending. Mak gets my vote BUT FOR THE RECORD, his ending isn't battle changing, it was just real clever, be real ppl....
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